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    The document provides feedback on an essay about marriage. It notes that the structure and presentation could be improved, and that the writer needs to work on legibility. However, the content was assessed as adequate. It recommends including an introduction defining marriage and a conclusion, and continuing to practice writing to develop skills.

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    The document provides feedback on an essay about marriage. It notes that the structure and presentation could be improved, and that the writer needs to work on legibility. However, the content was assessed as adequate. It recommends including an introduction defining marriage and a conclusion, and continuing to practice writing to develop skills.

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    The document provides feedback on an essay about marriage. It notes that the structure and presentation could be improved, and that the writer needs to work on legibility. However, the content was assessed as adequate. It recommends including an introduction defining marriage and a conclusion, and continuing to practice writing to develop skills.

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    work on structure and presentation.


    need to work on legibility.
    content is ok
    provide conclusion
    write in blank page..
    use of eg is ok
    keep writing to improve

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    mention in introduction what is marriage.
    provide conclusion .
    they are must in answer.
    you have good knowledge and understanding.

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    follow this structure .
    better then previous answer.
    analysis try to be sociological.
    can mention Thinker if possible.
    mention impact on family .
    commodification of motherhood is
    checked. etc

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