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Try to play more with you lighting. Focus more on
PJ01 33 8 20 23 your subject, capture their emotions. Also, capture
more human subjects.
Very good captions, very good angles, very nice
shots. Good color play. In shot 2 (middle one), try
PJ02 38 8 20 30
to show the items that he bought, it is not that
evident in the shot.
Try to capture more natural looking shots, avoid
PJ03 34 8 20 23 "scripted" shots. Study more on the exposure
triangle to better play with your colors and lighting
Good choice of going black and white, but you can
also try to play with colors. Good POVs. Try not to
PJ04 38 9 20 22
over-exagerrate the layout, photojournalism is
focused more on photos and captions.
Avoid presenting the same set up twice (shot 1 and
PJ06 31 7 20 25 2), also present the subjects better, play with
composition, lighting, and camera angles.
The use of black and white is less preferable. Use
PJ08 30 7 20 21 different camera angles aside from what we
normally see.
Emotions are not captured in any shot. Try to
present the subjects emotions toward what they're
PJ10 30 7 20 21
doing, it will tell another story aside from what is
already presented.