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Paraphrasing

Paraphrasing: Restating Another Work in Your Own


Words

Prepared by Dr. Andree Swanson


AC Swanson Group, Highlands Ranch, CO

Academic Writing

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 What is paraphrasing?
 Why do we use paraphrasing?
 Citing your source
 Include the in-text or parenthetical citation

 No need to include page or paragraph number

 Reducing the number of quotes in a paper

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Question
 You’ve been asked to paraphrase a paragraph for a paper?
How do you do it?

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Answer
 You are turning the words that you read into your own
words.
 You avoid:
 Including your opinion

 Using a quote from the source

 It is as if you are translating the words from the


author’s to yours.

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Question
 You can easily put the section that you want to use in
quotes, cite the source, and then avoid plagiarism;
however, your faculty member says: “You need to avoid
too many long quotes”. So, what do you do?

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Answer
 You need to put the work in your own words

 Otherwise you are stealing someone else’s work

 A good paraphrase is exact, complete, and in your

own words

 You must cite your source

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 Remember… there is no new information in
the world
 Unless you are working on your doctoral
dissertation and coming up with new
concepts, theories, and material, you are
presenting someone else’s ideas in your
research paper or thesis.

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Think like an auditor…
What does this mean?
 It is your paper trail to your resource.
 If you find a citation within the text, you can be assured (if
done right), that there will be a corresponding reference
on your Works Cited (MLA) or Reference (APA) page.

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Here is an example using an exact quote

 The teacher entered into a contract with the school


district to work at a specific school. “The classical
definition of a contract is a legally binding
agreement made between two or more person”
(Carby-Hall, 2003, p. 24).

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Here is an example using a paraphrase

 The teacher entered into a contract with the school


district to work at a specific school. A contract is a
compulsory agreement between at least two
people. A contract can be held up in court. It is a

legal document (Carby-Hall, 2003).


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The teacher entered into a  Note that the page or
contract with the school paragraph number is
district to work at a specific not included when you
school. A contract is a paraphrase.
compulsory agreement
between at least two
people. A contract can be
held up in court. It is a legal
document (Carby-Hall,
2003).

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 Essentially the ONLY time that  makes a statement that you
cannot reasonably paraphrase,
you should use a quotation is
 or makes a statement that you
when your source states:
want to argue against in
 an opinion that someone may
considerable detail.
question,
 presents a vivid description of a
personal feeling or personal
historical event,
 defines a term,

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 Pay attention to how many quotes that you use.
 If more than 5-10% of your paper consists of
quotations, you must have very sound justification
for having so many quotes.
 Avoid placing one quote after another.

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 Scholarly journals normally indicate that if more
than 30% of the information in your paper comes
from any single source, then you must co-author
your paper with that other author.
 This is a major reason that you must use more than

one source for your paper and/or presentation.

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 Avoid the temptation to read an article and copy that
author's thought pattern (ideas) into your own paper.
 This is similar to creating a computer program that has a
similar look and feel" to another program without obtaining
permission.
 Many companies have lost millions of dollars for such acts.
 The written version is called plagiarism and also has cost
authors their reputations and/or substantial lawsuit
settlements.

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When in doubt, ask your faculty member.

He/she will be able to coach you through the

process of paraphrasing.

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