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Laptop or Notebook
A laptop computer, or simply laptop, is a portable computer which usually weighs 4-8
pounds (2 to 4 kilograms), depending on display size, and etc. other factors it is also will accommodate a What do you
In your introduction,
you need to make mean by this
the sentences built-in disk drive unit and, optionally, a floppy drive unit. Furthermore, it contains integrated webcams, sentence?
general so it will built-in microphones and integrated modem for communication. The latest laptops also have
not overlap with the
touchscreens. While a notebook typically weigh less than 5 pounds and are small enough — "notebook
last sentence on your
introduction. sized" — to fit easily in a backpack or briefcase. While the two terms seem to be used interchangeably
Here, the sentencesto the computer novice, there is actually a defined difference between the two kinds of portable
are too specific.
computers. In essence, the difference between laptop and notebook is size and functionality, but there
is much more to these portable PCs. These two things is a modification of computer and also have some You have
similarities and differences that will be discussed in here. explained some
of the
similarities in
Both of laptop and notebook have some similarities, but only one similarity and one difference the previous
will be discussed in this paragraph. The similarity between laptop and notebook is they are portable. As sentences.
the time passes laptop and notebook has undergone many changes one of them is the weight. The
weight between these two things has been designed to be lighter make people easy to carry it
everywhere. They are very suitable and fit in a backpack in general. Otherwise there is also the
difference between laptop and notebook. Laptops usually have SSDs nowadays but not a lot of capacity.
Some models have 128GB of SSD storage, which is barely sufficient. However, more expensive models
come with a storage space of up to 1TB. In the other hand notebooks are almost completely limited to
SSD due to the fact it is the much smaller type of storage as you can expect a lot of advantages in the
terms of speed and noise. I dont understand the last part of the sentence here?

Laptop and notebook are also design for personal use. By the design laptop and notebook help You are
the user to finish their work by using laptop and notebook. Both of them are very helpful for the user to looking at the
work on their personal stuff or even work for their company. However, as hardware capabilities two devices
from two
increased, laptops became powerful enough to become primary computers for many people. The different ideas.
I don't understandgrowth of smartphone and tablet use also reduced the need and usability of a desktop unit, as well as you look at the
the function laptop for
of this sentence the need for a large laptop. Notebooks also started featuring high-resolution screens, while the need for being more
in the whole DVD drives was reduced as broadband Wi-Fi and streaming through services like Netflix became powerful, but
paragraph? then what
ubiquitous. about
notebook? If
As you can see, there are a lot of differences between laptops and notebooks. As a matter of the last
fact, these are not the same devices, nor they have been developed for the same purposes. Keep in sentence is
your
mind that you will have to know all regarding your requirements and applications before you choose to explanation
purchase a laptop or a notebook. It is also depend on the user which they use. about the
notebook, it
seems to me
the idea is
First, you said that you will only talk about one similarity and one difference, but ended up writing more than one. quite different
Second, your first sentence on your conclusion does not support your idea of having one similarity and one difference. from having a
You really need to be careful here. Make sure every sentence supports every claim that you make. powerful
you are comparing one idea against the two topics, not looking at the difference between the two topics from different ideas. hardware.