Question 6 Title

Article

Stop Bullying

Bullying cases such as extortion, physical 1st paragraph – intro

attacks and verbal attacks are on the rise at
*use the situation presented in question
schools. Bullying can affect a child’s confidence and *Give example, present situation of the issue and your opinion
mental. In severe cases, bullying has caused some
of the victims to commit suicide. Therefore, we
must stop bullying from happening in schools and
help the victims so that they would not keep the
problem themselves.
If you are being bullied by your friends at 2nd paragraph
school, you must share your problem with your Being bullied – share with your friends
Topic sentence :
parents. Do not keep it to yourself as it could If you are being bullied by your friends in school, you must share
cause stress. Your parents will find ways to help your problem with your parents
you overcome your problem. Hence, always
consult your parents if you have any problem in Supporting details/elaboration:
Use wh questions to generate ideas
school.
Concluding statement :
Restate the topic sentence/main idea in other words.
When you see people are being bullied, always stand up for them. This is important as everyone
should play their part to stop this problem. If you turn a blind eye to bullying in school, this behaviour
would be considered normal for everyone. Standing up against bullies would also help the victims as they
were afraid to protect themselves from the bullies. So, starting from now, be brave to stand up against
bullies.
Next, school authorities should educate school students and school staffs about bullying. This can
be done by conducting awareness campaign for students so that they will know the negative effects of
bullying and the consequences that bullies would face if they are found guilty of bullying. Hence, educating
the students is important to stop bullying from happening.

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Conclusion
In a nutshell, we must tackle this problem immediately as it could leave a lasting physiological
effect on the victims. It is also a disciplinary problem that could disrupt teaching and learning process. Let
us work hand in hand to combat bullying.
 Question 6 Title
Article

Stop Bullying
1st paragraph – intro
Bullying cases such as extortion, physical attacks and
verbal attacks are on the rise at schools. Bullying can affect a *use the situation presented in question
*Give example, present situation of the issue and your
child’s confidence and mental. In severe cases, bullying has opinion
caused some of the victims to commit suicide. Therefore, we
must stop bullying from happening in schools and help the victims
so that they would not keep the problem themselves.
2nd paragraph
If you are being bullied by your friends at school, you Being bullied – share with your friends
must share your problem with your parents. Do not keep it to Topic sentence :
If you are being bullied by your friends in school, you must
yourself as it could cause stress. Your parents will find ways to share your problem with your parents
help you overcome your problem. Hence, always consult your
Supporting details/elaboration:
parents if you have any problem in school. Use wh questions to generate ideas

Concluding statement :
Restate the topic sentence/main idea in other words.
When you see people are being bullied, always stand up for them. This is important as everyone
should play their part to stop this problem. If you turn a blind eye to bullying in school, this behaviour
would be considered normal for everyone. Standing up against bullies would also help the victims as they
were afraid to protect themselves from the bullies. So, starting from now, be brave to stand up against
bullies.

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Conclusion
In a nutshell, we must tackle this problem immediately as it could leave a lasting physiological
effect on the victims. It is also a disciplinary problem that could disrupt teaching and learning process. Let
us work hand in hand to combat bullying.
 1. Form sentences from the notes

• The right friend is a good listener. (topic sentence)

• He or she will share their opinions to solve our problems. ( supporting detail 1)

2. Now add two or more supporting details and a concluding statement.

• The right friend will listen to our problem or whatever isues that we are facing. (
supporting detail 2)

• When we share our problem with someone that we can trust, we will feel relieved. (
supporting detail 3)

• He or she will always be with us through thick and thin. ( supporting detail 4)

• It is important to find a friend who is willing to listen to us. (concluding statement)

3. Now organise the ideas

The right friend is a good listener who is willing to listen to our problem or whatever issues
that we are facing. When we share our problem with someone that we can trust, we will feel
relieved. Moreover, he or she will share their opinions to solve our problem. A friend like this will
always be with us through thick and thin. Hence, it is important to find a friend who is willing to
listen to us.
1. Form sentences from the notes

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