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a black leather mother buys him gift certificate to use for buying one
jacket. an ugly vinyl
jacket. article of clothing. If possible, have
students look through clothing
Meet the Author
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Gary Soto writes poetry, fiction, they would and would not choose.
aand nonfiction. Soto was born in Have students tell why they prefer
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poetry. He began writing his own poems and soon won a =A//:38179@/7/8>
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Preview Selection Teaching AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL, 263
Vocabulary Words Words POETRY, 263
vinyl, 265 profile, 265 eyewitness, 263 SEQUENCE OF EVENTS, 263
swoop, 266 terrorist, 266 significant, 263 PLOT, 263
vicious, 268 gagged, 268 unfortunate, TONE, 265
mope, 268 eagerly, 268 269 CLUSTER CHART, 265
inclusion, 269 NARRATOR, 265
indicate, 269 SENSORY DETAIL, 265
CHARACTER, 265

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Gary Soto tells a story from his own

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youth. He recalls his enthusiasm for
getting a new jacket when he outgrew
his old one. Soto’s vision of the perfect
jacket was a black leather biker’s-style
jacket. Unfortunately, his mother had
different ideas. She surprised him with
an avocado-colored jacket with a
mustard yellow lining. Soto was
embarrassed to wear the jacket but
had no choice. In this humorous
memoir, he recounts the mishaps and
misfortunes of his middle school years, 78%6)(%8
all of which he blames on the fact that
he had to wear what he considered a 8,).%'/)8,
less-than-fashionable jacket.
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the end of
the story focus on the theme of
remembrance. Before they begin
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about their past. Are there
decisions that they would change,
knowing what they now know?

More by This Author


Students who like “The Jacket” might
enjoy other stories by Soto. Examples
include Taking Sides and Baseball in
April and Other Stories.

A Memoir by Gary Soto




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Planning and Assessment Meeting the Standards


Program Planning Guide, Selection Lesson Plan Nonfiction: Unit 3, Reading Model, pp. 19–27
E-Lesson Planner
Assessment Guide, Lesson Test
ExamView
Technology Tools
Interactive Student Text on CD
Visual Teaching Package
Quiz
Audio Library
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='038,)7,%:)*%-0)(1)I remember the green "
coat that I wore in fifth and sixth grades when you either danced like Analyze Literature
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a champ or pressed yourself against a greasy wall, bitter as a penny +24/7 <97A2+>:938>90 Autobiography Explain that an
toward the happy couples. @3/A3=>23=7/793<A<3>>/8 A autobiography is the true story of a
When I needed a new jacket and my mother asked what kind I person’s life written by the person.
wanted, I described something like bikers wear: black leather and The writer tells about events and
silver studs with enough belts to hold down a small town. We were situations that will be interesting to
in the kitchen, steam on the windows from her cooking. She listened readers. Have students brainstorm
so long while stirring dinner that I thought she understood for sure other experiences fifth and sixth
the kind I wanted. The next day when I got home from school, I graders have that might be interesting
discovered draped on my bedpost a jacket the color of day-old to retell in an autobiography.
guacamole. I threw my books on the bed and approached the jacket
slowly, as if it were a stranger whose hand I had to shake. I touched Analyze Literature
the vinyl sleeve, the collar, and peeked at the mustard-colored ;/@3>1 O©¼¶GJEadj.>9?12 Memoir Answer: It is written from
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lining. the first-person point of view. The use
From the kitchen mother yelled that my jacket was in the closet. of the pronouns I, we, my, and so on
I closed the door to her voice and pulled at the rack of clothes in the show that the memoir is written in the
closet, hoping the jacket on the bedpost wasn’t for me but my mean first person. A
brother. No luck. I gave up. From my bed, I stared at the jacket. I
wanted to cry because it was so ugly and so big that I knew I’d have Use Reading Strategies
to wear it a long time. I was a small kid, thin as a young tree, and it Visualize Answer: Details include
would be years before I’d have a new one. I stared at the jacket, like “color of day-old guacamole,”
an enemy, thinking bad things before I took off my old jacket whose “vinyl sleeve,” and “mustard-colored
sleeves climbed halfway to my elbow. lining.” B
I put the big jacket on. I zipped it up and down several times, "
and rolled the cuffs up so they didn’t cover my hands. I put my "8++'*/3- 97'9+-/+8 Use Reading Strategies
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hands in the pockets and flapped the jacket like a bird’s wings. I ./>+36=.9/=>2/+?>29<?=/>9 Visualize Ask students to listen as
stood in front of the mirror, full face, then profile, and then looked /@95/+7/8>+6:3->?</90>2/ you read aloud the first page. Tell
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over my shoulder as if someone had called me. I sat on the bed, B them to close their eyes and picture in
stood against the bed, and combed my hair to see what I would look their minds what you are reading.
like doing something natural. I looked ugly. I threw it on my Then ask students to open their eyes
brother’s bed and looked at it for a long time before I slipped it on and describe the main events they
and went out to the backyard, smiling a “thank you” to my mom as I visualized. Finally, have them record
passed her in the kitchen. With my hands in my pockets I kicked a in sketches and/or words events that
ball against the fence, and then climbed it to sit looking into the have happened so far in the story. As
alley. I hurled orange peels at the mouth of an open garbage can and students read on, continue to have
when the peels were gone I watched the white puffs of my breath them add notes on what they
thin to nothing. visualize.
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Reading Proficiency English Language Learning


Be sure students understand the beginning of the Read aloud the description of the jacket. Have
story. Use a reader’s theater approach with students students draw the jacket and use colored markers or
working in pairs. Have one student play the role of pencils to color it as described in the selection. Then
the mother and the other of the boy. Ask pairs to write the words jacket, sleeve, collar, and lining on
act out the events that happen on the first page. the board. Have students use these words to write
titles and captions for their drawings.

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I jumped down, hands in
Use Reading Strategies my pockets, and in the
Visualize Tell students that as they backyard on my knees I
visualize what is happening in a story, teased my dog, Brownie, by
one thing they can picture is the 8<445 LP¯Iv../=-/8. swooping my arms while
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expression on the character’s face. 79@/7/8>
making bird calls. He jumped
Model by reading aloud the sentences at me and missed. He jumped
telling about Brownie ripping the again and again, until a tooth
jacket. Look surprised and horrified sunk deep, ripping an L-
when you tell about the rip. Look shaped tear on my left sleeve.
depressed as you tell about sitting on
I pushed Brownie away to
study the tear as I would a cut
the bed with the ripped jacket. Reread
on my arm. There was no
the other incidents in the middle of
A blood, only a few loose pieces
the story. Have students imitate the
of fuzz. Dumb dog, I thought,
facial expressions they visualize. A
and pushed him away hard
Analyze Literature when he tried to bite again. I
Tone Answer: The writer uses an got up from my knees and
went to my bedroom to sit
informal, humorous tone. For example,
with my jacket on my lap,
he exaggerates the danger of Frankie
with the lights out.
T. by calling him a terrorist. He also
That was the first afternoon with my new jacket. The next day I
lists the offense of his best friend,
wore it to sixth grade and got a D on a math quiz. During the
Steve Negrete, as eating an apple
morning recess Frankie T., the playground terrorist, pushed me to
while looking at him, which is clearly the ground and told me to stay there until recess was over. My best
an innocent action that is taken as friend, Steve Negrete, ate an apple while looking at me, and the girls
offensive by the hypersensitive turned away to whisper on the monkey bars. The teachers were no
narrator. B "
help: they looked my way and talked about how foolish I looked in
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Suggest that students use their story 98>2/:6+C1<9?8.
B played kickball in a thin shirt, my arms feeling like Braille from
strip to keep track of events in the goose bumps. But when I returned to class I slipped the jacket on
story. Which events are important and shivered until I was warm. I sat on my hands, heating them up,
enough to include? Which events can while my teeth chattered like a cup of crooked dice. Finally warm, I
be left out? slid out of the jacket but a few minutes later put it back on when the
fire bell rang. We paraded out into the yard where we, the
sixth graders, walked past all the other grades to stand against the
back fence. Everybody saw me. Although they didn’t say out loud,

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English Language Learning Enrichment


List on the board any verbs you think may be Ask students to work in pairs. Have one student in
unfamiliar to students. For example, you may each pair role-play being Gary Soto as a sixth grader
include whisper, bob, shiver, chatter, and parade. and the other role-play being a guidance counselor,
Act out each word and discuss its meaning. Use the teacher, principal, or other person who is good at
word in a sentence. Then have students make up a advising young people. Tell Gary to explain his
sentence using each word. Have them act out the problems to the counselor. Ask the counselor to give
meaning as they share their sentence with the class. Gary advice.

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“Man, that’s ugly,” I heard the buzz-buzz of gossip and even laughter
that I knew was meant for me. Make Connections
And so I went, in my guacamole-colored jacket. So embarrassed, Answer: Answers will vary. A possible
so hurt, I couldn’t even do my homework. I received Cs on quizzes, answer might be that the student
and forgot the state capitals and the rivers of South America, our " feels sorry for the narrator because he
friendly neighbor. Even the girls who had been friendly blew away '0+433+)9/438 or she knows how it feels to be
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like loose flowers to follow the boys in neat jackets. +00/->C9?<0//6381=+,9?>>2/ laughed at. C
I wore that thing for three years until the sleeves grew short and 8+<<+>9<
C
my forearms stuck out like the necks of turtles. All during that time Analyze Literature
no love came to me—no little dark girl in a Sunday dress she wore Characterization Ask students:
on Monday. At lunchtime I stayed with the ugly boys who leaned “Gary says his mother was cheap. Do
against the chainlink fence and looked around with propellers of you think that was true? Why do you
grass spinning in our mouths. We saw girls walk by alone, saw
couples, hand in hand, their heads like bookends pressing air &0%1)8,%8 think Mrs. Soto bought the jacket?”
Have students discuss other details
together. We saw them and spun our propellers so fast our faces .%'/)8*36 from the story that relate to his
were blurs. growing up poor. D
I blame that jacket for those bad years. I blame my mother for 8,37)&%(
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her bad taste and her cheap ways. It was a sad time for the heart.
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With a friend I spent my sixth-grade year in a tree in the alley, Hyperbole Explain that when a writer
waiting for something good to happen to me in that jacket, which E wildly exaggerates something on
had become the ugly brother who tagged along wherever I went. purpose, he or she is using hyperbole.
And it was about that time that I began to grow. My chest puffed up Say: “When Soto says he spent his sixth
with muscle and, strangely, a few more ribs. Even my hands, those grade year in a tree in the alley with a
fleshy hammers, showed bravely through the cuffs, the fingers friend, do you think he really stayed
already hardening for the coming fights. But that L-shaped rip on the there the entire year? How does this
left sleeve got bigger, bits of stuffing coughed out from its wound statement affect the tone of the
after a hard day of play. I finally Scotch-taped it closed, but in rain
writing?” Have students find other
or cold weather the tape peeled off like a scab and more stuffing fell
examples of hyperbole in the
out until that sleeve shriveled into a palsied
arm. That winter the
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elbows began to crack and whole chunks of green began to fall off.
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stove with steamed-up glasses, and she said that there were children 37+1/=38>23=./=-<3:>3982/6:
Visualize Answer: Words that
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in Mexico who would love that jacket. I told her that this was describe the way the jacket looks now
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America and yelled that Debbie, my sister, didn’t have a jacket like
include: “stuffing coughed out from its
mine. I ran outside, ready to cry, and climbed the tree by the alley to
wound,” “Scotch-taped,” “tape peeled
think bad thoughts and watch my breath puff white and disappear.
off like a scab,” and “sleeve shriveled
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Description that use comparison. Then ask students to write


Tell students, “I am really enjoying Soto’s writing. their own description of a piece of clothing they
One reason is because he does such a good job of strongly like or dislike. Ask them to tell about size,
describing things. I like when he says his jacket was color, texture, and decorations. Encourage them to
the color of day-old guacamole. I can just picture an use comparisons in describing.
ugly gray-green color.” Ask students to point out
descriptions in the piece that they like. Point out the
comparisons Soto makes, such as “he was as thin as
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Use Reading Skills
Identify Cause and Effect Point out
that Soto thought he was unpopular
because of his ugly jacket. Ask: “Do
you think that is the real reason he
was unpopular? For what other reasons
might a person feel unpopular?” Point
out that there can be many reasons.
Have the class collaborate on a cause-
and-effect chart brainstorming some
reasons a middle school student might
not feel popular.

Analyze Literature
Memoir Answer: Students may say
the tone has grown more accepting or
less angry. A
But whole pieces still casually flew off my jacket when I played
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became so spotted that my brother began to call me “camouflage,”
IRRORS want to ask I flung it over the fence into the alley. Later, however, I swiped the
W INDOWS students to jacket off the ground and went inside to drape it across my lap and
write a 245+ F°Iv.,/16997C9< mope.
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I was called to dinner: steam silvered my mother’s glasses as she
divide students into discussion said grace; my brother and sister with their heads bowed made ugly
groups or lead a whole-class faces at their glasses of powdered milk. I gagged too, but eagerly ate
discussion about this question. " big rips of buttered tortilla that held scooped-up beans. Finished, I
Answer: Answers will vary. went outside with my jacket across my arm. It was a cold sky. The
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faces of clouds were piled up, hurting. I climbed the fence, jumping
something that would have -2+81/.=38-/>2/,/1388381 down with a grunt. I started up the alley and soon slipped into my
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totally changed their lives if it A jacket, that green ugly brother who breathed over my shoulder that
had gone differently. The day and ever since. 
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Divide the class into small groups. Have each


Reading Proficiency group brainstorm and list some questions they
Have students review their completed story strips. would like to ask Gary Soto. Have each group
Explain that the strips show details from the story. pass its questions to another group, which will
To be sure students have the big picture, help them then pretend to be the author and answer in the
create a statement of the main idea of the memoir way they think Soto would. Have groups
based on the story details they have recorded. share some of the questions and answers
with the class. Model a question: “What
other clothing item have you owned
that deeply affected your life?”

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1. (a) He wants a jacket like a biker’s,
black with lots of studs and belts.
(b) The narrator thinks the jacket is
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A+8>,9A.9/=>2/4+-5/>2/</-/3@/= .91,9/=>/+=381<9A83/2/6:>2/ jacket he wanted.
-97:+</>9>2/4+-5/>2/A+8>/. =3>?+>398B:6+38 2. (a) Answers may include he got Cs
+3=>=97/90>2/?809<>?8+>/>2381=>2+>  )2C.9/=8J>>2/8+<<+>9<>/6623=79>2/<>2+> and Ds on quizzes, was bullied and
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jacket caused any of these things.
Make Judgments
3'1>?+/9+7'9:7+ 3. (a) The narrator is unhappy
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?=/=>98/+8.A9<.-293-/>9/B:</==23=9<2/< “day-old
detail guacamole” can complain. He takes out his
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</-9<.=:/-303-./>+36=9</B+7:6/=90%9>9J=A9<. Brownie made things worse because
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detail
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detail her feelings or that he knows she
can’t replace the jacket.
5. The narrator still does not like his
jacket and sometimes tries to go
without it, but he has accepted the
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You can adapt this as a checklist for students to N Does the paragraph indicate a grasp of how
use as they write. Soto’s tone reveals his feelings? For further instruction, refer
N Does the paragraph give examples of how Soto students to the following extension
Creative Writing activity: Collaborative Learning:
creates the humorous tone?
N Is the diary clearly written from the perspective Compare Opinions, Exceeding the
N Does the paragraph indicate that the narrator’s
of a sixth grade boy? Standards: Extension Activities, p. 8.
feelings may have changed over time?
N Does the diary entry clearly set out the writer’s
feelings about getting rid of his old jacket and
buying a new one?
N Does the diary entry include original examples
of colorful language and hyperbole?

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