PERSUASIVE PARAGRAPH

The Internet is an enemy to students

Topic Sentence(s)
People might think that the internet has positive effects
in education.
Actually it’s not like that. There’re some down sides of
the internet.
[Main idea – internet has no positive effects in education]

Supporting Sentence 1
Firstly, it makes us think less.

Detail 1.1
There are the online tools and applications that help you
calculate things in no time.

Detail 1.2
We can use the search engine to get the answer we want.

Detail 1.3
We don’t even need to memorize information.

Detail 1.4
We just browse for the answers on the internet.

Supporting Sentence 2
Secondly, we can’t concentrate when we’re doing
homework or projects.

Detail 2.1
When working on those tasks, we need to look for
information on the internet.
Detail 2.2
We’ll be distracted by the blinking or pop-up
advertisements on the sites.
Detail 2.3
Most importantly, such distractions make our brain
absorb information harder.

Concluding Sentence
As you can see, the internet is totally an enemy to us.
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 It is better to stay at home during Covid-19 situation
Topic Sentence
Many people think that the Covid-19 situation is not serious. In fact, it is a
very serious situation around the world. People should stay home during
Covid-19 situation.

[Main idea - People should stay home during Covid-19 situation]

Supporting Sentence 1
One of the reasons we should stay at home during this crisis is because we
can help protect a lot people from getting infected by the virus.

Detail 1.1
When we stay at home, we will be able to protect ourselves from infecting
the Covid-19 virus.

Detail 1.2
Furthermore, we will also be able to protect our friends from getting
infected with the virus because they will not go out with us.

Detail 1.3
We can also make sure that our family members have less chance of
getting infected by the virus.

Supporting Sentence 2
Next, by staying at home, we can reduce the spread of the Covid-19 virus.

Detail 2.1
When we stay home, we do not meet a lot of people.

Detail 2.2
So, we will not be infected by the virus.

Detail 2.3
Even if we are infected by the Covid-19 virus, we will be able to stop the
virus from spreading to other people when we stay at home.
Concluding Sentence
In conclusion, we should stay at home during the Covid-19 crisis.