Running Head: PEER REVIEW

Peer Review on the “Key to success” paper

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Peer Review 2

Structure

The structure of the paper is excellent. There is a tittle, and an introductory paragraph on the

fundamental aspects of success, three body paragraphs that are discussing the keys to success

and a conclusion summarizing the discussed aspects. The paper also follows the correct

formatting. It is double spaced and aligned left following the required margin. The first lines of

every paragraph are also indented by a margin of 0.5.

Introduction

The essay starts by explaining the basics of success; therefore, it has the right hook and a

lead-in strategy. The background is also adequate because the author explains the aspects based

on a book and also lists the cited books. The author also uses illustrations of the respective

companies and the keys to how they succeeded. However, I can recommend the writer to

improve on the structure of the sentences to help the reader to understand easily.

Body paragraphs

The writer has clear body paragraphs. Following the chapters, the writer has given a clear

summary of the main topics with relevant examples and illustrations on how the companies

succeeded. The writer has also used their own words and paraphrased the cited illustration. The

only recommendation under this is also to improve on the sentence structure and grammar.

Conclusion

The conclusion is perfect. The writer summarizes the main points of the thesis on the keys to

success. The writer describes that it is all about changing the worst habits for the better. The

ending strategy is also good because the writer also makes a recommendation on the book to read

to know more about the keys to success.