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nature, as well as its indifference, all while giving a particular focus to young women in Persian
society. His depiction of the poverty-stricken lives of these “Eight-year-old girls” within the
confines of a room that is “bare but for blackened pots and jars” through the use of various literary
devices evokes a sense of guilt and sympathy.
The fact that the poet puts deliberate emphasis on the carpet in the title in a poem where she is
highlighting the oblivion of the people who fail to recognise the cumbersome work that is put in
making these carpets is highly ironic. The title’s focus on the tangible outcome of a carpet reflects
the consumer’s, who fail to see the suffering that goes behind. It feels as if Burges is trying to mock
these consumers by indicating that they are inhumane to be blinded by this cruelty. While these
consumers may detect the ‘speaking darkness’ in the ‘large eyes’ of the workers, there is no evidence
that they actually go on to do something about it. This characterization of a passive
acknowledgement rather than a proactive stance of the persona to the injustice that these girls face
highlights the overarching irony of the poem. The persona seems to be indifferent as long as he/she
is getting the carpet.
In the first few lines, the poet sets the backdrop of a room filled by ‘Rough timber gallows’. Not
much is known about the workers except that they are a ‘silent, sallow and dark-eyed Persian
family’. The repeated ‘s’ and ‘l’ sounds help to create a sombre and slightly ominous atmosphere,
indicative of the idea that their silence might indicate that they are hiding something (which
becomes clearer later). This image though, is contrasted immediately with the ‘Lights on the
jewelled arabesques’ which visually pops up in the reader’s mind and causes the reader to
momentarily forget that this ‘exquisite’ light is ‘Shadowing’ the makers of the carpet. Even the
characterization of their workplace as a ‘cavernous hearth’ probably indicates that they are secluded
from the eyes of society, hidden in a dark void of a cave with just a ‘flickering fire’ which helps
them make their carpet. Through employing the overpowering light imagery, Burges shows that
these material object appeal instantaneously and are lucrative to the extent to which light, instead
of making things clearer, blurs the reality of this family for the reader
The next few lines introduce ‘the makers of the webs’. At the point at which the reader finds out
that these are ‘Eight-year old girls’, he/she is taken aback, as he/she realises the heinous act that is
being committed here. The alliterative sounds of ‘s’, ‘b’ and ‘r’ that follow thereafter create a
rhythm which causes the reader to go over those lines quickly, probably mirroring the seamless way
in which this act is carried out, thereby intensifying its cruelty. Furthermore, the fact that these
young girls are ‘Bent like old women’ disturbs the reader even further, who is, by now, angered by
this injustice The image that they have now become ‘old women’ could indicate that these girls will
never be able to enjoy their childhood and/or youth and have almost sublimed to old age, working
all their lives and now approaching death. The ‘unsupported bird-bones’ might indicate the
crouched shoulder blades of these girls, with the animal reference of birds appropriately portraying
the torturous, inhumane fate of the girls. The tradition of this task is then conveyed, when the
persona claims that this is ‘left by their aunts and sisters’, after which he/she portrays his/her
displeasure with this custom when claiming that these ‘little fingers’ are tying ‘One-hundred knots
in the space of my thumb nail’. The visualization of this task seems painful to the reader, and with
the girls’ one hundred knots of hard work only amounting to a trivial area on a thumb nail, the
reader is bound to sympathise with them and recognise their effort.
The phrases ‘heart-beats of a young child’s growing’ and ‘hours for the space a foot will crush
down’ suggest that child labour is not only slavery, but also a form of robbery as the author
intensifies the loss of childhood while mitigates the trade-off for which this is done. At this point,
the reader is truly dejected.
There is a subtle shift at this point in the poem. The prolonged sound of ‘O’ highlights the
melancholy of the persona after which the speaker poses a question to pause the readers and let
them digest this key message he puts forth: that of the ‘world weaving’. This probably refers to
tradition and its continuity, and the speaker plays on the word ‘woven’ to depict how strictly
bound the lives of these makers are, while simultaneously asks if there is a way for them to get out
of this misery.
The last two lines illustrate the tourist’s interaction with the young girl. There is an element of
touch, as the persona’s ‘swollen hand is gentle on the greenstick shoulders’. The swollen hand
might be a symbol of an inflated ego, and the fact that he is ‘gentle’ probably suggests that he is
aware of the worker’s state. The last line is powerful. The ‘speaking darkness’ not only relates back
to the initial image of darkness, but also portrays the cyclical nature of the poem, much like the
cyclical nature of poverty and tradition. As such, this phrase poignantly embeds the image of these
‘large eyes’ in the reader’s mind.
In the end, the poet does not give an answer to his question, much like the fact that he never
explains his inaction towards child labour. At large, the poem depicts the inescapable continuity of
tradition, indicating that despite its flaws, it continues smoothly and uninterruptedly.