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Final Tpol Essay 2
Final Tpol Essay 2
In the same vein, the work that I am the proudest of this year is definitely my mask
essay. I began this project by making a “shifty” first draft. To be honest, I thought the first draft
resembled garbage. After the 3rd or 4th draft, however, I was starting to really enjoy the work I
had created because I poured a countless number of hours into the essay. I worked hard
because I wanted to use the freedom I had been given to say something important about my
socialization. When I completed draft number seven I was immensely relieved because it was
my final draft. I am most proud of the evidence I gave for my claims as it was 100 percent
honest and meaningful. For example, one of my claims was how I had been socialized through
my food allergies. I started with a ton of evidence, but in my mind, the key evidence that I
stated was that I was socialized to always be careful of what I eat. My food allergies (and their
effect on my life today) is crucial to me because if I eat something I am allergic to it could
possibly be fatal. Another huge reason I am proud of my work is because of the vulnerability I
showed in my essay. I had really never written about my personal problems or shared them
with my class. For example, I wrote about my parents divorcing at a young age, and how that
affected my life. It made me feel very open and trusted as Animas’s culture implements that.
Finally, the last thing I was proud of was the revisions, and the amount of time I spent making
the essay a beautiful piece of work that I was proud of. The final draft showed an immense
amount of effort, and it was the best essay I had ever written. I am proud that I worked
diligently, and I definitely believe that it was the most effort I have ever used in a single essay or
humanities project. I also showed that I cared during the project as I worked extremely hard.
Most importantly I am extremely proud of the work I made.
To wrap up this year, I wrote an essay. If you knew me at the beginning of the year, this
very choice is insane. In the past I despised writing or doing anything that involved writing. This
goes to show that Animas has changed me into a better student, as I now am way more
open-minded. More importantly, I have learned how to solve my problems independently. This
has helped me be more independent in my work and only ask for help when extremely needed.
I have learned to advocate for myself. Advocation is one of the biggest roles of my success at
Animas and I am so lucky to be able to use that skill every day. Lastly, Animas really helped me
be proud of the work I create. I say this because usually most of the work I create at Animas is
very genuine, and Animas has helped me understand and commemorate that.