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Notes on Stanza 3
12. What is the poet describing in Stanza Three?
13. What does this tell us about Owen’s feelings about the event he witnessed, and the
effect of war on people’s lives?
14. Identify the language technique used in Line 16. How does it make the description of the
dying man more realistic?
Notes on Stanza 4
15. Who is the poet addressing in Stanza Four? Why does he do this?
16. Comment on the use of the word, “flung” in Line 18. What does it suggest about the
soldiers and the way the dying man is treated?
17. Choose a phrase from lines 17 to 23 that describes the dying soldier in a particularly
shocking or realistic way.
Quote the phrase and explain why you feel it is effective.
18. What is the poet’s message in the poem and how is it emphasised in the closing lines (25
to 29) of the poem?
Introduction
State the name of the text and the author
Summarize what the text is about
Explain what you will discuss in your essay
Paragraph One
Explain the meaning of the title of the poem and what, at first, it suggests about the
subject of the poem
Explain how the first two lines of the poem makes an impact on the reader in. Quote
the 2 similes used and explain what they tell us about the soldiers.
Discuss what the reader now understands the real tone of the title of the poem to be.
Paragraph Two
Discuss how the poet develops the description of the soldiers in lines 3 to 7. Provide a
quote to back up your answer. Identify and comment on the techniques used.
Explain what the poet describes in the closing lines of Stanza One and how this
emphasises our understanding of the soldier’s condition.
Paragraph Three
Explain how the pace of the poem changes at the start of Stanza Two. Use a quote to
back up your point. Explain how and why does the poet change the pace (Consider the use
of sentence structure and what it is imitating)
Identify the adjective used in Line 10 and explain why it is effective.
Paragraph Four
Explain what is being described in lines 10 to 14. Provide a quote to back up your
answer. Identify and comment on the techniques used.
Look at lines 13 to 14. How does Owen help us imagine his view of the event that is
described here.
Discuss how is the metaphor, ”I saw him drowning” an effective description.
Paragraph Five
Explain what the poet is describing in Stanza Three.
Discuss what this tell us about Owen’s feelings about the event he witnessed, and
the effect of war on people’s lives?
Quote the language technique used in Line 16. Explain how it makes the description
of the dying man more realistic.
Paragraph Six
Explain who is the poet addressing in Stanza Four and why he does this?
Comment on the use of the word, “flung” in Line 18 and what it suggests about the
soldiers and the way the dying man is treated.
Quote a phrase from lines 17 to 23 that describes the dying soldier in a particularly
shocking or realistic way and explain why you feel it is effective.
Explain the poet’s message in the poem and how it is emphasised in the closing lines
(25 to 29) of the poem.
Conclusion
Explain how well you feel Owen has described the reality of war. Choose a phrase you
think is particularly realistic or shocking in describing the experience of war. Explain why you
feel it is so powerful.