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ALTAMIRANO PROAÑO ANDREA MARITZA

ARCE OTAVALO JESSICA JOHMARA
ASITIMBAY MULLO ALEX DAVID
BATALLAS HEREDIA EDGAR DAVID
BEJARANO GAVILANES LUIS ADRIAN
BERRONES CEPEDA CHRISTIAN GIOVANNY
CAISAPANTA PONLUISA DAILY ANABEL
CAJAS CRUZ CHRISTIAN ANDRES
CAJILEMA HERRERA JOSETH ESTEFANIA
CALDERON MONAR SONIA KATHERINE
CASTILLO LLUGUAY LUIS DAVID
CHAVEZ TICSE KATHERINE FERNANDA
CHUNATA MANOTOA MARLON GONZALO
CUJI MUYULEMA MARIA LORENZA
DEL POZO ECHAIZ PABLO LUIS
ERAZO PROAÑO JENIFER CAROLINA
FERNANDEZ PUEDMA JOIBBER NABIL
GAIBOR AVILES CARLOS PAUL
GUAMINGA MENDOZA DARIO HERNAN
GUANO ARBITO PAMELA MERCEDES
JARA TELLO BLADIMIR ESTALIN
LEMACHE RIVERA JOSELYN FERNANDA
MAFLA CHAUCA LEIDY VANESSA
MIRANDA SAYAY WILSON GEOVANNY
MITA CAYAMBE MARIELA GUADALUPE
MOPOSITA ACHACHI VIVIANA GUADALUPE
MORA VARGAS STALIN JOSUE
MOROCHO DELGADO MARISOL ELIZABETH
PINTA CHAFLA MIRIAN ESPERANZA
QUINATOA CHANGOLUIZA JONATHAN XAVIER
RICAURTE CARRERA CARLOS ALEJANDRO
RUEDA PRECIADO GEOVANNA MELISSA
SANI RAMIREZ NELLY JOHANA
TIERRA AYALA BRAYAN STIVEN
TIGASI CHUGCHILAN CRISTIAN GEOVANNI
ULLOA CALERO TANIA ESTEFANIA
USHCO CHALUISA DARWIN VLADIMIR
VEGA LOPEZ KAREN LISBETH
YAUTIBUG QUISHPI SHIRLEY ASTRID
YUQUILEMA YUCAILLA FRANKLIN JHONNY
ALTAMIRANO PROAÑO ANDREA MARITZA
ARCE OTAVALO JESSICA JOHMARA
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The importance of virtual classrooms in education are various.(1) (2)First, these resources
allow students to develop more advanced computer culture skills than those acquired at school.
They promote self-learning for students, thus reinforcing the attitude of responsibility in
academic and early professional preparation. Second, virtual classrooms develop creative and
constructive thinking that in the future will serve students to offer their knowledge in a didactic
way. Third, these provide a different teaching alternative to the traditional one, a necessary
change in the technological era in which we find ourselves. And, finally, they constitute an
accessible source of economic savings, different from face-to-face education.(3)Today, virtual
classrooms are considered an alternative for education because they provide many positive
benefits that are increased through the use of information and communication technologies.

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ASITIMBAY MULLO ALEX DAVID

PARAGRAPH:

Virtual education in our country (1) isn’t completely useful (2). Currently, due to the emergence
of the coronavirus, virtual education has been taken as an option. This isn’t good for some
students and teachers, some teachers are not able to give virtual classes, they don’t have a
good teaching methodology. Also some students don't have enough money to pay for a good
internet. We must also analyze that our country doesn’t have a digital inclusion according to the
needs of the moment. Digital inclusion not only means having access to a cell phone, social
networks or email, digital inclusion means managing digital tools and using them for an
appropriate purpose. Another aspect is that most teachers exaggerate sending homework,
because they haven't other way to educate us and they don’t take into account that it isn’t only a
subject. We can conclude by saying that it is important to take all these aspects into account in
order to build a new educational model that includes everyone in this new reality of learning.

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BATALLAS HEREDIA EDGAR DAVID
USE OF VIRTUAL CLASSES
(1)Virtual classes (2)are a great method of study.Virtual classes serve as a tool for student
learning. It is very important in academic training. Virtual classes improve the relationship
between the student and the teacher, allows the student to dialogue about the subject and
interact with classmates. It is a simple tool, easy to use and available to all. In addition, it is a
space where the student can make contributions during or after of class, upload and download
documents save important files and share these files with other students virtually without need
to organize study meetings in other places.For these reasons, virtual classes present great
benefits for the teacher and the students, improving the acces to education and advancing the
professional training of all students.

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BEJARANO GAVILANES LUIS ADRIAN
Virtual Education
Virtual Education a step into the future. This method of new services is a smart way to learn.
This education amplifies the possibilities of accessing remote study of people. This education
uses digital tools such as, virtual classrooms, online documents, forums, chats, etc. Also as
observed this, education is restricted to people who have tools to. This evolution has not been
seen in the history of education. As a result governments see this way of education as a
possibility of social distancing, helping to stop pandemics or diseases that are affecting the
population. People see this method as the best decision of governments to continue educational
progress in your evolutionary environment.

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BERRONES CEPEDA CHRISTIAN GIOVANNY

Virtual classrooms in education. A virtual classroom of an institution is very useful for students
and also for teachers because they send their homework in this way, the tests since they can be
reviewed more quickly and automatically for students is useful because we can review the
material that is loaded In each subject, virtual classrooms have the vocation of serving as a
basis to develop the learning process of students, and are one of the main nuclei of e-learning
platforms, another aspect they use is to be in contact with the teacher. and among students.As
a result, the virtual classroom seeks to increase the motivation of students when it comes to
participating in activities since they are a good resource to get participants to increase their
competence to carry out adequate training.

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CAISAPANTA PONLUISA DAILY ANABEL

Virtual Classroom in Education

Virtual classrooms in education are of great help to the student (1), these are technological tools
that help you understand the subject taught by the teacher, this tool allows us to share
information about homework, lessons, workshops and etc, today this tool has become a means
of communication between the student and teacher, it is for this reason that the virtual
classroom has become slow, all the student admitted to this medium by an order of a teacher
and collapses the platform, lately this medium is to become a race between students to make
any lesson or respond to some forum, so the matter many not be well understood by the student
(2), today, however, allows us to continue with our studies avoiding to lose time by the
pandemic (3).

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CAJAS CRUZ CHRISTIAN ANDRES

(1) Importance of virtual classrooms (2) as an emerging resource in education.(3) Due to the global
emergency today, virtual platforms are presented as the only knowledge transfer resource promoting
critical thinking and self-learning. (4) It is in this way that the new educational environment allows
access to education from anywhere in the world, thus allowing better access and more equality since
it is the same as in a traditional classroom, the teacher is always available.(5)The commitment of the
students lies in the responsibility when paying attention in each of their classes. (6) For all the above
mentioned, virtual classrooms are currently the most important thing for education.

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CAJILEMA HERRERA JOSETH ESTEFANIA

(1)Virtual classrooms are a support tool,(2) with many benefits such as: this allows you
to access education anywhere in the world. It helps the development of creative
thinking. The sessions with audio and video allow you to exchange ideas and resolve
doubts on the subject. Having these live recordings gives you the option to listen to
them as many times as necessary, it also helps you save time and money. It is more
comfortable, since you can learn in a familiar environment that facilitates concentration.
This technological advance allows us to face problems and make decisions to continue
learning more every day with a quality education.(3) In conclusion, this technological
tool is necessary and important for the advancement of education.(3)

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CALDERON MONAR SONIA KATHERINE

Virtual classrooms are a great help for education. They allow us to educate
ourselves from home. These tools help us learn more about technology. They are
easy to handle and educational. They are good because they allow us to educate
ourselves. There is a more direct contact between teachers and students. Is allows
access to various resources while receiving the class. In addition, than virtual
classes we can solve our doubts about the subject as long as possible. The classes
in virtual classrooms help us to always have the material and to be able to review it
whenever we need it. These tools also allow us to communicate more didactically
with colleagues and to support each other. Allows us to use all online resources to
improve as students. In conclusion, virtual classes are really beneficial for
education, and helps students a lot with the multiple facilities it provides.

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CASTILLO LLUGUAY LUIS DAVID

DIFFICULTIES IN VIRTUAL EDUCATION

The difficulty of virtual education is that it is a door that not all students have access to.
Virtual education is a didactic and interactive medium that seeks to continue the
process of training university students in the face of the pandemic that is raging in the
country. Virtual education is taught from each of the students' homes, but it depends a
lot on the economic possibilities of each student, since it does not consider essential
aspects such as that not all students have fixed internet in their homes or that not all
students They have a computer to carry out their work and homework, which many of
the students work and study and do not have many free hours. In conclusion, for those
aspects already mentioned the teachers of the different subjects should be a little more
understandable and accessible with the students who present difficulties, giving them
moral support and one more opportunity to recover jobs and not lose grades.

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CHAVEZ TICSE KATHERINE FERNANDA
Virtual CLassroom in education
Comparative study of virtual and face to face modality.Study at a virtual level,has become a real
problem, due to the disadvantages,that it generates.The internet is a serious problem,when
understanding classes, as it happens, that some teachers are explaining the class and the
network begins to fail, for which , what the teacher explained is interrupted and it is not possible
to understand or when taking assistance the problem arises again.That is why, compared to the
comparative study of the virtual and face to face modality, the study is preferred in person. Due
to different disadvantages that exist, especially in student learning, and the stress, that it is
generating because it cannot be solved in order to have a good internet connection,many
teachers understand the situation but there are exceptions. For this reason,concluding with the
topic, it is determined that the virtual modality does work,but by making purchases in person, it
is much better, for all the disadvantages already mentioned,so that the student learns and the
teacher can teach without interference.
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CHUNATA MANOTOA MARLON GONZALO
VIRTUAL CLASSROOMS
Virtual classrooms do not help online study. It is not necessary to create a virtual classroom to
learn about any subject. They do not have enough capacity to accommodate so many people.
There are many alternatives that would be better managed than a virtual classroom. The
problem with these is that they always hang and it does not help the development of the activity
that we are doing. Virtual classrooms are a waste of time in the educational field, because they
are not complete enough for all students to understand. Finally these do not have the correct
interfaces for a teacher or a student to handle easily. In conclusion, virtual classrooms do not
help education in many ways because of the reasons I said in development. TOPIC
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CUJI MUYULEMA MARIA LORENZ

Virtual classroom is the new learning environment.

Virtual classrooms are a powerful device for communication and distribution of
knowledge, which also offers a space to serve, guide and evaluate students.
The virtual classroom constitutes a powerful medium for student learning and is an
educational environment that tries to facilitate cooperative learning, between students
and teachers, they are reserved spaces for the exclusive use of teachers and students,
It distributes information quickly and accurately to all participants. It prepares students
to compete in a more agile, fast and efficient way, benefits offered by information
technology through the different virtual spaces, allows communication, application of
knowledge, evaluation and management of the class. In conclusion, in our days, the
virtual classroom constitutes university teaching, it has been a valuable instrument to
increase the preparation, motivation and interest of students.

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DEL POZO ECHAIZ PABLO LUIS

Virtual education (1) is a challenge (2). Because it offers us new points for and against, such as
showing us alternative learning environments that we can access at any time. Ther knowledge,
doubts and other expressions made in class are recorded, generating new ways of conceiving
education and concrete objects of study for the teacher and student. This modality is also a
good way to strengthen self-education, since it prioritizes autonomous activities over
conventional evaluations, with which a critical way of thinking arises in the students when
practicing a new task of which only he is aware of how he did it. On the other hand, virtual
education modifies the learning rhythm, taking us to a bifurcation point where we can choose to
advance more quickly or adopt a single level of partners group performance, which can result in
a slowing down effect. In the field of oral and written expression, virtual education generates the
need for users to look for new and better ways to make their ideas, since the time available is
limited and the challenge of exposing the concepts in a complete way at the same time very
concise, stimulating creativity and pushing us to give more of ourselves and in a better way. In
the field of educational psychology it also stimulates neuronal plasticity. In conclusion, virtual
education is not only a temporary measure that we have been forced to take in the face of an
emergency, but also a way of rediscovering our capacity and sense of responsibility, opening
ourselves up to new methods with their respective ethical and cognitive implications. This
entails in the different actors.

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ERAZO PROAÑO JENIFER CAROLINA
FERNANDEZ PUEDMA JOIBBER NABIL

Reason of virtual classroom in education (1) is a little dificult for students and teachers. (2) They
have problems for to connect because sometimes they don’t have a good signal. Or some
students don’t have internet whereby they hire internet plans and they can´t be more time
connected. Also the classroom can’t develop the good way because sometimes it is to heard
interrupted. Sometimes the students have others dificults, por example it light goes out. Also
this new modality in education is dificult because some teacher don’t use much the computer.
The student and teachers have to pass more time with the computer. However, sometimes the
students don’t have a computer in your house or in your house It have a one computer for all
family and all they should use. In conclusion the virtual classroom do difficult a little the access
for some people.

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GAIBOR AVILES CARLOS PAUL
Virtual classroom in a(1) education (2).The virtual classromm is a shared online space where
the leaners and the tutor work together simultaneosly, these interactions take place through
videoconferencing and voice call. A frequent problem in studens is the lack of internet
conecction to receive their class.On the other hand, another great problem appears for those
who do have a connection is the internet speed does not meet the needs of the student, which
causes conflicts such as interrupted audio and lage on the virtual platform.It is important to also
emphasize the averload of activities for the student, there is an accumulation of tasks, activities,
forums without the other subjects that the student has to take.In conclusion, for all these
reasons, the virtual classroom in an education is a challenge for students as well as for
teachers.
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GUAMINGA MENDOZA DARIO HERNAN

VIRTUAL TECHNOLOGIES FOR EDUCATION IN TIMES OF PANDEMIC

Virtual technologies(1) are extremely necessary for education today(2). Today, due to the
problem of the global pandemic, many institutions of basic, middle and higher education have
been forced to choose this method of teaching(3). It is a real challenge for teachers and students
to cope with their studies in this way(4). Social networking technologies such as Facebook,
Twitter and Instagram facilitate discussion in the virtual classroom; this is conducive to virtual
classrooms and supports academic performance(5). Virtual education has acquired a relevance
that perhaps it never had before(6). This modality of education is distinguished because it does
not require the presence of students and teachers in the same space(7). Virtual education can be
done by very diverse means(8). In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, the use of virtual
technologies are really useful and very effective when applied to education(9).

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GUANO ARBITO PAMELA MERCEDES

Virtual classes (1) and student-teacher interaction are the only way to continue learning in
isolation time by COVID 19 (2). In addition, it is also an effective way of not wasting time on
educational progress and in the lives of students and teachers and continue with the courses they
were in. This allows that life developed despite the circumstances that we are enveloped,
moreover allows the security of the students to avoid the COVID19 virus. In addition, the virtual
classes have served to implement new learning strategies and especially promote self-
preparation, also to promoting reading and staying in constant study. In conclusion, the virtual
class is the unic way to continue teaching to the youth and training professionals for the future.

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JARA TELLO BLADIMIR ESTALIN

(1)The advantages and disadvantages of virtual education. Several advantages of virtual

education are the strengthening of learning in the computer sector. Another advantage is that
there is no delay in continuing the study with this modality. Through the virtual classes the
student is obliged to be more responsible and acquires more interest in the subject. With this
method the student and the teacher develop a more creative and constructive thinking. Students
can learn using new techniques of work and study with the help of technology. Among the
disadvantages we have for example that not all students have access to the internet. The
understanding of the topics induced by the teachers in certain occasions are not correctly
assimilated by the student. Another disadvantage of this method is that at the time of the class
we are presented with several distractions that do not allow us to understand or a good
understanding of the class being taught at that time. As a conclusion we can say that this
method of work that students and teachers are currently using is of great help for our
professional preparation, however there are several disadvantages as we could detail.

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LEMACHE RIVERA JOSELYN FERNANDA

Virtual classes(1) is a tool for learmig(2). Virtual classes help us learn in the confort of home,
with many guides to better understand how it is to have the scope of having a lot of informacion
such as online books, information that can be obtained very easily online and the classes that
we gives a teacher helps us with the doubts they give us through continuous class. Virtual
classes can be done by any student who previously could not study because he lived very far
and had no time, now he can do it and now it is much easier. For this reason, virtual classes are
a tool for student learning, helping in the intellectual part that will serve them and they will adapt
to virtual classes having better management and understanding.

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MAFLA CHAUCA LEIDY VANESSA

(1) Pandemic-time (2)education

The educational system in Ecuador during the crisis due to the covid-19 pandemic has been
modified, they are not longer face to face classes, now they are virtual classes through the use
of platforms such as: Teams, Zoom, Email personal and institutional, etc. The same ones that
have allowed us to continue advancing, continue with the contents, although as in all situations
there are always difficulties,on the one hand there is the internet connection that is essential in
this case, but with which on all have access, on the other hand, there is the same methodology
for both the teacher and the student, since being connected by a screen does not cause the
same effect as being in a classroom, students can be distracted, during classes, on social
networks, playing, etc. Tools like short videos of all kinds, illustrations and interaction can work.
In conclusion, despite the current situations due to the pandemic, education has not stopped. It
is progressing through digital tools.

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MIRANDA SAYAY WILSON GEOVANNY
USE (2) OF VIRTUAL PLATFORMS IN HIGHER EDUCATION (1)

Virtual platforms have gained very significant space in educational institutions in higher

education, as a tool for knowledge transfer, which facilitates the acquisition, assimilation and
construction of knowledge.

There have also been significant changes in education, which produce new forms of knowledge
transfer since, through information and communication technologies, new paradigms are
created in the teaching-learning process, where society makes intensive use of all technological
means and computer applications that reduce the time of activities that decades ago was
complicated in its process and development.

Conclusion: improvised use and poor connection produces loss of interest in students and an
unimportant tool for teachers, now becoming a single virtual social medium that enriches the
self-evaluation among students.

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MITA CAYAMBE MARIELA GUADALUPE

Negative and positive aspects of virtual education. They are a new way of learning for all
students in this time of pandemic. Some negative aspects are: difficult for some students because
you do not have the necessary access to the internet. Others cannot carry out normal activities or
tasks because they do not have a computer or cell phone available. This can be puricial judicious
for the student because his grades cannot be favorable. The positive aspects are: the virtual
classrooms are new and practical. Through the virtual you can share various documents in order
to improve knowledge. We can send papers, give pre-allow ments to assess knowledge. In
conclusion, virtual classrooms have positive and negative aspects with which we have to learn to
work and adapt as it is a new way of learning.

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MOPOSITA ACHACHI VIVIANA GUADALUPE
Importance of virtual classrooms in education. Currently, due to the pandemic that is happening
in the world, the virtual classroom education has become a very important tool to helped young
people continue with education. Through virtual classrooms the teacher can send homework to
students. Allows access to education from anywhere in the word. The estudent and the teacher
develop more creative and didactic thinking. It is not necessary for the students or teacher to
travel from to continue with the classes. The students have access to all the necessary
materials such as books, brochures, videos and magazines that are used by the teacher in their
classes. In conclusion the virtual classroom in education is very important because it offers
interactivity communication, dynamism in the presentation of content that allows different
learning styles, all from an electronic device connected to the network.

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MORA CAMPAÑA DANIELA MISHELL

Virtual education today

The virtual platforms in education, they are new alternatives that are used for education, these
platforms have been of great help during the health crisis, they also have great benefits for
those who use them because a class can be held for several hours without problems. In these
platforms we can carry out tasks since the have an online document edition. They also
disadvantage which any student can take command of and the bad jokes of today are taking
you to the middle class or if you are talking they silence your microphone, it must be said that
they have a very large database that makes having a continuous class without short or anything
like that. In conclusion we can say that these virtual platforms have revolutionized the world of
education by taking advantage of the situation that we are going through.

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MORA VARGAS STALIN JOSUE
Virtual classrooms(1) in education of Ecuadorians(2). I believe that education in Ecuador was
forced to use this medium due to the situation we are experiencing in the pandemic, since
opening the universities would be a major source of contagion for our safety and the rest of us
can be in classes from our home(3). In other countries, even in our universities, we were
already handling this issue of virtual classrooms and I think that it was not difficult for them to
adapt as we are(4). I think that online education is going to take hold and could become a new
method for having a great coverage and allow everyone to prepare regardless of the distance or
where they are(5).In conclusion I would say that this method of education was never practiced,
so it became somewhat hard, but little by little we are learning to use it and it could be very
beneficial for specialization courses or online congresses(6).

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MOROCHO DELGADO MARISOL ELIZABETH

Virtual Classrooms (1) have many benefits(2). This tool offers us interactive, communication,
and dynamism in content presentation. Virtual classrooms encourage the use of information
technology for learning. Also, it allows serving users with different learning styles. This
educational environment reduces training costs. It does not require physical space for classes. It
also eliminates the movement of students to the classroom. Virtual classrooms offer greater
possibilities to those who are further from educational centers. This tool allows access to the
courses with total freedom of schedules. Also, distribute the information quickly and accurately
to all students. It also prepares students to compete in a more agile, fast, and efficient way. It
helps students develop skills and self-education. Virtual classrooms are a telework option for
teachers. Finally, for all these reasons, I believe that virtual education is beneficial for both
students and teachers.

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PINTA CHAFLA MIRIAN ESPERANZA
Virtual classes

Virtual classes are a tool of great help.Currently the situation we are experiencing prevents us
from mobilizing quietly, so the existence of virtual platforms allow us to continue advancing in
our education; one of the advantages of using virtual tools is that we have access to educational
content twenty-four hours a day, adapting the study to the availability of time we have; it also
facilitates collaborative work, access to chats, debates and practices on the platforms, they
promise us enrich the knowledge; this type of study allows us to expand our coverage margin,
eliminating the barriers of place and time, allowing us to study in another city, even in another
country. In conclusion, education through virtual tools provides us with great advantages since it
allows us to study at any time and place, for which we only need to have an internet connection.

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QUINATOA CHANGOLUIZA JONATHAN XAVIER

Currently, the modality in the educational field has given a total change, technology is the main
means by which it is possible to take classes online, to be part of a class and to be able to interact
with its members is part of the new change; all this through the "virtual classroom". Being an
environment that includes all the factors of a traditional classroom (communication, dynamism,
presentation of content), it allows the student to carry out their learning task independently with
opportunities for interaction and making use of the online resources shared through this
platform that provides for teaching. The "virtual classrooms" will allow continuing education,
interacting with the technology that evolves our lives day after day.

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RICAURTE CARRERA CARLOS ALEJANDRO

Virtual platforms for education

Virtual platforms are very useful today in education. And, above all, with the situation that the
world is going through. Today you will learn all these types of tegnologies and their correct use.
It is a bit ugly that an extreme case on the planet has needed to change the educational system
that we used to use, I mean that there were only face-to-face classes, technology was seen in
the background, nobody was interested in the new changes but with the outbreak of this virus
and all changes, now if the technologies are used, everyone is training to be able to to
manage them. Let us realize that virtual education is the future, it is the change, it is
what we all needed but that nobody wanted to admit. In conclusion, virtual platforms are
a great help for education that is handled today, we are the ones who must know how to
take advantage of them.

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RUEDA PRECIADO GEOVANNA MELISSA
SANI RAMIREZ NELLY JOHANA

Virtual classrooms (1) in education (2), with this of teaching you help us continue with our
studies. It is good to not stop studying, this modality has advantages and disadvantages such
as; greatly reduces education costs, giving educational opportunities to those who are far from
the place of estudy, have more responsibility, study from the comfort of home. But the negative
would be distractors, the failures of the internet, not all students have internet access, education
will no longer be practical now it will be theoretical. This work tool helps us with interactivity,
communication, use of technology. This type of learning is due to the situation that is
happening, such as Covid-19. As a conclusion it can be said that this mode of study has
advantages and disadvantages, however we must focus on the positive things since not all of us
have the opportunity to continue our studies, and in this way take advantage of time, adapt to
this new modality.

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TIERRA AYALA BRAYAN STIVEN

Positive things about virtual education. The clases are learned in a virtual way and not
presencial, it has not learning limits. The teacher helps the student in their homework with more
time for presentation , and the student learns by different means audio, photos and video. The
classes are dynamic, it is also very detailed. The classes have a short time, helping the student
to de-stress.The student can read and discuss the topic in a virtual way The student It is
conclusion that virtual education is much better due to direct communication between the
student and the teacher
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TIGASI CHUGCHILAN CRISTIAN GEOVANNI

Virtual classrooms in education

Virtual classrooms are an important tool to continue virtual education . The universities saw the
use of virtual platforms as the only method of study, the use of virtual classrooms becomes easier
as we use, homework is much easier, allows us to have the necessary information without the
need to leave our in homes, learning depends a lot on the way in which students learn to use
virtual classrooms and the effort of each one, for sending homework is faster and easier to do,
The health crisis unexpectedly accelerated the use of virtual education and as a vital tool the use
of virtual classrooms. As a result of the use of virtual classrooms we can continue studying
comfortably from our homes, continuing with our dreams of being professionals, the use of
virtual classrooms will be the beginning of a more consolidated virtual education in the country.

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ULLOA CALERO TANIA ESTEFANIA

Virtual education and its benefits2.(main) in education. 1. topic

A virtual classroom is an online learning environment that enables live interaction between the tutor and
students while participating in learning activities. Students have tools to present learning content in
different formats, as well as to implement collaborative and individual activities. Students have access to
personalized learning: in this way they can learn in their own time and phase, there is also a saving of
time and money since the student does not have to move to attend her classes. In addition, the student
develops a wide computational culture, as well as creative and constructive thinking. In the same way, the
student can select the teacher they want, solving problems such as the student feeling uncomfortable with
their teacher and as a consequence, does not learn . THE BODY
In this way, the student has a greater possibility of being able to carry out their studies without neglecting
their other activities, since this modality offers them greater flexibility and accessibility to carry out their
studies. CONCLUSION

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USHCO CHALUISA DARWIN VLADIMIR

Virtual class in education

Virtual class(1) is boring(2). Virtual classes are not understood. There is a lot of distraction
during class. Can’t focus on virtual classes. Every day the classes get boring. Teachers don't
explain well. The internet is cut and they do not understand the class. Classes are not dynamic
between student and teacher. Virtual classes are not taken seriously. Bored sitting at the
computer all day
. In conclusion virtual education is very bad. Students don't worry about learning. They think
they are on holidays. Some students do not have internet at home this hinders their learning.
Since they don't understand the class they don't know how to do their homework.

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VEGA LOPEZ KAREN LISBETH

VIRTUAL CLASSROOMS A SUPPORT IN EDUCATION

1. Virtual classrooms a 2. support in education. Currently it is in charge of transmitting knowledge

and information, being a medium widely used by students and teachers with the arrival of Virtual
Classrooms as a new tool, new doors are opened to the future, one of them is educational information,
allowing access of images, videos, sounds, thus achieving a capture on more complete and compressible
topics and improving communication between student - teacher, where the student can develop their skills
that will facilitate their teaching process. In conclusion, virtual classrooms are a support for student
learning, helping to ensure that their education does not stop and achieve their objectives.

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YAUTIBUG QUISHPI SHIRLEY ASTRID

(2)Virtual (1)education in universities. On the one hand, it favors us since, not being able to go
to the institutions, it serves as a great tool of great help since we can receive classes online, it
helps us to have better learning comunication, since when we cannot receive face-to-face
classes, networks make classes easier for us, but they also disadvantage us since some of the
student do not have access to the Internet, Nor do they hace acess to a computer and cannot
receive their classes propely and thus have learning problems due to a lack of technological
resources. In conclusion, virtual education is beneficial since it helps us as a means of
education in thus type of circumstances that the country is going through, but at the sane time it
disadvantages us since not all of them have the necessary means that interfere whit learning
and development. Of student.

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YUQUILEMA YUCAILLA FRANKLIN JHONNY

PARAGRAPH

Virtual classrooms in education (1) is not a benefit to students (2). Today virtual classrooms in
education have been seen as a new way of learning due to the pandemic facing the entire world.
This type of education has its deficit to learn. A classroom is not the same as a virtual class
because virtually you do not have the necessary means to explain the class, such as a blackboard
that is written on virtual blackboards in virtual classes but is not understood. There are many
factors that hinder classes in the virtual classroom such as the case that the virtual classroom
page has anomalies and collapses on many occasions. The difficult access to a permanent intern
for the students harms this type of classes. The amount of homework sent by teachers is very
large and students are not considered to have multiple subjects. In duress, the student spends
most of the day sitting at the computer, which could be detrimental to visual health because
virtual classes and homework are extensive. Virtual classes are not beneficial for students due to
many inconveniences presented

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