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sentence mentions
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compare and
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sentense Conv erselipri
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colorf
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nf actthepeopl ehav ear gumentaboutt hisi ssueandabout sentences in this
paragraph?
ateareideas choosi ngthebestoft hem.Asr esult, thepeopl efel lconfusewhent he
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toboth contrastofst ateuniversit
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andcont rast haveabachel or’sdegreebutbot hoft hem alsohav edi ff
er enceswhi char e
thecostf orstudent ,
thepr ogram av aluabl
eandt hest andar dscor efor
student ’
ssuccess.
Thesesent ences
colorf
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rstsimilarti
esofstateuniversit
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areideas univer
siti
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previously, then
(si
mal ar
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rstdegreest udentcanr eceiveinhisorher mentioned that
bothuniversi
ty academi ccar eer,wit
htheexeptionoft heassoci atedegree.The there are also
differences, but
bachelor’sdegr eeissometimesawar dedafterl
earninganassoci ate then, you have
another
degree,throughi tisoft
enthefirstdegr eethatisgotten.Whet herornot similarities. What is
associatesdegr eecanbegot tenf i
rstdependupont hear eaofst udy.Bot
h
your plan?

oftheuni ver
si t
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sdegr re.

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heprogram av al
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sentences
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rstdefferencesi sthatcost
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lowandr ed
thatmustbepaidbyst udent.Manypeopleassuneapubl i
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ndicat
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cheapherthenaprivatecoll
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tionfeesar ereducedf or
are
stateresi
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.Butthepostst i
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deascont rast
price.
(defferences)
andcompar ea
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youract ual cost ,evenbringingitclosetot hecostofapubl i
ccol l
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labi
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cuniversityareofet nablet ooff erwiderr ange
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llcontrast ofsubj estf ory out ostudyaswel l asmor eteacher st oov erthem.And
(defferences) alsodef ferencesi sthestandardofscor i
ngf orstudentt est .Oract uall
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andcompar e reall
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ersit
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(si
mi lart
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nt hemat erial
.
bothuni versi
ty)
Concl
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rom t
hesever
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Thissent encesconcludi
ng
paragraph.Thesummar i
es
First, you do not need to put colour or extra explanation. I want to have the full writing clean.
Second, the ideas that you want to convey related to the comparison and contrast ideas are not theideasi ncompare
clear explained here. You have so much explanation, but they do not support both your (si
mi l
art
ies)and
comparative and contrastive ideas.
contrast(deffer
ences)
Is this really your own writing?
betweent heaboth