Professional Documents
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Handbook
2016/17
School of the Built Environment
Revisions
3.0 Dissertation 22
3.1 Dissertation Brief 22
3.2 Development of your Dissertation 23
3.3 Dissertation Assessment Criteria and Grade Descriptors 25
3.4 Dissertation Submission Requirements 26
3.5 Dissertation Feedback Arrangements 26
3.6 Dissertation Assessment Criteria and Grade Descriptors 27
3.7 Dissertation Technical Regulations 29
Appendices
Appendix A Research Proposal Feedback Pro-forma 36
Appendix B Dissertation Feedback Pro-forma 38
For full time (“FT”) students the Research Phase is one trimester long, and for part time (“PT”) or distance learning
(“DL”) students the Research Phase is two trimesters long.
Completion of the first assessment, the Research Proposal, will help you to refine a research focus and to make a
justified selection of your chosen research pathway. The second assessment, the Dissertation, is where you
additionally record and implement your research plan and produce your final work.
The role of the Supervisor is to act as a sounding board for your initial ideas, to assist with the design and
preliminary approval of an ethical research process and then to provide guidance and support throughout the
process (both Research Proposal and Dissertation).
Students are responsible for selecting their own research topic, though you may seek guidance from your
Supervisor. The chosen research topic must be relevant to your MSc programme.
Students are required to maintain regular contact with their Supervisor between the start of the module and the
submission of their assessed work. It is the student’s responsibility to approach the Supervisor to schedule regular
and mutually manageable opportunities for discussion and input. Students must plan ahead and schedule in
appropriate time for supervisors to provide input and support.
We provide support to FT students on campus, and to DL students using Collaborate Ultra (which will additionally
be recorded as an archive). PT students are expected to attend the campus-based sessions with the full time
students.
1.5 Timings
This may have Visa implications for FT students. The School’s position is that overseas on-campus students doing a
resit should ordinarily return to their home country and will therefore not be eligible for extended Visas. This is
because:
SoBE students do not generally require the use of laboratory or other facilities which are
only accessible by being physically in the UK;
Any supervisory activity which is desired can be carried out via technological means.
If a student considers that despite the above, an extension to a Visa is appropriate, they will need to make a case
for why there are exceptional circumstances to remain in the UK. Such a case will require evidence and it is
suggested that students consult with AskUs at University House.
FT & FTDL- Start Research Feb 2017 3 March 2017 5 May 2017
FT & FTDL - Start Research June 2017 7 July 2017 15 September 2017
All work will be marked at the Assessment point. Research Proposals will be marked within 15 working days of the
assessment point and feedback provided. Dissertations will be marked in time for the Board of Examiners meeting
immediately following the assessment point, and feedback will be released after the relevant Board of Examiners
meeting (not within 15 working days). Penalties apply for late submission of work – see Section 4.
You will need to work to your end date which has been already provided to you. Research Proposal submission
opportunities are available on any of the above research proposal submission dates, provided that you do not
submit beyond your formal end date.
Where a students ability to undertake or submit an assessment is seriously affected by personal mitigating
circumstances (PMC) the student may submit a request that their PMC be taken into consideration is respect of late
submission of assessed coursework (up to 4 days late), non submission of coursework, or non attendance at
scheduled assessment events. You will be required to a PMC Form and submit relevant evidence within 10 days of
the assessment point. It is important that you fully read and understand the procedure and seek appropriate
advice:
http://www.salford.ac.uk/university/governance/policies-and-procedures/browseby-theme/2
This assessment constitutes 25% of the marks for the 60 Credit Dissertation
The stated Aims of this element of the module are to provide opportunity for students to:
Develop and refine effective research aim and objectives on the basis of a detailed analysis and review of
alternative research strategies and research techniques, applying appropriate selection criteria to reach a
justified and justifiable selection of research approach
Assignment Task
You should submit to Turnitin a SINGLE word compatible document which incorporates both of the following
elements:
A. The Declaration on Conduct of Assessed Coursework (a copy is available on the Blackboard Module)
B. A research proposal of approximately 3,000 words which provides an overview of a piece of research which
you would wish to undertake for your dissertation. The requirements as to structure and content are set
out below in Section 2.2 ‘Developing Your Research Proposal’
Assessment criteria
Your proposal will be assessed against the criteria set out on the table below. You will note that these criteria are
organised into groups, and a mark weighting is applied. Evidently, if your Research Proposal fails to address one (or
more) of the groups of criteria, you will receive no marks for the group(s) you have missed. This can have a very
serious impact on the overall mark you receive, so make sure you address every criterion in your submission. This
should be straightforward; simply ensure that your proposal follows the structure set out in Section 2.2
‘Developing Your Research Proposal’.
Review of the focal What are the focal literature and key texts that should be reviewed in the
literature dissertation (bearing in mind the aim and objectives of the research)? Is
there sufficient demonstration of a critical review (analysing and evaluating
20%
the literature) of the focal literature rather than merely describing the
literature? Has an appropriate range of sources been cited, including
research journal articles?
Research Strategy Is there a discussion as to which strategy(s) will be adopted, and has the
chosen strategy been justified? Is there sufficient detail of the
implementation of the strategy in relation to the proposed research? For
example, if case studies are to be used – how many and why? Which case 25%
studies and why? How will access to information be achieved? Is there
sufficient evidence of reading of research methods texts?
Practical Is the chosen technique(s) appropriately justified? Is there an understanding
Implementation of potential problems that may arise in administering the technique(s), and
are there realistic strategies to minimise the impact of any potential
problems? Is there sufficient evidence of reading of research methods texts?
25%
Is there an appropriate discussion of the range of data that will be generated
from the research techniques? Is there an appropriate discussion of how this
data will be analysed? Is there sufficient evidence of reading of research
methods texts in order to understand and justify how to analyse data?
Ethical considerations Have ethical implications of the research been appropriately considered?
References Is the Research Proposal presented using the University approved method of
referencing? Is further work required on referencing technique? 10%
Presentation Is the level of spelling and grammar appropriate for masters level work?
Grade Descriptors
0% 10% 20% 30% 40% 50% 60% 70% 80% 90%
to to to to to 49% to 59% to to to to
9% 19% 29% 39% 69% 79% 89% 100%
Extremely poor
Unsatisfactory
Outstanding
Satisfactory
Inadequate
Very good
Very poor
Excellent
Research Strategy
Good
Poor
Practical Implementation
The University uses an electronic plagiarism detection tool service called Turnitin® which is hosted by iParadigms (a
US company). The University has been using the Turnitin® service for all assessments which students are required
to submit by electronic means starting in the academic year 2010/2011. By registering with the University you
consent to the following:
a) The University will submit your assessments (including details of your name and course details) to the
Turnitin® service so that your assessments can be compared with the database of submissions that is maintained by
the Turnitin® service and that is drawn from various sources including the internet; and
b) Your assessments may be stored in that database of submissions indefinitely (or until the University stops
using the Turnitin® service and requests their deletion) to help protect your assessments from future plagiarism.
Where there is a match between content in your assessments and content in other submissions, then your
assessments may also be copied by the University and other users of the Turnitin® service to allow closer analysis.
http://www.turnitin.com/en_us/training/student-training
http://www.salford.ac.uk/skills-for-learning/home/assessment-revision-and-exams/esubmission
Your Research Proposal must follow the standard set of sections shown in the figure below, which are then
explained in more detail below. These sections also map against the weighted marking groups described in
section 2.1 above.
Please note that it is a condition of all MSc programmes that your dissertation topic relates to your programme of
study. Accordingly, we require you to make a brief statement (no more than 1 paragrapg) explaining how your
chosen topic relates to your MSc programme.
The “summary” part should rapidly make clear what you are proposing to do. It will be short, just setting out in
summary form what you are proposing to do. There should be no introduction or abstract. In the second section,
you provide your brief, substantiated justification of why you are proposing to do this research, together with
contextual information about the topic area, in both cases supported by relevant academic literature. The third
section is where you demonstrate your understanding of the various research strategies available, and make your
reasoned selection of the one you are going to use, all based on engagement with the research methods literature.
In the fourth section you explain practically what you are going to do, and how you are going to analyse any data
you acquire. This again needs to be based on the research methods literature as appropriate. The final section is
where you explain the ethical aspects of your research and how, in summary, you will tackle them. This is
additional to your ethical approval application, which is described in Section 2.3 below.
Gray (2004) is available as an e-book: search using SOLAR via the Student Channel http://students.salford.ac.uk/.
Working title
This is a ‘working’ title because it will be refined as the research is undertaken; rarely does research go exactly
according to plan. A good working title is relatively short (not exceed 10 words), simple so that a reader can easily
understand it, and it should provide an understanding of the breadth / scope of the study. Example working titles
are:
The title is likely to be a summary of the Aim of the work. Avoid introductory phrases like ‘to undertake a study of…’
‘An investigation of…….’ Imagine it as if you were talking to a stranger about what your research is about so that
they can understand what it is about. Just keep it short and simple!
A good aim is fairly focussed such that you demonstrate that you have narrowed down the topic to something that
is do-able and manageable. An example of an aim is:
to investigate the impact that poorly designed buildings have on the lives of disabled people [example
1]
Note that Example 1 is fairly broad and to effectively assess the impact would probably take 5 years of assessing a
considerable number of buildings and interviewing many people. A way to narrow and make more manageable
would be to further define it, so possibly:
to investigate the barriers that people face in accessing poorly designed buildings [example 2]
We’ve narrowed Example 2 to exclude looking at ‘impact on lives’ by focusing on ‘barriers’ rather than everything
to do with a person’s life;
to investigate the barriers that wheelchair users face in accessing poorly designed buildings [example 3]
In Example 4 we’ve narrowed the focus of the ‘subject’ and the focus of the ‘context’.
Formulating the Aim as a statement is not the only approach that can be taken. An alternative is to consider it as a
question or a hypothesis. This type of approach can be helpful in scoping out an area and looking at a topic from
different perspectives, and helping you towards the creation of the wording of your overall Research Aim.
Gray (2004: p68-75) discusses good and bad questions and the difference between a question and a hypothesis.
Kerlinger (1986) suggests that a good question expresses a relationship between variables, is unambiguous, and
ends in a “?” Gray (2004, p.70) adds to this by classifying questions into 4 main types, namely:
Correlation – what is the relationship, and the strength of this relationship between variable x and
variable y?
what is the relationship between gender, academic performance and university drug use?
In contrast an Aim may be a ‘conjectural statement of the relationship between two or more variables’ (Kerlinger
1986, p.17). In this case it is strictly speaking a hypothesis, and it would be normal for the variables involved to be
measurable. Gray (2004, p.73) gives an example of a research question being ‘Why is street crime more common in
inner city areas?’, but if this were written as a hypothesis (to be proved or disproved) an example would be ‘High
levels of street crime in inner city areas are a product of liberal policing policies’.
Avoid having to write a summary paragraph beneath the Aim that explains it. The Aim needs to stand on its own
two feet! If you need to write a summary paragraph then it means that your aim is weak, so don’t write the
paragraph, sort out why the Aim is not working properly.
Objectives
Objectives are one of the more difficult aspects of developing the proposal for your research. This is partly because
you need to know exactly what you want to research in order to write robust objectives, and partly because the
textbooks talk about objectives differently. Gray (2004, p. 73) refers to the writing of objectives as ‘quite
challenging’ and he refers to them as ‘operational definitions’ rather than as objectives.
Essentially objectives are statements of intended outcomes from the research, not written as questions or
hypotheses, but written as statements, that is “To …”. So in effect they are written as a list of how you intend to
break your Aim (what) into discrete, complementary, achievable steps. An aim would typically have about five or
six objectives to support it. They should make up a logical set. As a very loose guide:
it is quite normal for the first objective to focus on understanding the context issues to the study
(probably to be achieved primarily via the literature);
Developing objectives tends to be an iterative process. So, you may do a first draft right at the start, to give
yourself some direction. Then you may do some deeper reading and begin to put together your literature review
and also to think about what is the right way (research strategy) to achieve your objectives. As that process
continues, you are likely to refine your objectives. Indeed, what sometimes happens is that by thinking more
deeply about your objectives, you discover that the objectives are simply too challenging to achieve (i.e. they are
not SMART), and this leads you to go back and narrow your Aim, in order then to have more manageable (SMART)
objectives.
Of course, when you deliver your Research Proposal, you will present it as a clear, linear process, even though it
developed out of a messy process of to-ing and fro-ing (and despite the fact that, as the foundation for your
dissertation, it may still, after submission, develop and be refined.)
An example of a ‘good’ aim and objectives, anonymised from a real students’ work, are set out below. We provide
this to illustrate what we are talking about, and to provide you an opportunity to reflect on what an Aim is, and
how Objectives flow from it. This is not, however, an exemplar to copy in itself, since every piece of research is
different.
Example:
Aim
To examine how people, who have retired from driving because of disability and / or age-related impairments, find
out about, and gain confidence in using, alternative forms of transport.
Objectives
1. To review national and international provision of support for people retiring from driving
2. To review national policy on accessibility of transport
3. To examine the local transport strategy re accessibility in X City
4. To examine the experiences of people living in X City who have retired from driving
5. To scope the need for personal travel training in this sector of the population
6. To make recommendations to the transport department of X City Council and national / international
policy makers
Please note the features of this Aim and these Objectives. The Aim carves out a specific area of enquiry and
identifies precisely what it is the student is seeking to discover. Reflect on each Objective. Each one identifies a
specific, and manageable, discrete process of investigation, each follows from the previous one and you can see
Justification
This is the first part of the section of the Research Proposal which sets out why you are planning to do what you’ve
just said (in the first part) you’re going to do. Here you need to succinctly justify why there is a need for the
research, as opposed to it just sounding like an interesting idea. For this you should employ some key references to
evidence things like: there is an unresolved research issue; it affects a lot of people / involves a lot of money; and /
or is currently of significant interest owing to developments in policy or practice. This should be a powerful
summary argument, which will be expanded upon in the Review of the Focal Literature.
According to Hart (2001, p.21) the challenge to undertaking a successful literature search is to:
Plan – understanding the ways in which information is organised and made available;
Maintain records;
Extract information from useful sources, including the main arguments, theories, concepts and
definitions.
A literature search is easy if the aim of the research is robust and clearly defined. A poor literature search is
typically a result of an ill-defined aim such that there is too much information to search, it is too time consuming,
and you experience information overload. So a robust aim and a methodical approach to undertaking the search
are important. Gray (2004) has a good section on literature searching under ‘locating the literature’ pages 44 to 52.
The University has a considerable number of databases that you can use for undertaking a search which work on
the basis of identifying appropriate keywords and the type of material you want from the search – newspaper
articles, magazine articles, expert opinion, reports, and very importantly, refereed research journal articles. Most of
these databases can be accessed from outside the University (off-campus), with appropriate passwords.
Training and direction in relation to Library Resources has been offered throughout your studies, and by this stage
you should feel comfortable that you know where to look and how to find appropriate material. Details of the
databases are available from the Library’s SOLAR web site, and if you need specific guidance in addition to the
support provided there, then please get in touch with Library staff, or your Supervisor.
Having found a number of pieces of literature, the important next step is to see how this literature can inform your
thesis, and for this you need to undertake a critical review. Poor literature reviews tend to be descriptive or
In discussing the last bullet point, Gray (2004, p.54) picks up the phrase ‘gradual refinement’ by explaining that in
undertaking a critical literature review you should be ‘touring the literature, but also pausing to focus on areas that
have emerged as important’ gradually refining the discussion ‘down to a set of core issues and arguments’.
The above bullet points should not be used as headings within your literature review section, they are more useful
as a set of questions to ask yourself when you have completed the review.
In terms of presenting the focal literature within the proposal, remember a small selection of the focal literature
review will be summarised in the Justification section, as mentioned above.
Research Strategy
We address the explanation of Research Strategy and of Practical Implementation separately in this document,
since the assessment criteria and mark weightings do value them discretely, and you will need to deal with them in
separate, if sequential, parts of your Research Proposal. However, the two aspects do need to mesh together into
a coherent whole, and your consideration of both aspects needs to be founded on clear and effective engagement
with methodology literature.
The “general” approach taken in research is commonly referred to as the “research strategy” (Robson 1993, p.42).
This must be an appropriate response to the characteristics of the subject matter of the research (encapsulated in
the Aim and Objectives). The discussion of the research strategy to be adopted must draw on the research
methodology literature and provide a strong justification for the chosen approach. This should include explicit
consideration of a range of alternatives and the strengths and weaknesses of the approach chosen versus at least
one or two competing approaches.
At the broadest level you should consider epistemological issues inherent in the topic area selected for study. Are
the issues technical and broadly speaking capable of objective measurement (positivist stance) or are they social
and can there legitimately be multiple perspectives of what is happening (critical realist stance)? What is the
current level of knowledge about the topic; thus is the emphasis on creating new theory (inductive approach) or
testing an existing theory (deductive)? Answers to these questions will flavour, and justify the more detailed
choices then to be made.
Moving to the main choices available, textbooks do vary in their terminology and how they classify options. ‘One
simple approach, which is widely used, distinguishes between three main strategies: experiments, surveys and case
studies’ (Robson 1993). Note that Robson (1993, p.41) goes on to suggest that ‘the three strategies do not provide a
logical partitioning covering all possible forms of enquiry ….. and also it can make a lot of sense to combine
strategies’ for some research questions. It could be that specific methods rise to the challenge of particular
objectives and together make up a robust “multi-methods” methodology where the different approaches
“triangulate” and complement each other. This can be a good approach in theory, but may be too much for a
dissertation project – but you could still consider it and explicitly decide not to take this more complex approach!
Experiment – measures the effects of manipulating one variable on another variable; typically
undertaken in a controlled environment such as a laboratory, but can also be applicable to research
undertaken outside of a traditional laboratory environment for example in natural settings. Typical
features (Robson 1993, p.40) are:
o selection of samples of individuals from known populations;
o allocation of samples to different experimental conditions;
o introduction of planned change to one or more of the variables;
o control of other variables;
o usually involves hypothesis testing.
Surveys – collection of information in a standardised way from groups of people. Typical features
(Robson 1993, p.40) are:
o Selection of samples of individuals from known populations;
o Collection of relatively small amount of data in standardised form from each individual;
o Typical techniques are questionnaire, interview.
Case study – development of detailed or intensive knowledge about a single case or a small number of
related cases. Typical features (Robson 1993, p.40) are:
o Selection of a single case or small number of cases;
o Study of the case in its context / setting;
o Collection of information from a range of techniques including observation, interview and
documentary analysis. (Note also that use of questionnaire techniques in case study strategies
is becoming increasingly common).
In the Research Strategy section, you define your overall research approach, and give a justification for why that
that general approach is appropriate for seeking an answer to your Aim / Objectives. There should be no discussion
of research techniques (questionnaires, interviews, etc) in this section; this comes in the next section on
implementation.
Practical implementation
In this section, you look in more detail at the practicalities of what you will be doing. Having made the main
theoretical arguments for how the research is to be approached above, you should then set out the practical steps
to be taken to implement the strategy in relation to the proposed research. These should flow naturally from the
sections above and will provide practical details to be actioned. For example, if case studies are to be used – how
many and why? Which case studies and why? How will you secure access to the information? Or, if a survey is
being proposed, then: what is the sampling frame? How will respondents be contacted? How are the questions
being justified? How many responses are aimed for? What will be done about non-response?
Nesting within these choices are the next set of decisions about the tools or techniques you will use to collect
information to inform your research strategy. Sometimes they are referred to as ‘tactics of enquiry’, or research
instruments or data collection methods. Typically four techniques are generally referred to (Gray 2004, Robson
1993) namely questionnaires, interviews, observation, and unobtrusive measures such as archive analysis, audits.
Again the choice of technique depends on the Aim/ Objectives of the research / being addressed such that
appropriate techniques are used to ensure that the research outcomes are valid.
A good Research Proposal will discuss the technique(s) to be used, and will justify why this technique(s) is
appropriate for the research strategy adopted. The Research Proposal will also identify possible problems that may
arise in administering the technique(s), identifying strategies to minimise the impact of any potential problems.
Once you have the collected the data you will have to analyse it. You should continue your imaginary journey into
this stage as it can make a big difference to how you approach the data collection. For example, open-ended
questions are easy to ask in a survey, but can be very time-consuming for respondents (possibly lowering the
response rate) as well as being a challenge to analyse for the researcher, if used too liberally. Data analysis is
fundamentally where the contribution of the research is created. So, it is important that appropriate planning is
undertaken, preferably at the same time as developing the research techniques, such that the analysis is not
rushed and a poor thesis is written as a result.
You should refer to the methodological literature to some extent in relation to the possible approaches to analysis.
These are typically presented as either quantitative (analysing numbers and data which can be transferred into
numbers) or qualitative (analysing words and other data of a non-numerical form). Usually the data collected
through the research techniques will require both quantitative and qualitative analysis. A questionnaire, for
example, is likely to contain questions that generate numerical information, such as age of respondent and non-
numerical information, such as opinion and attitude.
The production of a work schedule is part of this research implementation section. It should be a simple timetable
or Gantt chart for completing the research. It should identify key activities and approximate times for undertaking
these, non-research activities such as time out for holidays etc, and it should identify intended date of submission
of the completed thesis. Creating this plan is a useful discipline to check out the feasibility of your plans. It can then
act as a guide to you as you do the work, even if you have to re-plan (as is quite normal) at some stage.
These are all practical questions that need you to imagine your way through the project, balancing what is desirable
against what is feasible in the time and with the resources you have.
Ethical considerations
All students are required to address the need for ethical approval within their Research Proposal. This should
include a brief summary of the nature of ethical issues, such as informed consent, anonymity, confidentiality, etc;
plus a clear explication of the practical steps that you will be taking in your work to address these issues as they
arise for your study.
As a separate process you will need to secure ethical approval for your research project. Further information is set
out in Section 2.3 below.
References
References should be provided following Salford University’s policy. There is referencing guidance on Blackboard in
the Learning Materials section of your module on Blackboard or see:
http://www.salford.ac.uk/skills-for-learning
This is basically the Harvard APA 6th edition (author / date) approach. There is an exception for legal researchers –
discuss with your Supervisor if you think this might apply to you.
References
(Note that certain of these resources have more recent editions. Use whichever edition you can access.)
Gray, D.E., 2004. Doing Research in the Real World. London: Sage Publications.
Kerlinger, F.N., 1986. Foundations of Behavioural Research. Florida: Holt, Rheinart and Winston.
Oppenheim, A.N., 1966. Questionnaire Design and Attitude Measurement. New York: Basic Books.
Yin, R.K., 1989. Case Study Research: Design and Methods. London: Sage Publications.
Punch, K.F. 2006. Developing Effective Research Proposals. London: Sage Publications.
Research Ethics
A vital part of becoming a competent researcher is developing the ability to do your research in an ethical way.
This is neither mysterious nor difficult. It is merely looking after the people that help you do your research, and
taking good care of the information that they give you.
Informed Consent
The key thing to grasp is that if you are wanting to do research which involves gathering data directly from people,
then you need to have their informed consent for gathering and using that data.
The process for securing informed consent from your participants is really simple:
1. You inform your participants about your research. This needs to include an explanation of what your
research is (e.g it is about “x” subject and you are doing it in the context of a Masters degree at the
University of Salford etc etc). You need also to tell your participants about any risks they may run by taking
part in your research (there are not likely to many/any in the context of mainstream built environment MSc
research); who your supervisor is (including email address); that there is no obligation on their part to take
part; and that they can withdraw at any time. You need to explain how you will look after the data that you
acquire from them (e.g. in encrypted format), and you need to be clear about how you intend to identify
participants in your work (e.g. do you want to use their name or not? Etc etc). We have included an
example Participant information sheet in the Ethics section on Blackboard, which you can adapt to fit your
research, or you can develop your own version. If you are doing an online survey, you might include the
project information in a covering email, rather than having a separate form.
2. Once you have informed your participants, you ask them to confirm their consent to participate in your
research. In the case of face to face interviews you would typically get consent by asking your interviewees
to sign a consent form which refers to the Participant Information sheet (see exemplar in the Ethics section
on Blackboard). By contrast, if you are doing a questionnaire you might include a statement at the top of
the questionnaire along the lines of “By completing this questionnaire you are providing your consent for
the information you provide being used in the way described in the Participant Information Form”, or, if you
have a gateway tick box in an online survey you might put something like “I agree that the information I
provide may be used in the way described in the Participant Information Email” and they would only be able
to complete the questionnaire if they ticked that box.
Ethical Approval
Because it is such a vital aspect of being a researcher, the University has set up procedures to check that you know
how to do your research ethically, before you go and do it. This is called the Ethical Approval process. The
expected sequence of processes is that you would prepare your Research Proposal in order to work out your
research approach. Then you would think about the practical aspects of getting your data and at that point you
would seek ethical approval. Following that you would do your data gathering and analysis.
However, you need to be aware that if for any reason you end up wanting to gather some data from people, e.g. by
interviews, questionnaires, private archival access etc, and you have not completed your Research Proposal, you
must in any event secure ethical approval BEFORE you gather that data.
Type 1 projects are typically those done based solely on publicly available written documentation, and
therefore no issue of informed consent arises.
Type 2 projects typically involve gathering data from humans, but they are not vulnerable humans, nor
are the issues particularly sensitive. This is the type of project that the majority of SoBE MSc
dissertations involve – e.g. interviews or questionnaires to construction professionals about
mainstream construction issues. Students need to develop the participant information and consent
documentation, but such applications can be approved at Module level.
Type 3 projects typically involve gathering data from vulnerable humans (e.g. children, or patients)
and/or the issues involved are very sensitive and may cause distress (e.g. workplace harrassment).
Students are strongly advised to avoid developing research ideas which entail Type 3 treatment. Such
applications need to be initially considered at Module level, but then need to go for approval to a
University committee, and that process takes months.
Fill in the Ethical Approval form carefully (and electronically, as a Word document).
If your project is Type 2 (or 3), prepare the informed consent documentation (e.g. the participant
information form/covering email, the consent form specifically adapted for your research).
Once your supervisor has confirmed that the approval application is satisfactory, you must upload all the
documents to the Ethics Upload point in the Ethics section in Blackboard. You can upload multiple documents to
that point. Please use short file names (e.g. Smith_EthicsForm.doc, Smith_ParticipantInfo.doc,
Smith_Consent.doc) as otherwise Blackboard will not process them properly.
Approval etc
Following submission, your ethical approval application will be assessed. We try and do this within about a week of
submission.
If it is considered a valid and appropriately prepared Type 1 or Type 2 application, you will receive approval. If it is
considered a Type 3 project, we will provide further guidance.
If your application is not considered adequate, you will be notified of recommended amendments. You need to do
these, and resubmit your ethics application.
The most common reason for us to reject ethical approval applications is that the proposed research is Type 2,
but the student has not provided the documentation they intend to use in order to secure informed consent (e.g.
Participant Information sheet and the consent form)…
Submission Deadline: See Section 1.5 above and paragraphs 11 and 12 of Section 3.7
This assessment constitutes 75% of the marks for the 60 Credit Dissertation
Engage in empirical, theoretical or doctrinal research (based on evidence present in the literature) or
constructive research (aimed at solving a real-life problem), or other type of recognised research
approach;
Apply an ethical approach when conducting research and complete the ethical approval process in
accordance with university requirements.
Develop and refine effective research aim and objectives on the basis of a detailed analysis and review
of alternative research strategies and research techniques, applying appropriate selection criteria to
reach a justified and justifiable selection of research approach;
Conduct extensive literature search culminating in the analysis and synthesis of complex information
derived from that search;
Effectively and robustly implement the selected research approach to identify and critically analyse
relevant data.
Design and develop conclusions based on evidence including validation and authentication;
Critically analyse information in a variety of manners and develop justifiable, evidence based
conclusions;
Use evidence in such a manner as to provide for stable and justifiable conclusions;
This assignment has been designed to support your learning in the context of these aims and intended learning
outcomes.
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Assignment Task
Develop a Dissertation of between 15,000 and 18,000 words which implements the research plan that you
developed in your Research Proposal assignment. Dissertations, which significantly exceed or fall short of this
target length are unlikely to satisfy the assessment criteria and will accordingly incur a penalty.
The Dissertation must meet the Assessment Criteria set out in the matrix at Section 3.6. Details of how the
dissertation must be formatted and submitted are set out in Section 3.7 below.
It is a pre-condition to a valid dissertation submission that you have ethical approval for the research project
described in you dissertation.
So what does a Dissertation look like? Although we are very prescriptive about the content and structure of the
Research Proposal, the Dissertation is a different animal. Its structure will be determined by the type of research
that is being done and it is here that students should work with their supervisors in order to agree on an
appropriate structure to achieve the research purpose. For that reason, we do not mandate a format or a
structure. A few points can, however, usefully be made which students might find of assistance.
The first thing that needs to be done is to contextualise the research topic. Some people do this with a general
introduction to the area to justify its relevance, before introducing the Aim and the Objectives. Others start with
What then happens is a critical review of the relevant academic literature. This needs to be a thoughtful review of
good literature. You need to draw out themes, to identify problems, to demonstrate philosophical conflicts. You
must do this effectively, in your own words, drawing on good, properly referenced sources. At the end, it’s often
effective to summarise where you have ended up. You might, for example, establish the precise questions or
general themes you want to explore in your empirical phase.
Then typically, comes the research methods section, where you establish the appropriate research strategy and
technique. If your Research Proposal was effective, you may be able to draw heavily on that here, though if it was
weak you will probably need to do more work on it. This section is all written as though you haven’t done the
research yet. You’ll need to explain what data you are going to acquire and how you are going to analyse any data
you acquire. You’ll also need to mention how you will take care of the ethics of research (this bit will be really easy,
because by this point you will already have secured ethical approval).
Next comes presentation of the data, followed by analysis. You need to think carefully about how you present your
data. There has to be a balance between providing too much and too little data. If you use graphs etc, then they
need to be easy to read and tell the reader the right things. You may choose to put some data in Appendices, but
you must not rely on a reader looking at anything in an Appendix in order to make your arguments. An Appendix is
only there as an opportunity for further reading, not for making your point.
In terms of data analysis, you must have a clear plan of attack, based on your research methods section. You have
to demonstrate an accepted method of analysing data, whether that be qualitative or quantitative, or both.
You will then have a Discussion Section which takes your findings and challenges these in the context of the
literature review. This Discussion Section can be a chapter in its own right, and it can be the first section within the
conclusion. Either way, it should be suitably comprehensive and interrogative.
Finally you set out your conclusions. There should be no new material in the Conclusions section (because it is a
conclusion, not a continuation of your analysis). You need to make sure you reflect back on your Aim and
Objectives, and demonstrate how you have achieved them.
The whole work should be a single, well argued clear piece of persuasive academic writing.
Where things can become conceptually more tangled is in respect of the “literature review”. In secondary research
there are two differing approaches. Either you are using literature itself to develop a line of reasoning, or you are
using the data/information produced by others and reanalysing that data for your own purposes.
The first approach is a desktop study where the only data you are using will be literature produced by others,
arguably the whole dissertation is a literature review, and that is why a particular challenge of this type of
dissertation is to maintain a clear and persuasive line of reasoning throughout the whole work. Where empirical
dissertations cause students headaches owing to the practical fact of getting hold of data from participants,
literature based dissertations cause headaches because students get lost and don’t really understand how to
maintain a strong line of reasoning.
The other approach to secondary research is to re-use existing data collected by other people. This follows very
much the same dissertation approach as that of empirical research, except that you have saved yourself the time
and expense of collecting the data yourself. There will be a clear distinction between the literature review section
(theory) and the analysis of the secondary material (data). The secondary material you wish to use in your study
may be the actual raw data collected by other people, or summary/reduction of data collected by others. In
secondary research it is important to know why and how people collected the data, and if it has been summarised
then the categories they used to create the summary. The main concern in secondary data research is to ensure
that the data you have is “fit for purpose” in order to address the research question you are asking. Unlike
empirical research you cannot shape what data is collected to match exactly your research question; in secondary
research you hope that the fit of the previously collected data is close enough for your research purpose.
Just as in relation to empirical research based dissertations, there should be no new material introduced in the
conclusion of a secondary research based dissertations.
The University uses an electronic plagiarism detection tool service called Turnitin® which is hosted by iParadigms (a
US company). The University has been using the Turnitin® service for all assessments which students are required
to submit by electronic means starting in the academic year 2010/2011. By registering with the University you
consent to the following:
a) The University will submit your assessments (including details of your name and course details) to
the Turnitin® service so that your assessments can be compared with the database of works that is
maintained by the Turnitin® service and that is drawn from various sources including the internet; and
b) Your assessments may be stored in that database of works indefinitely (or until the University
stops using the Turnitin® service and requests their deletion) to help protect your assessments from
future plagiarism. Where there is a match between content in your assessments and content in other
works, then your assessments may also be copied by the University and other users of the Turnitin®
service to allow closer analysis.
Dissertation Format
Subject to compliance with the specific requirements set out below, the format of the dissertation is at
the discretion of the student.
Technical Requirements
1. As from January 2015 the only valid means of submitting an MSc dissertation shall be
electronically via Turnitin® as indicated below. Students shall not submit paper copies.
2. The dissertation shall be a single electronic file, not exceeding 5Mb in size which will either be in
an MS Word compatible format, or a text based PDF which can be interrogated by Turnitin®.
Submissions which do not comply with this regulation will be disregarded.
3. The first page of the dissertation must comprise the Declaration on Conduct of Assessed
Coursework (there is a copy in the Assessment folder in Blackboard).
4. The second page of the dissertation shall be printed with text (at least 14 point size) setting out
only the following information in the following order:
5. The third page of the dissertation shall consist of an abstract (i.e. a brief summary of the entire
work). This shall summarize the area of study, the methods you used, your main findings, and
the conclusions you have drawn from these findings. This abstract should be set out in single
line spacing and should consist of only around 250 words of text.
6. You must include as an Appendix the confirmation of the granting of Ethical Approval, without
which a valid dissertation submission cannot be made.
7. Body text must be spaced at no more than 1.2 lines, quotations and footnotes (which are
discouraged) must be single-spaced. Standard text throughout the dissertation must be 11-
point size with other sizes permissible for non-standard text (for example headings, sub-
headings and footnotes). Choice of font is at the student’s discretion.
Submission of Dissertations
10. Dissertations shall be submitted via Turnitin®.
12. Students should also be aware that the rules permitting up to 4 days late submission, and
penalties for late submission do apply in the Research Phase.
Student Obligations
13. Without detracting from the generality of the obligations set out above the student is entirely
responsible for the safe custody of all research material whether printed or stored on computer
disk or other storage device and shall be under an obligation to keep adequate numbers of
duplicate or back-up copies of such material.
Submissions made after 16:00hrs on the fourth working day following submission will be deemed
inadmissible and recorded as a non-submission.
Electronic submissions
By submitting your work through Turn-it-in you are declaring that
Any element of the work which is the product of group work, has been produced in the manner
specifically sanctioned in the assignment brief;
You acknowledge it is your responsibility to check the submission is in an accessible format (see
further below)
You have read and understood the University Policy on the Conduct of Assessed Work (Academic
Misconduct Procedure available from:
http://www.governance.salford.ac.uk/page/student_policies
The work you are submitting has been produced without any academic misconduct (as defined
in the University Academic Misconduct Procedure document).
Following submission, students are obliged to return to the Turnitin submission area. The button that was
labelled Submit will now be labelled View. Students should click the “View” button to view the submission
in the same format as the module tutor.
If the submission document file up-loaded to Blackboard is corrupt and cannot be viewed - This is classed as
a NON submission. It is the responsibility of the student to ensure their submission material can be opened
by others. To ensure your submission can be opened please follow this simple step: Go back to the
submission area and the blue button that was labelled Submit will now be a button labelled View – select
this button and what you see upon doing so will be the file/format that your Lecturer can see. If you can
open and view the document then so can the lecturer.
(a) If the work is no more than four working days late, then five marks shall be deducted for
each working day (08:30-16:00 Mon-Thursday or part thereof), but if the work would
otherwise pass then the mark for the work shall be reduced to no lower than the pass mark
for the component
(b) If the work is no more than four working days late and marked and the mark is lower than
the pass mark, then no penalty shall be applied;
(c) If the work is more than four working days late then it cannot be submitted and shall be
recorded as a non-submission (NS).
Academic Mis-conduct
The University takes a serious view of all acts of academic misconduct. Such acts are considered dishonest
and as attempts to gain unfair advantage. Acts of academic misconduct can take many forms. They are likely
to fall into one or more of the following categories:
a) Plagiarism
Plagiarism involves taking the work of another person or source and using it as if it were one’s
own.
b) Self plagiarism (or double submission) is resubmitting previously submitted work on one or more
occasions (without proper acknowledgement). This may take the form of copying either the
whole piece of work or part of it. Normally credit will already have been given for this work.
c) Collusion: This occurs when, unless with official approval (e.g. in the case of group projects), two
or more students consciously collaborate in the preparation and production of work which is
ultimately submitted by each in an identical, or substantially similar, form and/or is represented
by each to be the product of his or her individual efforts. Collusion also occurs where there is
unauthorised co-operation between a student and another person in the preparation and
production of work which is presented as the student’s own.
d) Falsifying experimental or other investigative results: This could involve a range of things that
make it appear that information has been collected by scientific investigation, the compilation
of questionnaire results etc whereas in reality it has been made up or altered to provide a more
favourable result.
f) Contracting another to write a piece of assessed work / Writing a piece of assessed work for
another: This involves any means whereby a person does work on behalf of another. It includes
assessments done for someone else in full or in part by a fellow student, a friend or family
member. It includes sitting an examination for someone else. It also covers obtaining material
from internet ‘cheat sites’ or other sources of work. Penalties for this type of unfair means will
normally apply both to a student of the University who does work on behalf of another and a
student of the University who has work done for him/her.
Remember that the Research Proposal equates to 25% of the overall module, so you still have 75% of the marks left
in order to make up a shortfall. You can easily do the calculation yourself, but we have done a demonstration in
this table:
That resit will be your second and final attempt, and your module mark will be capped at a maximum of 50%. If you
fail this second attempt, you will not be permitted further attempts.
http://www.salford.ac.uk/university/governance/policies-and-procedures/browse-by-theme/2
In brief, to get a Distinction you need an average of 70% or more in all of your modules INCLUDING 70% or more in
the Dissertation module overall (i.e. a weighted average of the Research Proposal and Dissertation). For a Merit
you need 60% or more overall INCLUDING 60% or more in the Dissertation module overall. To pass, you need 50%
or more overall.
http://www.mystudentinfo.salford.ac.uk/
You can get your certificate posted out to you and details of how to request that are available from that link. N.B.
The University will only post out certificates to the address which is on your student record. Accordingly, before
requesting a certificate, you would prudent to check what address is on your record. You can do this via the Self
Service section:
http://students.salford.ac.uk/selfservice.php
Student: Programme:
Proposal Title:
If proposed research does not seem to be aligned with your Programme of Study, you must discuss this with your
Programme Leader and Supervisor. You may only do a dissertation on a topic related to your programme of study.
Justification and focal Literature review: Need for the research convincing? Initial
literature review covering key texts (in relation to aim/objectives)? Critically
20% reviewed? Range of sources including research journals?
Ethics: The ethical implications of the research have been appropriately considered?
Referencing: A standard method of referencing has been used? Is further work
required on referencing technique?
10% Use of English: Argument development? Level of spelling and grammar appropriate
for Masters level work?
Total Mark: 0%
1. The marks stated above do not take account of any resit, or academic misconduct penalties which may apply,
and are subject to moderation and ratification by the Board of Examiners.
2. Feedback and weighted marking contained in this sheet are here to help you develop your research and improve
your final dissertation. The comments should be discussed with your supervisor and considered as suggestions
of where greater clarity/explanation in the approach to your research may be needed.
3. Ethics: You must have ethical approval for your research. Details of how to apply for this are in the Handbook.
Working title:
Hypothesis:
Objectives:
Justification:
Literature review:
Strategy:
Ethics:
Referencing:
Use of English:
The marks stated below do not take account of any resit, or academic misconduct penalties which may apply, and are subject to moderation and ratification by the
Board of Examiners.
Weighting Assessment Criterion Descriptor (click cell to select) Mark (out of 100) Overall Mark
10% Scope
20% Understanding of Subject Matter
20% Use of Sources
20% Critical Analysis based on Evidence
0%
20% Structure of Argument
5% Presentation/Communication
5% Spelling, Grammar and Syntax
(in particular focusing on strong aspects of the dissertation, and where improvement could have been made, no need to duplicate Detailed Feedback)
DETAILED SUPERVISOR FEEDBACK
Ensure that the feedback is contextualized and that your description is consistent with the descriptors set out below.
All information in the document will be given to the student as feedback. Save the file with programme, student
surname and awarded mark, eg CM_Smith_70.