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Comments for Arjo’s SLK:

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Cover page All caps in the title
PRONOUN – ANTECEDENT (GRAMMAR)
for English Grade 6
2 Capitalize the first letter in the third paragraph,
Self-learning Kit
3 Include the competency code of the learning competency
(sample, EN5G – IV e-1.9.1) Put it after the gender)

Number 2 objective, just fix the spacing. (diretso lang do


not enter appropriate…)
4 I. WHAT DO I KNOW? (Change you to I)

In the letter, do not capitalize your name.


Hello Arjo!

II. WHAT DO I NEED TO KNOW?

Check the first sentence of the first examples, She can’t


wait to give you? It seems that some words are missing.
6 III. WHAT I HAVE LEARNED?
Include creative titles in your activities.

Check the font size of the number 9. Make sure it is


Century Gothic, 14
7 Justify your sentences in activity 1.
8 In your directions, when you say draw an arrow, include a
sample arrow, when you say underline, show an
underlined word so that learners will understand it.

Bold the options in activity 2 (her/their) apply to all


9 Number 1, Because of the pandemic. (small letter p)
Number 5, fix the part from were very went home happily
(it is wrong in grammar) probably it is
the street children went home happily
11 Heading is missing for LRMS. I will send the sample page
for this. So that you can patter your SLK.

You are the writer, right? You must change the name of
the writer.

ARJORINO CORPUZ (complete name)


Writer/Illustrator/Layout-Artist
Back page In the back page, do not include the word synopsis
anymore. Explain its importance for the learners. I will
also send examples.
14 Remove the excess page.

Congratulations! Job well done my friend. Going there. More on format and some pages lang. Enjoy
editing. Proud of you, frienny!

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