Professional Documents
Culture Documents
WORDING/ DESCRIPTIONS:
Bullets are too short…..use the entire line to ‘give yourself credit’ for what you did.
Bullet points should show how you added value. Quantify experiences if possible (Increased sales by
10%). Answer the question – “So What?” Show transferrable skills and accomplishments. How could
your work in this job be useful to the next job?
Reconcile your formal name and any derivation/nickname that you go by.
Scope statements/Job descriptions need work.
Degree = Bachelor of Science, Business Administration (every student earns the same degree)
If listing foreign languages, include English among your languages (they won’t know proficiency even
though your document is written in English).
Avoid use of same verbs in adjacent bullets. Use descriptive action verbs at the beginning of each line.
Don’t deviate from marketing yourself (e.g. when citing an award, give a description of the criteria for
earning it). If you have room, describe your leadership or volunteer experiences instead of just listing.
Writing an “Objective” is optional. If included- should not be vague. Indicate seeking internship/ full
time position, industry, and when you are available to begin (ex. summer 2017).
FORMATTING ISSUES