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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
In order to master English well, the learners should master the four English language
skill, namely lListening, rReading, sSpeaking, and wWriting. Linstening and and reading
are known as the receptive skill while speaking and writing are known as the productive
skills (SIL International, 1999). The listening skill refers to the ability in hearing and
understanding what the speakiers say. The reading skill is the ability in reading and
understanding the writen text in English. Speaking skill is related to ability to speak to
other people. Finally, writingb skill is the skill where the lerarners develop or make good
English written composisition. (setiap penjelasan skills, harus diinput sumber dari mana jika
dijelaskan terpisah)
Writing is one of the four language skills which is just as important as the other three
skills. These four skills have become the major focus of English as a foreign language
Writing is not merely putting down some letters to be words, sentences, or joining the to
components, such as : vocabulary and grammar, text management, meaning clarity, and
coherency of ideas (cantumkan sumber). Those all can create problems if the students failed
psychologycal problem come from the writer itself. It happens when writing as a solitary
activity and without the possibility of interaction or the benefit of feedback, it makes the act
of writing skill difficult. Second, the writer ha sto (tidak jelas) compensate for teh (the)
absence of some features, such as keeping the channel of communication open through their
own efforts end ensuring, both through their choice of sentence structure and their sentences
should related each other and sequenced. It is determined as the linguistic problems. Third,
since writing is learned through a process of instruction, the writer must master the written
form of the language and learn certain structures which may be quite different from what
used in speech for effective communication. Furthermore, the writer also has to learn how to
organise (organize)the ideas in such a way that they can be understood process because it
involves mastery of the language as well as cognitive ability to express ideas in writting
form.
Wirting is productive skill that needs regular intensive practice and reherasalrehearsal
(cantukan sumber). It means (to) make a good writing, the writer should pass a complex
process. Producing as well writing product (agak susah dimengerti karena kurang
nyambung dengan kalimat sebelumnya), the writer needs at least four steps: pre-writing,
drafting, revising , and editing (kasi sumber). Pre-writing is the step of thinking the topics of
writing. Drafting is the next step to input the ideas into a series sentences to become
paragraph, thenext the (kata sambung nya diperbaiki) revision step that (kt sambung
diperbaiki) the writer has a revision about the draft of writing, and fourth step that the writer
look whole (the) text if there are still several mistakes about the written product. The writting
can then (tidak usah memakai kt yang berlebih) be published are no other mistakes (Wich
at al,2006) (baca sekali lagi, dan mengerti, grammar dan kata yang kurang).
In foreign language teaching to make writing easier leraners (learners) should have a
good motivation to leran (learn). According to Brown (2000) motivation is the most
important factor when the leraners gets failure or success. Furthermore, Donald in Sardiman
“feeling” and response from a goal. Therefore, motivation also menas a series of an effort in
some condittion (condition) so that the people wan t to do something and (kata2 agak
ambigu, bias dihilangkan saja) if they are not interesed or dislike it they will try to ignore
that feeling and do it. According to Ormord (2014) motivation has six effects on students`
learning and to increased effort and energy, increase initation of (hilangkan saja) and
persistence in activity, affects cognitive process, determine which consequence are reiforcing
Rena (2012) who conducted research in junior high school support the idea, he found that
learning motivation and learning model had effect to the students. The students had higher
achieved their goals (baca lagi, pahami, maksud nya apa, perbaiki) in study better tahn the
others.
Besides the factors of motivation that influence writing ability, teaching method should
principles and methos used for instruction. They may include explaining, demonstrating and
written storytelling and examplesin taht they allow students to personally relate to the
Suharta (2001) state that who conducted research on elementary students` teaching and
learning in Bali, the teacher usually followed routine step by step activirties in their teaching:
the activities included introduction, explaining, and give some exercises, the quality of book
mostly procedural non conceptual, the material in the textbook used spiral system which
focus the stuudents are not led to conceptual thinking. In teaching and learning process in
Junior high schools, these conditions are not very much different.
how the teacher taught students and also investigated the lesson plans. The material was
about how to write an announcement. The students listened to the explanation from the
teacher content of the announcement by using example, and then the students tried to find the
content and the information of announcement. After that the students will asked to write
announcement and did the exercise. It can be concluded that the class was begun by short
explanation about the theory of writing a kind of genre, demonstrating writing and ended by
doing exercise. The other finding showed that almost all of the students made same
grammar mistakes in writing. They will confused in composing their idea to be the main
sentence or supporting sentences (baca kalimat nya sehingga nyambung dengan kalimat
lagi satunya).
The conventional strategy here is use by the teacher to assist the sutdents in general not
step by step as in picture series strategy. Thestudents mostly work on their work and
lecture`s reasonability are only giving scrore. When students do not do well, the score is
low. To make it better, the teacher should choose the right strategy.
In order to support those explanations, the reseracher find some study that uses guided
writing, the resercher find the thesis by Suryaningsih (2010). She did her research in SMPN
4 Mendoyo entitled “ The Effect of Guided Writing And Learning Styles Toward Writing
Competency”, the research result showed that there was a significant difference of writing
competency between the students who were taught by guided writing and those who were
effective. Departement Children, School and Families of Primary National Strategy (2007)
also stated that guided writing essential component of balanced writing curriculum, providing
an additiona. Kellog (in et al.,2011) pointed out that proper writing strategies can enhance
writing performance and reduce attention overload. Other than that, it is also to promote
writing performance, and the teachers can do an important role in helpingstudents develop
viable strategies for getting started, drafting, revising, and editing (Lan, et al.,2011).
Study by Hadayani et al. (2013) also aimed at investigating whether the implementation
of guided writing strategy and the students` achievment motivation gave a significant effect
to the students` writing competency in senior high school. The result shows that, first, there
was a significant difference on the students` writing competency between the students who
were taught by using picture series writing strategy and conventional writing strategy.
Second, there will be a significant interactional effect on the students writing competency
between the strategies apply and the students` achievment motivation. Third, there will be a
significant difference on the students writing competency between the students who had high
achievment motivation when they will be taughteach by picture series writing and
conventional stragtegy. Fourth, there will be a significant difference between the students
writing competency of the students who had low achievment motivation when they will
Many students have different basic English language. Most of them come from primary
national school which has poor basic English language. Therefore, when they are in junior
high school, they still face the same problem. One of the common problems is in writing
skill. They find difficulties in creating sentences especially when writing a paragraph. It can
be seen on observation in English class in SMP PGRI 2 Denpasar during the teaching
learning process, the main problem that the students have writing in English. The students
took a long time to write and organize their ideas. They did not make any correction after
they wrote their paragraphs. Commonly the teacher started the class by giving short
explanation about the theory of writing, a kind of genre, demonstrating writing and ended by
doing excercise. This methode is difficult to be followed by the students because they have
1. Students of SMP PGRI 2 grade 8 just had the ability to pronounce and recognize the
individual words without conveying the message what the teacher extends.
2. Students actually had good knowledge of words and sentence meaning but they failed
paragraph.
This study will conduct in SMP PGRI 2 Denpasar. It covered an investigation finding out
The Effect of Picture Series and Student`s Learning Motivation On Students` Writing
2016/2017.
Based on the problems were identified bove, the problem of the study can be formulatef
as follow:
1. Is there any effect in writing competency between the students who are taugh using
Picture Series Technique and those who are taught using the conventional method?
2. Is there any effect of the interaction between the technique of teaching writing Picture
3. Is there any significant difference in writing competency between the students with
high learning motivation who are taught using Picture Series Technique and those
4. Is there any significant difference in writing competency between the students with
low learning motivation taught using Picture Series Technique and those taught by
Based on the research questions above, this study aimed to obtain emperical evidence
about.
1. The effect of Picture Series Technique on students` writing competency between those
who were taught by Picture Series Technique and those who were taught by conventional
method.
2. To investigate wheter or not there is an effect of the interactiom between the method of
teaching writing (Picture Series Technique) and learning motivation upon students`
writing competency.
between the students with high learningmotivation who are taught by using Picture
Series Technique and those who are taughtby using the conventional strategy
4. To investigate wheter or not there is a significant difference in writing competency
between the students with low learning motivation who are taught by using Picture Series
Technique and those who are taught by using the conventional strategy.
The significant of the present study can be seen on the both theoretical and practical
Theoretically, the finding of the present study will provide some evidence of the
using picture series writing strategy and learning motivation on writing competency
Practically, the findings of the study is expected to provide knowledge and references to
English teachers in regard to teaching writing strategy and learning motivation. The teachers
will be able to consider picture series technique as better aproach in teaching writing to
improve the students` writing competency. It is also to make the efficient way of teaching and
learning activity.
CHAPTER II
Writing is one of the four languages skills which is just as important as the other three
skills. These four skills have become the major focus of English as a foreign language
teaching and learning (Harmer,2007). Writing is a combination of process and product. The
mean of the process is the act of gathering ideas and keep working until the writer presented
Competent people are not only able to perform their knowledge or skills, but also the
primary knowledge of theirs` brain. The people or the students who can we call competent, if
they can produce something or master in something in writing skill, the example is when the
students can make a wriitten product which can develop their`s (ga usah pake s) idea
that provide that provide a structuced guide enabling the identification evaluation and
development of the behaviors in individual. This statement is concern with someone abilityto
explain something with structure to evaluate someone. For example the teaching learning
process in the classroom, where the teacher gives the students theme to write something and
Related to that statement, Brown (2004) also stated that, competence refers to one`s
task in which the focus in the accuracy, development, and reflective of the students; own
idea (Schlig,2008).
Based on the theory above, it can be concluded that competency in writing is the ability
of the students to produce and manage the idea in the writing form. In this case, the
competency writing is involves linguistic and cognitive aspects. The linguistic component
such as the person applies the vocabulary, grammatical, structure, mean while the cognitive
aspect is how the person to understand the language, menage the sentences, and use the
correct utterance in the certain situation. So writing competency is the ability of someone to
conduct organize their self to make written product in correct way and with the certain
criteria such as the language used, grammatical, vocabulary, and also the organization of the
certain paragraph.
There are several expert who provide different opinion on the writting process.
Folse et Al (2001) states that there are seven steps of writing process (1) choosing
topic(2) brainstorming (3) outlining (4) writing the first draft(5) getting feedback from a pee,
(6) revising the draft (7) proof reading the final draft. There are some different opinions from
the experts. Hamer (2004) stated that there are four main elements in writing process:
(1)mplanning, (2) drafting,(3) editing (reflecting and revising), and (4) final revision.
Oshima and Hogue (2007) also stated in line with Hamer, that there are 4 processes of
writing (1) pre-writing, (2) organizing, (4) polishing (refushing and editing).
First, pre-writing is always to get ideas, Oshima and Hogue (2007) stated that pre-writing
is the first step to write something. In this steps the writer should choose the topic, beside that
the writer should collect idea to compose some supporting sentence to explain the topic.
Zemach et Al (2003) also argue that free writing is a step to choose a topic before write
something. One of them is collecting some ideas, the writer can get from several techniques.
Listing is a pre-writing technique which writer write the topic at the top of piece of paper and
then qickly make list of the words or phrases that come into the writer mind (Oshima and
Hogue;2007).
The next step is organize the idea into a simple outline (Oshima anf Hogue;2007). The
writer should arrange their idea in the simple outline. The last step is done by revising and
editing (Oshimaand Hogue;2007). In this case the writer checked what they have written
(Zemach et al;2003). They reviwed the structure and content. They can crosscheck with
friends.
According to Seow (2002) the last steps called post. Writting the steps includes
publishing, sharing, reading aloud, transforming text for the performance in front of the class.
Based on the explanation above, the reasearcher can conclude that the steps of writting are
According to Oshima and Hogue (2009) A paragraph is a group of related sentences that
discuss one (and usually only one) main idea. A paragraph can be as short as one sentences or
as long as ten sentences. The number of sentences is unimportant, however, the paragraph
Winter (1999) states that paragraph is a form of written communication which contains a
minimum of five sentences. Each sentences in paragraph “ talks about” or develops one
single main idea. Here if want to make a good paragraph so the writer should construct it by
have one main idea and supporting sentences. One paragraph has 5 sentences more. Main
topic is the main idea of a paragraph. This sentence is the key of the paragraph that will be
written(Winter,1999). Winter (1999) also argue that topic sentence can be put in the front of
the paragraph or the middle or theend of the paragreph, after the writer have the main
sentece, then the writer should construct the supporting sentences. Supporting sentences is
the helper. By supporting sentences the writters are able to make a beautiful paragraph.
The structure of paragraph according to the Oshima and Hogue (2007) are the topic
sentence, supporting sentence, and concluding sentences. In line with Oshima and Hogue
(20017), Zemach and Rumisek (2003) also stated that paragraph has three basic parts, they
are topic sentence, supporting sentence, and concluding sentence. (1) Topic sentence is the
main idea of the paragraph. Is usually the first sentence of the paragraph and it is most the
general sentence of the paragraph, Zemach et al. (2003) argue. (2) According to Zemach et al
supporting sentences are the sentences that talk about or explain the topic sentence, and it is
more detailed ideas that follow the topic sentence. Oshima and Hogue (2007) supporting
sentences explain the topic by giving some information in supporting point sentences. So,
supporting sentences are sentences which are explain some information related to the topic
that will be written. (3) Concluding sentences according to Oshima and Hogue (2007) are the
signals of the end of paragraph. It is remind the reader of the main idea. It is usually located
in the end of paragraph and sometimes just repeat about the main topic or just giving te final
comment.
Based on the explanation above the researcher can conclude that paragraph is a group of
sentences that explain one main topic. The structure of the paragraph is a main sentences
which is explain to the related topic, and the last is concluding sentences which is the end of
paragraph which repeat the main sentence or just giving the final comment.
teaching English. They are able to engage the students in a topic or as the basis of the whole
activity. Using pictures is one of the ways that can be used in teaching English. According to
Raimes (2011) pictures can help the teachers and students in teaching and learning
motivation. Picture series is an instructional media. Picture series can be guidance of writing
activity (Sadiman, 2005:29). The pictures are one of the solutions that can help the
teachers to explain language meaning and construction. The teachers are able to cope
with the problems in teaching English. A picture is an illustration of picture that can
picture is one of the media of communication that can show people, place and thing
Picture can make anyone getting clearer ideas or information than language term.
Pictures as visual will atrract students` attention, and motivationthem to lear. In addition
using series picture means that the students try to connect the plot in the picture to be link of
story. Brown (2004) stated taht a picture can be used in many stages of the instructional
Furthermore, he suggests some ways of using pictures for ensuring maximum students
benefit from using them. Using pictures can be an effective technique for any proficiencies
level or language skill. To teach speaking where the students share personal experiences that
somehow relate to what is happening in a picture they have been given and drawn.
There are some types of pictures used in the English teaching and learning. One
of them is picture series. A series of pictures is sequence pictures of a single subject that is
aimed to tell a story and also a sequence of events. According Brown (2004) to understand
the way of the picture series, the students need to appreciate it in abstract way. In the
same way, when they express their ideas to construct the story in a good coherence as well as
unity, they have to think it in abstract excessively. Both of them will be easier for
them in learning process if the teacher can use picture series. It cannot only help the students
to get ideas more realistic in understanding the recount text but also in constructing
ideas to create it. During the students are writing the text, they can use top-down technique in
predicting the content of the text based on understanding of picture series. Based on that, the
pictures give the schemata to the students to construct ideas from their background
Joklova (2009) states the picture is used in a more meaningful and real life
communicative way then being just displayed for students to say what they can actually see.
Picture Series is suitable in teaching learning activities. In this research the researcher wants
to give an interesting way to teach using Picture Series for learning will make the students
easy to understand and will guide the students to write .Picture Series is usually taught and
used by students, So Picture Series (hurif kecil) will easily gain the interest from the student
in junior high school and also can motivate students and improve their writing ability.
Harmer (2002:69) states that there are various number of writing tasks that
students can be asked to undertake and one of them is students can be given a series
of pictures which tell story and they have to write story based on the pictures. He
then adds that giving the students sequence picture as the writing task will incite them to
be creative writers. The students will explain their understanding about the pictures.
The use of pictures can provoke the creativity of the students. Pictures are often used
to present the situations in the learning process. For this reason, teacher can also use
the pictures in their activity. One of the visual media commonly used in the teaching
and learning process is pictures. Smaldino (2005:240) states that pictures are photographic
(representation of people, places, and things in the form of two dimensional that
sometime in the form of sequential pictures (in series). There are some activities that are
proposed by Harmer (2004:67). The first activity is describing pictures. In this task the
students have to describe the pictures. The teacher also gives the limitation to demand the
students to finish the task. The teacher can make the activity more engaging by
The second activities are suspects and objects. In this task, the teacher gives the students
a variety of pictures. The students have to describe only one of them. The students then
give their description to another student who has to identify which pictures is being
Writing the postcard is the third activity. In this task, the teacher gives the
postcard scenes and then asks the students to write postcard which they would expect
to write to an English-speaking from such a location. The fourth activity is portraits. The
teacher will give the students some portraits. The students have to think about the person
they see there. Do they look happy or sad, extrovert or introvert? When the students have
studied the portrait they will know what kind of letter they want to write. This activity can
be done with photographs and provided that they go some way to capture the personality of
Harmer (2004: 69) states that pictures are really useful ways to prompt students into
writing stories. There are a number of different tasks which students can be asked to
• for dramatic pictures (such as a man crossing a canyon on a tightrope, people in a street
protest, or someone who has come face-to-face with a wild animal) students can asked
bicycle, a pack of cards, a dog, a fireplace, etc.) and told to choose four of them, and
• students can be given a series of pictures in sequence which tell a story. They
• students can be given a picture and a headline or caption and asked to write the story
In this research study, a series of pictures in sequence will be used as the main media to
improve students' writing skill. An appropriate media in teaching writing can help students
achieve their writing skill.
Picture series is recommended for it has many benefits in the writing learning process.
The first benefit using picture series is that it will make the students interested in
writing English because picture series is one of the visual teaching media (Smaldino
2005 :9).
The second benefit is picture series will stimulate the students to develop and use their
imagination so that they will be able to write well. Then, it will also help students in
expressing the ideas. The last benefit is that picture series will improve the students'
motivation in writing. Students can construct their knowledge during writing a text easily
by using media. One of the media is picture series. Media make the student more
easily to explore their ideas. The media must be used in integated way in teaching and
learning.
In this research study, picture series will be used as the main media to improve students'
writing skill. In implementing picture series in the research, there are processes that
need to be done by the researcher and other members of the research. They are
designing the lesson plan for the teaching and learning, designing the teaching
techniques used to implement the picture series, then selecting the appropriate and
Picture series have some importance in teaching writing. But on the other hand,
the use of picture series also has some negative sides. There are two negative sides.
First, students are not able to use oral language skill effectively. In this case, students find
difficulties in presenting their writing in front of the class. They cannot present their
stories fluently and communicatively. Therefore, teachers need to give the chances for
the students to practice dialog or monolog in the stories they made before. Another
negative side of using pictures series as media to teach writing is the teachers do not
have enough time to teach and evaluate the writing process. In the writing process,
students are given such picture series to be done into narrative composition. Students
have to work by their own. Teacher only give some important rules which are
usually become unclear directions. Teachers do not big have enough time to guide
them well, especially when the class consists of big number of students.
From the statements above the writer could conclude that the teacher could ask
the students about the difficulties in writing using picture series. Then the teacher
would give some feedbacks. The teacher could give them the task about picture series and
then the students had to tell their writing to another student. The teacher also had to give
the enough time to explain about the material using picture series so that the students
could clear enough about the material.
The curriculum has syllabus which is able to be developed by the teachers. Commonly
the teachers developed the indicators in the syllabus based on the result expectation and their
students. Here is the syllabus of writting competency in general. The English learning in
junior high school is targeted to make the students able to write and communicate with
English. The propose of English subject in junior high school are: 1) to develop students
spoken and written ability, 2) to be aware on how important of English language is and to
have ability to compete with global community, 3) develop students understanding about the
4. Writing a descriptive
correct arrangement.
5. Writing a descriptive
diction.
6. Writing descriptive
and articles.
7. Writing a descriptive
mechanics, such as
capitalization.
Based on those indicators the students should be able to write a descriptive text that has
coherence between the title, the topic, and developing sentence. The text also has a good
diction, using correct grammar, in term of tenses, use of pronouns, preposition and articles.
Beside that the text should used correct mechanic such as punctuation, spelling, and
capitalization.
This syllabus is commonly used in all junioor high school which the indicators based on
the result expectation. The teacher divided the indicators into three or more meetings to make
the students able to achieve all the indicators. On the other hand if the students have high
Conventional refers to the way in which something is done by most peoplein general. A
person who follows the conventional strategy; what is the tradittional and or the way
someting has been done for a long time ago, time is the point of this strategy. According to
Hornby (2006) convention means thw way in which something is done by most people in
general.the conventional writing strategy is a tecahing method which usually used by the
teacher in teaching learning process in the classroom. Its mean that this is a conventional
strategy which is generally, perform and acceptable by the teacher in conducting instruction.
teaching strategy which is used regulary by the teacher in his/her lesson. Connected to this
study, the conventional writing strategy refers the common strategy that is used by the eighth
grade students in SMP PGRI 2 Denpasar. The conventional writing strategy activity in the
class such as (1) the startingpoint with the short explaination of the theory, definition which
the students should remember about it. It is a representation related tothe topic given. (2) the
teachers gives the students examples, (3) finally the teacher gives the students exercise.
From that teaching method the students become always receive what the teacher give
without finding the concept alone. The teachers will proud to the students if the students can
remember and retell what they have learned orally from the teacher said or from the
habdbook that they have. The stress of this method is memorizing not understanding. As a
teaching method above, the teacher will fully control the material and the method will
explanation.
Here is the comparison of the two writing strategies are presented, in order to make the
meaning and the differences of both strategy in writing clear. The comparison of Picture
Series strategy and conventional strategy can be seen in the following table.
Table 2.1 the Difference of Picture Series Strategy and Conventional Strategy
the topic.
2. Students get more opportunities Students get less opportunities for self
activities.
6. In the last session, the teacher In the last session, the teacher
gives the students chance to discusses about the task what has been
Ames (2011) states learning motivation also means a series of an effort in some
conditiom in learning something so that the people want to do something and if they are not
interest or dislike it they will try to ignore that feeling and do it. Uno (2008) states that
learning motivation appears because of the existance of intrinsic and extrinsic factors can be
in forms of the exixtance reward and interesting activity. Learning motivation refers to a
drive that makes learners be motivated to learn. Sardirman (2009) states that some
characteristics of the learners who have learning motivation, such as;(1) they always try to do
the tasks given by their teacher as well as possible, (2) they arte not statisfied with what they
have achieved, (3) they show interest in certain fields, (4) they like to do something by their
self, (5) they are motivated to do challenging tasks, (6) they defend their opinion; and (7) they
like to search and solve some question. Teacher need doing motivation for students in
teaching learning process. There are many way to give motivation for student such as; give
praise, appreciation, honor, a free level up, or disapproval in order to motivate the students to
be better.
Every teacher often use incetive for raises students motivation to students in gettibg the
goal. This treatment will work effectively if the goal consist of aa satisfaction destination for
learners. In this condition the teachers must be creative and imaginative to provide this
incentive. Motivation is considered important in learning because its function, and its value.
Based on the explanation oabove, motibation encourages the behavior and effecting and
1. Encourage the behavior and attitude. Without motivation, there will not action for
examples study.
The use of picture and picture series in teaching and learning process, includes in
teaching writing is indeed not relatively new. There are some results of relevant studies on
the use of picture and picture series.
The study about using picture in teaching writing has been done before by
Septyan Angga Saputra (2010). He states that using pictures to teach writing can help the
students to improve their writing skill. Pictures are good media to stimulatethe
communication activities. By using picture the teacher can conduct many communication
activities. He also states that there is a significant difference between students` writing skills
who taught using picture series and those who are not. It is proved by the resulth of
ANCOVA which significance level of 0.05, which means that the data of this study are
Picture series was selected as an effective media to improve students' writing skill. By
using picture series, students would be interest in writing. Picture series also helped students
develop their skill. Picture series helped the teachers create context to make language
meaningful. Moreover, students could get involved in the activity and contribute in their
group. In group-work games, as an activity, the students could work together, help each
other, and solve the problems, related to writing. An appropriate media in teaching writing
Learning through picture series made the students relax and interest because these
activities created a good atmosphere in the classroom. It would improve the students'
motivation. When the students were motivated, ideas might come up in their minds and they
were able to write easily. They could learn grammar and new vocabulary through picture
series.
Compared with using picture series in teaching and learning writing, teaching and
learning without picture series seemed monotonous. The classes were static and formal.
The students would get bored soon. The teachers that use the conventional method
just collected the students' work and corrected it in several days. Students would not be
motivated in learning writing because the way of teaching was not varied and students
would get so bored. The teacher in SMP 3 Sleman used paragraph writing technique in
teaching writing. Freeman (2000 :23) argued that paragraph writing technique that is
usually used in direct method. The teacher asked the students to write a paragraph in
their own words. They wrote based on their memory or a passage in the lesson as a
model. Then, she adds the picture series in her teaching. The students became more
communicative than before, they had certain features in common with real
which is meaningful.
Picture series coul be desired. By applaying media, it helped the students on their
writing skill better than those who were not given it. The implementation of the media
involved the researcher. The English teacher and students at the eight grade of SMPN 3
Based on the above theoretical foundation and conceptual framework, the research
1. There is any significant difference in writing between the students who taught using
Picture Series and those who are taught using the conventional strategy.
2. There is any intercational effect between picture series and learning motivation on
with high learning motivation who are taught by using picture series and those who
4. There is a significant difference in writing competency between the students with low
learning motivation who are taught by picture series and those who are taught by the
conventional strategy.
In consideration with the theoretical rivew, the researcher conducted a research on the
Effect of Picture Series and Students Learning Motivation on Students` Learning Motivation
Year 2016/2017. This research will be done by colaborating all: writing competency, Picture
CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
Tyhe present study dealt with effect of Picture Series of the students` and students
learning motivation on the students` writing competency at seventh grade students` of SMP
PGRI 2 Denpasar in academic year 2016/2017. Based on the research problem, this study is
an experimental reserach because it is to examine the hypothesis based on the theories to find
the answer of the problem. Factorial design essentially is a experiment modify design scillicet
attention to possibility of the variable moderator which influent the result (Sugiyono, 2011).
This study use three variables: 1 independent variable abd 1 dependent variable , and 1
moderator variable. The independent variable was writing strategy (A) as treatment variables.
In this study the treatment variables were classfified into guided strategy (A1) and
conventional writing strategy (A2). Meanwhile, the second independent variable was
students` learning motivation in study English (B) as moderator variable. The moderator
variable was also into high learning motivation and low learning motivation. The dependent
variable was students` writing competency (Y). The constellation of the 2x2 factorial
Motivation (X)
A1B1 : Group of high learning motivatinon leraners taught by using picture series strategy
A2B1 : Group of high learning motivation learners taught by using conventional writing
strategy.
A1B2 : Group of low learning motivation learners taught by using picture series strategy.
A2B2 : Group of low learning motivation learners taught by using conventional writing
strategy.
1. Target Population
The population on this study was all members of Eight Grade Students of SMP PGRI 2
students.
2. Sample
Sample is a part of the number and the characteristic that the populations have
(Sugiyono,2011). In this study the researcher used simple random sampling. Thus, the sample
of the study will two classess of eight grade students (calss 8) of SMP PGRI 2. One class as
experimental class comprised of 40 students, and the other class as control class comprise of
34 students as well.
3. Research variables
Best and Khan (2003) variables are the charactheristic that the researcher manipulates,
control, and observe from the group members of the group under study.
Dependent variable and independent variable were two main types of variables involved.
According to Best and Khan (2003), independent variables are the condition or characteristic
attemted to as certain their relationship to observed phenomena. Dependent variables are the
independent variable.
According to explanation obove, the independent variable was picture series writing
strategy (B1). Moderator variable was the learning motivation (B2) which consists of high
motivation students and the low learning motivation students. Meanwhile, the dependent
Writing competency was the dependent variable in this presents study. Here is the
1. Conceptual Definition
Writing competency is te ability in performing writing task, in which the focus not
only on feature accuracy, but also on the development, organization, anf effective
2. Operational Definition
assesing the some criteria in writing, namely organization, content, mechanics, and
conventions, and word choice, by using analytic scoring rubric for writing.
1. Conceptual Definition
a. Picture Series
Pictures as visual will atrract students` attention, and motivationthem to lear. In addition
using series picture means that the students try to connect the plot in the picture to be
link of story. Brown (2004) stated tahta picture can be used in many stages of the
and achievement. Furthermore, he suggests some ways of using pictures for ensuring
maximum students benefit from using them. Using pictures can be an effective technique
for any proficiencies level or language skill. To teach speaking where the students share
personal experiences that somehow relate to what is happening in a picture they have
conventional writing strategy is teaching strategy which is used regulary by the teacher
2.Operational Conception
a. Picture Series
Picture Series is a strategy implementated by the teacher to give the students chance to
deve;op their own idea in the class activity. Before writing, the students are provided through
examples of specific topic.
Conventional writing strategy is the strategy that regulary used to teach English in SMP
PGRI 2 Denpasar, in which the teacher has a dominant role in teaching learning process
Learning motivation is the moderator variable in this present study. The following is the
1. Conceptual Definition
Sadirman (2011) states that learning motivation refers to a drive that makes learners
be motivated to learn.
2. Operational Definition
which can be traced from their effort to stay focus with that they learn in order to
achieve well in a subject matter. The dimensions of learning motivation are success
1. Doing the observation to the school in the teaching learning process, and permit to
2. Making the instrument. All instrument needed were prepared. Before the instruments
used, it should be consulted with the several expert which including to the expertx
judges.
3. Testing the validitty and reliability. Both control and experimental group was given
Group Embedded figure test. It is attempt to classify the students which has low and
8. Finally the researcher analyzes the data to answer the problem of the research.
Observation
Post-Test Post-Test
Firstly all instrument were consulted with several expert including to the expert
judges,before the instrument used the researcher will taste the validity and reliability. Then
both control and experimental group will give learning motivation test. After that simple
random sampling will use to determined the sample. Two groups were treadted differently.
The control group treated by using conventional writing strategy, the experiment group was
treated by using picture series writing strategy. After conducting the treatment, the posttest
will administer and also interview will conducted again the information. Analyzing wata will
conduct by : the first will descriptive analysis and two-way ANOVA to answer first and the
second hypothesis, thye tukey test wil use to answer the third the fourth hypothesis.
3.5 Instruments
There were two kinds of instrument use in this studyP: treatment instrument and research
instrument.
1. Teaching scenario a
As guidance for the teacher, teaching scenario was prepared when conducting an
instruction. There were two types of teaching scenario used by the researcher, which
included the teaching scenario for the experimental group and teaching for the
control group. The teaching was prepared to control teaching and learning activities.
The teaching was made to describe teh procedure and the application of picture
series.
2. Teaching Handout
Teavhing handout consist of important points that closely related to the materials or
content of the lesson such as theory of paragraph, generic structure, and component
Instrument was measuring instrument to quantify what will answer. The instrument here
is test. Test will be use to quantify the students` learning in writing competency. Qustionnaire
wiull be use to measure the motivation of the students. Questionnaire will adopted by the
relevant study. The questionnaire will be conducted by the learning motivation of the students
wich used the picture series writing and conventional writing. Teaching scenario will be
prepared by the teacher as guidance when conducting an instruction. Post test will be used to
Writing competency and lerning motivation qustionnaire ate the two kind of research
intsrument. Those instrument were tested for its validity and reliability. Ary et al.(2010),
validity was defended as the extent to wich and instrument measured what it claimed to
whatever it is measuring.
The coeficient reliability of each test was then categorize based on the following
Coeficient qualification
Writing test was adminired during the treatment and in postest. The postest measures the
students` writing competency after being given treatment. Analytic scoring rubric made for
assessed the students writing, the researcher used the analytic scoring rubric containing five
No Criteria Description
1. Organization This criterion deals with the title of paragraph, of the topic
sentence, and the supporting sentences of the paragraph.
2. Content This criterion deals with the logical development of ideas of the
sentences in the paragraph, and the paragraphs` unity and
coherence. Specifically, the logical development of ideas of each
paragraph in the present study is contextual, in which each
paragraph has its own generic structure and its appropriate order,
such as aspatial or sequential.
3. Grammar The criterion deals with the grammar use in the paragraph which
covers the tenses, subject-verb agreement, use of pronouns,
prepositions and articles.
4. Mechanic and The criterion deals with the mechanics and conventions in the
Conventions paragraph which covers spelling, punctuation, and capitalization.
5. Word Choice This criterion deals with the vocabulary use or diction in the
paragraph wether the words use are appropriate or not that effects
the meaning.
In order to good, the instrument has to be realiable and valid, for those, the researcher
tested the realiability and validity of the instrument.
a. In Validation Instruments
In research that always depends upon measurements, the validity of the instrument
should be considered. Heaton (1988) states that the validity of the test is the extent to which it
measures what it is supposed to measure and nothing else. This present study, the researcher
measured the content validity of the test in the present study, the researcher measured the
content validity of the test. In order to be valid, the content of the test is concerneed with the
content of English subject, including basic competency and achievement indicators. Heming
(1987) said that in order to ensure the content validity, it is necessary to seek the advice of the
content experts. For those the researcher consulted the test with supervisors who become an
Judge I
Relevant Irrelevant
Judge II Relevant D B
5 0
Irrelevant C A
0 0
Regarding to the result above, it was the analyzed using Gregory`s formula to find the
CV= D
A+B+C+D
CV= 5
0+0+0+5
CV= 5
5
= 1.0
The post test were consider having high validity when the result of the calculation using
Gregory`s formula is more than 0.70 the finding result the validity was 1.00, it means that test
b. Testing Validity
One of the process to estimate the realiability is estimates by two more raters which
are termed inter-rates reliability. There are two steps in estimation of inter-rates reliability,
first the ratings of all ratesr must be intercorrelated, the second is the correlation coefficient is
adjusted by means of the Spearman-Brown Prophecy Formula to make the final reliability.
r11 = MKe
MK1
Note:
r11 : Inter-rater realiability coefficient
MKe : Rater 1 – rater 2 mean square interaction
MK1 : inter-rater mean square
r11 = 1- MKe
MK1
= 1 - 35.125
596.8399
= 0.94
In this present study the researcher measure the writing competency of the students was
0.94. according to the Guildford reliability qualification, it showed that it hard very high
qualification.
beginning of the experiment. Amest (2011) states learning motivation also means a series of
an effort in some condition in learning something so that the people want to do something
and if they are not interest or dislike it they will try to ignore that felling and do it. In this
present study, questionnaire was chosen to measure the students` learning motivation. The
purpose of learning motivation questionnaire was also to know the students who have high or
The learning motivation questionnaire was buid by seven indicators. The indicators
which are consist in the questionnaire such as: (1) Success orientation, (2) Failure
anticipation, (3) Innovation, (4) Responsibility toward tasks, (5) Affection towards learning
statements
Positive Negative
1. Success 1. Being sensitive towards things 1,3, 2,4,5 5
orientation related to improvement of
learning result.
2. Activities achieving learning 6,8 7,9 4
2. Failure 1. Accuracy in determining. 11 10 2
2. Efforts to overcomes blocking 12,13 14,15 4
anticipation
situationto achieve success
3. Innovation 1. Detemining something briefly, 16,18 17 3
shortly, and efficiently
2. Willing to compete as feedback. 19,20 21 3
3. Loving challenge either from in 22,24 23 3
our of self
4. Responsibility 1. Perfection in finishing the tasks. 25,27 26 3
2. Confidance and tough in 28,29,37,38 32,33 5
towards task
finishing the tasks
5. Affection 1. Relevancy of psychological 31,34 32,33 4
towards emotion.
2. Confidance and tough in 35,39 36 3
learning
finishing the tasks.
strategies
6. Relevance Comperhending learning benefits 40,41,43 42 4
Total 50
In order to measure the learning motivation, in this present study the researcher used
Likert scale. There was 50 statements of questionnaire was built by 8 indicators. Some of
statements as built as positive and negative statements. Every answer from statement, if the
statement positive were give five to one points. In positive statements 1 means Strongly
disagree, 2 means disagree, 3 means Neither agree nor disagree, 4 means Agree, 5 means
Strongly disagree. Furthermore if the statements negative were give one to five. 5 means
strongly disagree, 4 means Disagree, 3 means Neither agree nor disagree, 2 means Agree, 1
a. Validation of Questionnaire
as one of the ways to obtain data is asking questions, questionnaire was utiliezed to
obtain information concerning the motivation in learning. In order to find out whether the
questionnaire items were valid or drop, Microsoft Excel program used to gather the data.
50 0
Irrelevant C A
0 0
The result of the above comparison was analyzed using Gregory`s formula to find the
CV= D
A+B+C+D
CV= 50
0+0+0+50
CV= 50
50
= 1.0
The learning motivation questionnaire test was cinsiders having haigh validity when the
result of the calculation using Gregory`s formula is more than 0.70, thew findingresult the
validity was 1.00, it meant that the test was cinsidered valid and having haigh validity.
Emperical validity was further done through trying out the questionnaire and the result of
trying out was analyzed by using product moment correlation to determine which item were
valid or invalid.
The data obtained both post-test will be given to the experimental group and will be
analyzedby using two forms of statistical analysis, namely descriptive statistic analysis and
the particular group of individuals observed. It means the data in this study will be analyzed
solely in descriptive way. The descriptive analysis of the study includes measures of central
tendency or averages (mean, median and mode) and measures of spread or dispersion
1. Mean
Mean is the most widely used measure ofcentral tendency, or arithmetic average. It
is the sum of all the scores in a distribution divided by the number of cases.
(Ary,2010:108).
2. Median
3. Mode
The mode is the value in a distribution that occurs most frequrently. It is the
4. Standars Deviation
Standard deviation is the square root of the variance and a measure of spred or
5. Variance
Variance is the sunof the squard deavition from the mean, devided by the total
6. Range
differences between the highest score and the lowest score. (Best and Kahn,2003).
3.5.2 Inferential Analysis
Inferential statistical analysis is using two-way ANOVA that will be used to compare the
mean score since the data will be gathered in the form of interval data. It will be continued by
Before conducting data analysis by making use of two-way ANOVA the researcher
needed to test the measurement of the normality and homogenity of the data.
1. Normality test
The purpose of normality test is to know the distribution of the data closed to normal.
Therefore, the researcher used ths technique for measuring the normality of data
distribution by using SPSS-21.0 for windows. The data was categorized normal
homogeneous or not. When the Level test shows significant score that is more than
0.50, it indicates that the data has a homogeny population. The calculation of the
Statistic analysis used to measure the first and the seconf hyphothesis in this present
study the researcher used two-way ANOVA. In this case the researcher compare the
result of study from 2 groups with different strategy, picture series strategy and
conventional strategy with moderator variable was learning motivation. After done
teh normality and homogeneity tes, the data the analyzedwith two-way ANOVA.
Turkey test was administeres for finding the third and the fourth hypothesis. Statistic
who are taugh by using picture series and thowe who were taught by using conventional
writing.
Ho : µ A1 = µ A2
H1 : µ A1 ≠ µ A2
Ho : INT A X B = 0
H 1 : INT A X B ≠ 0
motivation students who were taught by using picture series strategy and conventional
writing strategy.
Ho : µ A1B1 = µ A2B1
H1 : µA1B2 ≠ µ A2B2
motivation students who were taught by using picture series strategy and the conventional
writing strategy.
Ho : µ A1B2 = µA2B2
H1 : µA1B2 ≠ µ A2B2
Notes :
µ A1 : The mean score of the group of students treated by picture series strategy.
µ A2 : The mean score of the group of students treated by conventional writing strategy.
picture series.
µ A1B2 : The mean score of group low learning motivation students who were treat by using
picture series.
µ A2B1 : The mean score of group high learning motivation students who were treat by using
µ A2B2 : The mean score of group low learning motivation students who were treat by using
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