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WHAT IS PLAIN LANGUAGE?

- from the Latin word


PLAIN LANGUAGE….. “Aureus”which means
-also known as “plain English” “gilding’’ or supposed
- is easy to read, understand, or use. heightening of diction in one
- is grammatically correct language that includes language
complete sentence structure and accurate - Example
usage. Up sprang the goldyn candill
-is clear, concise, organized and appropriate for matutyne,
the audience.
- is free from jargon and rarely used words & With clere depurit bemes
terms , and comes straight to the point being cristallyne
processed. -Matutyne, depurit and
WRITE FOR YOUR AUDIENCE cristallyne are aureate words.
Put yourself in your reader’s shoes Translation
Who is my audience? Up rose the sun with clear pure
What are the needs and objectives of the crystal light
audience? Corporate Jargon
What does my audience already know about - Is the jargon often used in large
the subject? corporations.
What questions will my audience have? - Reference to such jargon is
EXAMPLE: derogatory, implying the use
Wordy long and complicated words
The Dietary Guidelines for Americans EXAMPLES
recommends a half-hour or more of moderate 1.“Open the kimono” is used in
physical activity on most days, preferably every business speak which means
day. The activity can include brisk walking, sharing information with an
calisthenics, home care, gardening, moderate outside party
sports exercise, and dancing. 2. “Chapter 11” a US code
Clear which means bankruptcy
Do at least 30 minutes of exercise, like brisk Gobbledygook
walking, most days of the week. - Refers to speech or other use of
Keep It Short language that is nonsense, or
There is no escaping the fact that it is that appears to be vague, long
considered very important to note that a and involved with Latinized
number of various available applicable studies words.
ipso facto have generally identified the fact that - Includes speech sounds that
additional appropriate nocturnal employment are not actual word.
could usually keep juvenile adolescents off EXAMPLES
thoroughfares during the night hours, including - Jibber jabber-means rapid talk
but not limited to the time prior to midnight on - Spercalifragilisticexpialidocious-
weeknights and/or 2 a.m. on weekends. beautiful
(62 WORDS) - Pneumonoultramicroscopicsiliconvolca
Keep It Short noconiosis-means cough
More night jobs would keep kids off the streets. Legalese
(9 words) • Is a term associated with a
What is not Plain Language? traditional style of legal writing
Aureation that is part of specialized
- To make golden discourse for lawyers.
• Lay readers cannot readily 2. Organizing Information
comprehend. 3. Designing an Effective Document

Psychobabble 1. Readability
• is a form of speech or writing - It looks at words and
that uses psychological jargon, sentences to measure how easy a
buzzwords, and esoteric document is to read
language to create an - Speed of Perception
impression of truth or - Visibility
plausibility. Components of Readability
EXAMPLE
1. Content
Socialize - pertains to the complexity of its
vocabulary and syntax.
“Let’s socialize that idea around the Example:
group and get some feedback” I suffer the punishment of
tardiness.
Instead:“Let people know what our idea
VS
is and see if they like it
Procrastination makes me
Technobabble suffer its wrath.
2. Typography
• is a form of jargon that uses - pertains to font size, line height
buzzwords, and esoteric and line length.
language, specialized technical 2. Organizing Information
terms, or technical slang that is - emphasizes how the write-up
incomprehensible to the is structured
listener Introduction
Body
Example:
Conclusion
1. I reversed the polarity of neutron
flow

2. Despite the implicatons of the Special


Theory of Relativity on faster than light
travel, it can be done via wormholes.

Written material is in plain


language if your audience can:
 Find what they need;
 Understand what they find;
 Use what they find to meet
their needs.
Principles of Plain Language
1. Readability
3. Designing an Effective Document 3. State your major points before making
details.
- Documents that are easy on the eye are 4. Limit each paragraph to one idea
easier to understand than more traditional 5. Stick to your topic.
styles. 6. Write in active voice.
- Effectiveness is the fulfillment of writing’s - The use of an active voice in your business
writing will strengthen the overall delivery.
goal
- less awkward, simpler
DESIGN 7. Wordiness!
Guidelines for Good Document Design - Wordiness is taking more words than
Font style necessary to make your point
1.1Italics add emphasis 8. Use everyday words
1.2 Bold type shows importance
1.3 Capital letters show emphasis Audience
• What is an Audience?
2. Bulleted lists present key
The audience of technical report- or
concepts quickly any piece of writing- is the
3.Use tables often intended or potential reader/s
Good Fonts are: PURPOSE:
• Easily readable
• Aesthetically pleasing Not what you want to do; But,
Use serif fonts for:
Body text What you want your
audience to do as a result
San-serif for
of reading what you wrote.
• Headings
Knowing Your Audience
• Subheadings • “Who am I writing this for?”
Which fonts are business- appropriate? - is of the utmost importance
• Font 1 • “What does the reader need to know?”
• Font 2 -what to cover and what not
• Font 3 • Understanding audience’s needs and
expectations
• Font 4
-enhances chances of communicating
• Font 5 Successfully
Use white space to: Types of audience
• Break information into units • Expert
• Signal section breaks • Executive
EFFECTIVENESS • Technician
Basic Principles of Effectiveness in • Layperson
Writing • General experts possess extensive
1.Write for your reader, not for knowledge about a field in general. 
yourself.
• Specific experts, on the other hand,
2. Use pronouns when you can.
share or surpass your knowledge
- Be careful when you use the pronoun we
about a document's subject matter.
in a business letter, since it commits your
organization to what you have written. • Strategies for Writing to Experts:
• If your audience consists solely o Keep sections and overall
of specific experts, you may not need to instructions as short as
give extensive background or define possible;
• Provide short definitions or
key technical terms or acronyms.
explanations of any unfamiliar terms,
• If your audience includes general
tools, devices, or procedures.
experts, provide sufficient background A layperson is one who does not possess
information and define any terms that the technical knowledge of an expert or
they might be unfamiliar with. a technician.
• Do not just present a concept to an Strategies for Writing to Laypersons
expert. Also explain its parts and • Present
extensive background information in
processes in detail.
your introduction.
Executive are busy people who need to use • Organize information from the familiar
documents primarily as tools in making to the unfamiliar.
decisions. Because executives read and • Simplify information to the level
review many documents, be brief and to sufficient for the audience’s purpose in
the point. using the document.
Strategies for Writing to Executive • Explain all technical terms.
• Distill key information into an executive • Illustrate and explain technical terms
summary. and concepts with analogies (e.g., "Your
• In general, present information in order hard disk is like an attic; if it is too full,
of importance. you may have trouble retrieving a
• Emphasize information that will aid in specific item,") and anecdotes.
making decisions.

• Present
sufficient background information in
your introduction.
• Summarize all recommendations for
action in your conclusion.
• If necessary, put technical explanations
into appendices.
• Use graphs to summarize information.
• Explain any unfamiliar terms. 

Technicians are the people who construct,


operate, and fix things.
Strategies for Writing to Technicians
• Keep introduction and background infor
mation brief.
• Make information accessible:
Technician vs. Layperson
o When appropriate, reduce
In technician’s terms say:
information to instruction on
"You need a new piston, valve guides,
how to perform a procedure or
stator, and counter-shaft balancer" 
diagnose and fix a problem.
o Use graphs and tables.
In layperson's terms you'd say: 
"There are some internal parts that need WRITING FOR YOUR AUDIENCE:
replaced" • Audience analysis
In technician’s terms say: • Audience profile
"Momentum, a function of mass and • Meeting audience needs
velocity, is conserved between portals.
In layperson's terms you’d say: AUDIENCE ANALYSIS
“Speedy thing goes in, speedy thing comes is a task that is often performed by
out” technical writers in a project's early stages.
Captive vs. Non-captive Audience
Captive Audience It consists of assessing the audience to
A captive audience is required to be make sure the information provided to
there. them is at the appropriate level.
Non- Captive Audience AREA OF AUDIENCE ANALYSIS:
A non-captive audience just is there for  BACKGROUND- knowledge, experience,
fun. training and the like.
Needs and Interests
Things that your audience expects to
obtain from your document.
Other Demographic Characteristics
• AGE
• GENDER
• CULTURE
• GROUP MEMBERS
• EDUCATION
REAL or INTENDED AUDIENCE • OCCUPATION
 REAL AUDIENCE – the one who is (most • Religion
likely) going to read your writing. AUDIENCE PROFILE
 INTENDED AUDIENCE – is the audience -helps you choose where to spend your
for which your document is intended. time.
Primary, Secondary and Tertiary Audiences -method used to understand the target
• Primary Audience audience.
 are those who receive the Creating an Audience Profile
communication directly; target 1. Create a demographic profile
audience. 2. Develop a buyer persona
 decision maker, primary point of - Knowing the economic characteristics
contact, project lead, etc. of your target audience
 Secondary Audience
- Allows the marketers to understand
 are those readers who are not the
and anticipate the customers’ needs.
primary addressee but are still included
as viewer BUSINESS LETTERS
 technical expert within audience’s
organization BUSINESS LETTERS
 Tertiary Audience  A written message used to transact
 are all those who fall outside of the business which cannot be conveniently
primary and secondary audience conducted orally. It is formal and direct,
 others who may read your with no literary pretentions.
communication PURPOSES:
1. To serve as a record. signature, depending upon the amount
2. An attempt to secure action from the of space between the signature and the
reader. bottom margin.
PARTS OF A BUSINESS LETTER The inside address
1. Heading  For reasons of courtesy, we use a title
2. Date Line with every name, such as: Mr., Mrs., or
3. Inside Address Miss. If the addressee holds some
4. Attention Line special title like Doctor, Professor, or
5. Salutation Honorable, we use the title. Honorable
6. Subject Line is employed in addressing a person
7. Body of the Letter prominent in affairs of government.
8. Complimentary Closing  The generic name of a thoroughfare
9. Signature Lines such as Street, Avenue, Boulevard,
10. Identification Initials Drive, or Road should not be omitted.
11. Inclosure Reference Examples:
Attention Line, Subject Line and Inclosure 101 Doroteo Rizal Street,
Reference are used whenever needed; the rest 333 Claro M. Recto Avenue
must be included in every letter. 4. The Attention Line—is used when it is
As a general rule, double spacing between each important that the letter reach quickly
part of a letter should be observed. the person who is best qualified to take
care of it. A number of positions and
1. The Heading—consists of the name of forms for this information are used, but
the firm or the individual and the as a general rule, the attention line
address. These are the essentials for a should be centered.
5. The Salutation—always starts at the left
printed letterhead, although there may
margin, followed by a colon. The
be additional printed data.
correct salutation for a firm composed
2. The Date Line—consists of the month, of men or of men and women is
the day of the month, and the year. The Gentlemen. For a firm composed
date may be centered, typed flush with entirely of women, Mesdames.
the margin, started at the center point The salutation
of the page, or, in full-block letters,  Salutation for individuals, from formal
to informal:
started at the left margin.
Note: Do not use a salutation beginning
3. The Inside Address—consists of the with My when responsibility for the
name and address of the person or the letter is to be assumed by an
firm to whom the letter is written and organization rather than by an
should correspond in essentials to the individual.
envelope address.
It is written below the date at the left
margin in letters addressed to
government officials and also in
personal letters of a rather formal and
dignified character.
It is sometimes placed in the lower-left- 6. The Subject Line—enables the reader
hand portion of the sheet, beginning to know at a glance what the letter is
flush with the left-hand margin, two to about. It may be placed in various
five spaces below the last item of the
positions (sometimes above the inside direct, forceful, and complete in itself,
address). so as it draws a clean-cut dividing line
7. The Body of the Letter—contains the between the letter body and the
message. As a general rule, single complimentary close.
spacing should be employed within  Respectfully—should be used only when
paragraphs of the letter body. The two special respect is intended (indicates
most important sentences of the letter difference position, rank or authority).
body are the first and the last. The first  Yours truly—was the standard form
sentence should be utilized for a used very widely in letters calling for a
constructive purpose. medium degree of formality. Very truly
 Examples of positive openings: yours and Yours very truly are generally
a. It is a pleasure to answer your considered preferable to it and
interesting letter of October 10. appropriate with the salutations
b. We appreciate your giving us an Gentlemen, Dear Sir, My dear Mr.
opportunity to correct a Zamora, and Dear Mr. Zamora.
misunderstanding.  Sincerely and cordially—are commonly
 The last sentence often “makes” or employed when the writer is well
“breaks” a letter. It should clinch the acquainted with the addressee together
objective of the letter, and leave the with the salutation Dear Mr. Zamora.
reader pleasantly impressed. It should  Dear Joey—when the writer is
direct, forceful, and complete in itself, intimately acquainted with the
so as it draws a clean-cut dividing line addressee. He can omit yours in the
between the letter body and the complimentary close.
complimentary close.  The Signature—applies to the entire
 Examples of positive openings: signature unit which usually consists of
a. It is a pleasure to answer your two to four lines containing the
interesting letter of October 10. following:
b. We appreciate your giving us an a. The typewritten name of the business
opportunity to correct a organization in behalf of which the
misunderstanding. letter is written.
 The last sentence often “makes” or b. The pen-written signature of the
“breaks” a letter. It should clinch the dictator.
objective of the letter, and leave the c. The typewritten name of the dictator.
reader pleasantly impressed. It should d. The designation of the dictator’s
direct, forceful, and complete in itself, business rank or position within the
so as it draws a clean-cut dividing line organization.
between the letter body and the
complimentary close.
 Examples of positive openings:
a. It is a pleasure to answer your
interesting letter of October 10.
b. We appreciate your giving us an
opportunity to correct a
misunderstanding.
 The last sentence often “makes” or
“breaks” a letter. It should clinch the
objective of the letter, and leave the
reader pleasantly impressed. It should
usually brief and present no special
difficulty. It consists of four steps:
a. State carefully the circumstances which
necessitate the inquiry.
b. State any facts needed by the reader in
making a complete reply.
c. Ask for the information, or state the
questions.
d. Express gratitude for the favor
10. Identification Initials—the initial of the requested.
stenographer, and either the name or Note: It is customary to inclose postage for a
the initials of the dictator are usually reply; a note of thanks should follow a letter of
placed in the lower left-hand corner of this sort.
the letter, ordinarily one or two spaces The reply should do the following things:
below the last line of the signature a. Acknowledge the inquiry, or state the
group. circumstances necessitating the reply.
11. Inclosure Reference—when other b. Answer the questions fully.
material besides the letter included in c. Build goodwill and pave the way for
the envelope, it should be noted in the further contact.
left-hand corner on a line with the Note: In handling replies, the writer should be
bottom margin. (it is spelled with an prompt and systematic. If the material is not
initial i though enclosure is permissible; immediately available, the inquiry should be
the number beyond one is indicated acknowledge and a date set for the final reply.
before the abbreviation: 2 incls. ) 2. Order and Acknowledgment—the
ELEMENTS OF BUSINESS LETTERS order letter, as well as its
1. Sender acknowledgment and acceptance,
2. Receiver constitutes a contract enforceable by
3. Message law; therefore, every statement
GOLDEN RULE: included in either should be scrutinized
“Adapt the message to the reader” in carefully with that in mind.
substance, in language, and in tone. An order letter should consists
 The substance of the message must be the following elements:
adapted to the reader’s character. The a. Name of the article ordered.
message must be familiar to the reader. b. Description of each item, giving size,
 The colloquial, jocular tone would not style, finish, quality, material, weight, or
fit a message concerning an important whatever will help in identifying the
business transaction. article wanted.
Types of Business Letters c. Catalog number of the item, if it is
1. Inquiries and Replies available; if not, the page number of the
2. Order and Acknowledgments catalog (It is well also to include the
3. Letters Giving Instructions number or date of the catalog.)
4. Claim and Adjustment Letter d. Quantity of each item wanted.
5. Letter of Application e. Price of each item, and the total price of
6. Sales Letters the order
7. Endorsement Letter f. Method of payment to be used by the
1. Inquiries and Replies—these letters buyer (Occasionally, the conditions of
which ask or answer questions are acceptance of the order should be
included.)
g. Method of shipment desired by the wrong or unfair in a given transaction. He
buyer. should not ask for more than he is entitled to,
h. Address to which the goods are to be nor misstate facts in an effort to deceive the
shipped, especially important if other party.
shipping address differs from post- Claim Letter consists of four steps, arranged in
office address. the following order:
i. Date at which goods are desired. a. A complete and careful statement of
3. Letters Giving Instructions—a usual what is wrong
preoccupation of the engineer or the b. A statement showing the inconvenience
architect is giving written instructions to which the claimant has been put, to
by means of a letter to subordinates, to arouse the interest of the adjuster.
other technical men, or to laymen who c. A request for an explanation, an
write for information or advice. adjustment, or whatever is needed to
 These should show careful adaptation make good the error.
to the reader, as well as clearness and d. A further appeal adapted to the
courtesy in giving orders. reader’s pride, self-interest, sense of
 The writer should know the reader to fair play, or fear.
whom the instructions are given so that In the adjustment letter, the functional
he may adapt his letter to his needs, order is as follows:
capacity and interest; and the language a. An expression of interest and sympathy
understood by the reader. or an apology
 The elements of a letter of instructions b. A clear and complete statement of the
are as follows: facts so that the claimant may
a. A general statement which gives the understand the adjuster’s point of view
reason for the letter and paves the way c. An offer of an adjustment which is fair
for the detailed instructions. to both parties (may modern
b. The detailed instructions. adjustment letters begin with this
c. A request for a report, an expression of section and is often combined with part
cooperation or thanks for the service to a)
be rendered, or a statement opening d. An assurance that the situation will not
the way for further correspondence to happen again to build up damaged
clear up obscure points. goodwill.
 In tone the letter of instructions should 5. Letter of Application—it tries to sell the
be tolerant, polite, and courteous, writer’s services; attempting to secure a
never patronizing or overbearing; harsh position through this letter.
imperatives should be softened and an Two Types:
air of impersonality should surround a. The Letter Replying to an advertisement
the letter. Such expressions such as: b. The Unsolicited Letter
a. “Please see that…” A data form should contain the
b. “You are expected to…” following items of information:
c. “The work is to be performed as a. Physical data such as age, height,
follows…” weight, etc.
d. Claim and Adjustment Letter—are used b. Education, schools, colleges, and
whenever a misunderstanding arises universities with dates of attendance
between two parties which cannot be and degrees. Sometimes, it is
easily handled by word of mouth. worthwhile to list important specialized
Claim Letter—attempts to put before the courses studied or to mention grade
reader exactly what the writer thinks has been average.
c. Experience, with dates employed, type scientific construction, and by a tone of
of work, addresses of firms, etc. confidence.
d. Special qualifications which fit the d. Directing favorable action by
applicant for the work, record of overcoming obstacles to action such as
honors, prizes, etc. habits of procrastination or lack of
e. Salary desired. It is often wise to omit ready money by offering inducements
this information entirely, especially in such as premiums, low price for a
unsolicited letters. limited period; by using coin cards,
f. References, with names and addresses. order blanks, return envelopes, and by
Salary Desired: this is best stated in a using definite commands, strong
modest form rather than a definite, suggestions, or pertinent questions as
arbitrary or high figure, such as: closing sentences.
a. “Not less than I am now earning, 7. The Endorsement Letter—according to
P______”. Webster’s New International Dictionary,
b. “salary of secondary importance, but endorse comes from dorsum, Latin for
enough to live on ”. back.
c. “whatever is customary for this type of  (to many people) it means to sign on
work” the back of a check, bill, or commercial
6. Sales Letters—a tremendous volume of note.
sales letters goes out every day, and  (popular meaning) is to support,
every professional is sure to be approve, or recommend.
circularized with many of them.  (In military, legal, government and
Four Steps of the Sales Letters called some business offices) it means reply,
ABCD’s: comment, or forwarding note added to
a. Attracting favorable attention by a letter of document.
making the letter attractive in Characteristics of the Business letters
appearance, easy to read, simple in 1. CORRECTNESS
language; by appealing to the reader’s 2. CLEARNESS
interests or exciting his curiosity, by 3. CONCISENESS
being apt, natural, specific, concrete, 4. ORDER
not trite nor negative, and by having 5. UNITY
the “you attitude”. 6. COURTESY
b. Building interest and desire: by knowing 7. CHARACTER, PERSONALITY, STYLE
the product and the customer, choosing 8. TONE
talking points that show a distinctive
feature or a real need and are fitted to 1. CORRECTNESS—a business letter
the class of buyers, by describing the should be correct as to the facts
article either physically or emotionally, given. Also applies to grammar,
and by inclosing folders or samples to sentence construction,
stimulate interest. punctuations, and the order of the
c. Convincing the reader by quoting facts, mechanical portions of the business
figures, data, by inclosing curves and letters.
graphs, photographs—concrete 2. CLEARNESS—the business letter is
evidence; by testimonials, by samples clear if it is easily understood. Use
and suggested tests, sending goods on simple, exact language.
approval, by specific guaranties and 3. CONCISENESS—is the art of saying a
money-back offers, by evidence of thing in as few words as possible.
4. ORDER—for it is an important the left margin. Each member of the
written record, the essential signature group is aligned vertically
characteristic of a letter is to have with the complimentary close which
logical organization. begins near the vertical center.
5. UNITY—no letter should deal with b. The Semi-block Style—is identical with
two unrelated subjects. the Block Style except that the first line
6. COURTESY—is the attitude taken by of paragraph is indented five,
the writer, expressing friendliness sometimes ten spaces. Standard
and good-breeding; it strives to be punctuation is commonly used.
polite in manner and phraseology. c. The Indented Style—less used now than
7. CHARACTER, PERSONALITY, STYLE— formerly, the various elements of
the three qualities that are addresses and other formal positions
interrelated to each other. Each are indented an even number of spaces,
letter has its own need thus so that a line drawn tangent to the first
encouraging freshness and will be tangent to all the rest.
originality as well as adding d. The principal objection to the use of the
personal touch to it. indented letter is the exacting task of
8. TONE—a letter should not be arranging the address and the
written in a condescending, signature.
pompous, sarcastic, didactic, Full-Block Style—each part of the letter,
flippant, suspicious, or humble except possibly the date line and the file
tone. The writer should consider reference, is placed on the left margin.
the reader as intelligent, human, The best feature of the full-
honest, and fair-minded. block style is ease of execution.
APPEARANCE e. The Hanging-indented Style—the first
1. Stationery—the prestige gained line of each paragraph is flush with
through the use of good paper will margin, in line with the salutation and
more than offset any saving through the inside address. Other lines are
use of inferior paper. uniformly indented at least five spaces.
 The standard sheet of business Although frequently used in
stationery is 8 ½ x 11inches in size, sales letters, it is seldom employed in
white or very light shade of cream, business letters of a conservative
brown, gray, and blue color. character. It is appropriate only when
 The writer should determine the the nature of the business is sufficiently
approximate length of the letter and informal to justify novelty.
type it in such a way as to have Simplified Letter
approximately the same margins all  (sponsored by the NSO Management
around. Association) is relatively new.
2. Letter Styles—the form of indentions.  the style is similar to that of the Full-
Forms of Indentions: block format, with all the parts
a. The Block Style beginning at the left margin.
b. The Semi-block Style Note the following details of form:
c. The Indented Style 1. Place the date in top position.
d. The Full-block Style 2. Block the address at least 3 spaces
e. The Hanging-indented Style below the date so that a window
Letter Styles envelope may be used if desired.
a. The Block Style—the insider address
and all paragraph beginnings start at
3. Place the subject caption at least 3
spaces below the address. Full capital
letters may be used.
4. Omit the salutation.
5. Below the paragraphs, double-space
between the paragraphs.
Appearance
3. Punctuation Styles—there are three
commonly punctuation styles for
business letters:
a. Open
b. Standard (also called “mixed”)
c. Closed
Note: Regardless of which style is used for
the other letter parts, it is worth
remembering that punctuation of the
message is the same.
Punctuation
a. Open Punctuation Style—this style
requires that no punctuation be used
after any part of the letter except the
message. It is often used with full-
blocked arrangements as both styles
are considered time-savers for the
typist.
b. Standard Punctuation Style—this style
is commonly used. The salutation is
followed by a colon, and the
complimentary close is followed by a
comma.
c. Closed Punctuation Style—this style is
perhaps the least used and is not
recommended for use in modern letter.
It places a period after the date and a
comma after each line on the inside
address except the last line. The same
punctuation is used in the signature
block.

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