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Remember The Battle
Remember The Battle
“UNTITLED”
“ANG ANSYAS” – THE WILL TO FIGHT
“ANG GAHUD” – NOISE OF FIGHT
“ANG GAMUHON”– THE BRAWLER
“MGA HANGAWAY”– THE WARRIORS
STORY BY
Steven Atenta
Cebu City, Cebu
SCREENPLAY BY
Steven Atenta
with
Diem Judilla
Email djudilla@yahoo.com
1.
The boy steps up to the house, then stops a few feet from
the front door. He does not go further.
He doesn’t wipe his face dry, allows the drops fall freely as
he unbuttons his polo.
The boy does what he can to wash clean the shoe prints
from the cloth.
(O.S.) Whack! The Old Man touches his shoulder then his
chest; the sound hurt him on injuries within him, deep and
ancient.
...that
leads out into THE YARD, where the Boy strikes the
tree with a stick. Whack! Whack!
The Clerk wipes sweat from his brow with a neatly folded
kerchief.
MEDIUM SHOT-- One of THE JURY gets up and calls for the
Clerk and the Fighter to get close together to his sides.
The Clerk and the Fighter step closer to face each other.
A LONG PAN-- the three men in the middle of the site. The
Juror takes out A BALLPEN and A CREASED DOCUMENT
from his backpocket; unfolds the paper.
The Juror talks into the Clerk’s ear as the Clerk carefully
folds his barong, strips his watch, spectacles and piles
these all on top of his folio case, which he places down on
the ground.
The Juror offers the pen and the paper for the Juror to
sign...
Fearless, the Juror stretches out one arm; straight and solid
like a bronze rod in the middle of the two men.
The Clerk and the Fighter step closer, place their bastons
on top of the Juror’s raised arm.
The Juror thrusts his arm skyward, parts the two other
sticks. The Fighter lunges forward and whips out a strike at
the Clerk.
The Fighter seizes and throws the Clerk down hard to the
ground.
CLERK’S P.O.V, CLOSE UP-- His baston lies a few feet away.
MEDIUM SHOT, TILT UP-- The Fighter jumps into the Clerk’s
sight with a downward strike!
The Fighter returns the favor; throws a punch with his other
arm; gets deflected by the Clerk.
MEDIUM SHOT-- The Clerk takes this moment and seizes his
baston.
BLOOD, thick like yolk, spills out and down the Fighter’s
face. This enrages him and he starts to get up again.
MEDIUM SHOT-- The Guru lifts the Fighter to his feet. The
Fighter’s face is all blood. He exhales a spray of mucus and
blood. There is no more fight in his eyes; no more spirit.
(O.S!) WHACK. The Old Man touches the brown long welt on
his bald dome; the wound of his loss so many years ago.
(O.S!) WHACK. WHACK! His eyes blink and now wide awake
with some spirit; a fighter’s glint shines.
THE YARD-- The boy raises his branch and strikes down
on the tree trunk. A BASTON dashes in and blocks the
blow. The Boy turns to his side...
The Old Man; THE BOY’S GRANDFATHER, stands by the
side him with the baston in hand.
The Old Man shows the boy how he holds the baston.
The boy studies the grip and reflects with his own hand.
The Old Man takes on the same stance as the boy and
performs one action; a basic strike,
he waits.
THE END!