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    The narrator explores a stunning environment with round wooden buildings perched on cliffs overlooking a glorious lake. As the narrator approaches a greenhouse, they hear music playing and find Yeesha inside trying to remember a song. Later, the narrator activates a large water wheel, but the walkway begins shaking and collapses, knocking them unconscious. When they awake, the narrator finds themselves clinging to the broken path a hundred feet above the lake.

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    The narrator explores a stunning environment with round wooden buildings perched on cliffs overlooking a glorious lake. As the narrator approaches a greenhouse, they hear music playing and find Yeesha inside trying to remember a song. Later, the narrator activates a large water wheel, but the walkway begins shaking and collapses, knocking them unconscious. When they awake, the narrator finds themselves clinging to the broken path a hundred feet above the lake.

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    Punctuate The Story With Expression Learning Activity

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    The narrator explores a stunning environment with round wooden buildings perched on cliffs overlooking a glorious lake. As the narrator approaches a greenhouse, they hear music playing and find Yeesha inside trying to remember a song. Later, the narrator activates a large water wheel, but the walkway begins shaking and collapses, knocking them unconscious. When they awake, the narrator finds themselves clinging to the broken path a hundred feet above the lake.

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    Punctuate the following story and underline expressions that you like.

    Discuss with us why you like the expressions used.


    (Put full stops, commas, contractions, exclamation marks, Capital letters where
    ever appropriate.)
    i looked out over this incredible environment there were round wooden
    buildings perched high up on the edges of the cliffs beautiful green trees
    clung to the rocks and the surface of a glorious lake shimmered far beneath
    me i turned and walked along the wooden path

    as i approached a small greenhouse i heard music playing i clambered


    down the steps to see where it was coming from it was yeesha

    cant talk right now she said im trying to remember the song i heard on
    serenia but its really hard she sat down ive got to get it perfect she
    continued because i promised to play it to my brother next time i see him

    i carefully climbed up the steps again and headed to another building i


    couldnt believe that i was standing in such a stunning location a bird
    perched on the feeder next to me hello little i said to it but it flew off before
    i could finish my sentence

    after a few minutes i entered another room it had unusual machines and
    objects inside it only atrus and his family could possess strange creations
    like these

    curiously i headed out and down another path i could hear the sound of
    water falling this must be the water wheel i thought to myself i pressed a
    round bronze button and whoosh all of a sudden thousands of gallons of
    water started pouring out from up above me and the wheel began turning
    spinning faster and faster the noise from this enormous machine was
    immense

    now that the power was on i turned around and walked towards the
    observatory there was a loud rumbling and the walkway beneath me
    started rumbling and shaking violently before i could find anything to hold
    on to the bridge collapsed and i was knocked unconscious

    when i opened my eyes everything was dark i clung to the broken path and
    tried not to look down i was hanging one hundred feet above the lake one
    false move and i would plummet into the cold waters below

    i looked out over this incredible environment there were


    round wooden buildings perched high up on the edges of
    the cliffs beautiful green trees clung to the rocks and the
    surface of a glorious lake shimmered far beneath me i
    turned and walked along the wooden path

    as i approached a small greenhouse i heard music playing i


    clambered down the steps to see where it was coming from
    it was yeesha

    cant talk right now she said im trying to remember the song
    i heard on serenia but its really hard she sat down ive got to
    get it perfect she continued because i promised to play it to
    my brother next time i see him

    i carefully climbed up the steps again and headed to another


    building i couldnt believe that i was standing in such a
    stunning location a bird perched on the feeder next to me
    hello little i said to it but it flew off before i could finish my
    sentence

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