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WRITING ACTIVITY

INTEGRANTES DEL GRUPO COLABORATIVO.

Kelly Johanna Palma.

Margarita Andrea Zambrano.

Vanessa Briyith Palma.

Andrea Marcela Tovar.

TUTOR.

Royer Dario Ramos Gómez.

FECHA DE ENTREGA

17 de oct. de 17
TEXTO GRUPAL ESCRITO EN REPRESENTACIÓN DEL GRUPO.

By VANESSA BRIYITH PALMA 

 My husband and I live in a nice house. My house is large with two floors. It is located in the city

of santa marta. It is very close to the malls.

My house is big. has four bedrooms, a small kitchen, a living room and two bathrooms. In the

room there is large furniture and a dining room. He has a study room, a garage where I keep my

car.

 My house has four rooms, all decorated and furnished. In each room there are beds, windows,

doors and decorative pictures. The four rooms have air conditioning. Outside of my house there

is a supermarket where I buy very fresh fruits.

 My house has a balcony where I share with my family. I love my house because it is quiet. My

house has everything I need to feel at ease


DESCRIBING MY FAMILY
BOSQUEJO
    My Family is composed of 5 people.
  Family My father, my mother, my son, my spouse and I.
Paragraph composition
1 Name, age, occupation,        My father is JOSE PALMA, he is 54 years old, he is pensioned,
and origin of all the he is from Santa Marta (Magdalenna).
members        My mother is BRIGIDA SUAREZ, she is 49 years old, she is a
merchant, she is from Florencia Caquetá.
       My son is JUAN CAMILO, he is 7 years old, he is in school,
he is from Santa Marta (Magdalena).
       My spouse is CRISTIAN FRANCO, he is 23 years old, works
with the government, he is from Armenia Quindío.
Paragraph Appearance        My father is tall, brown skin, thin, honey eyes, dark hair.
2        My mother is short, fair skin, thick undercoat, she has smooth,
long black hair.
       My son is tall, brown skin, he is thin, short brown hair.

       My spouse is tall, fair skin, thin, he has short hair and smooth,
light brown, his eyes are hazel.
Paragraph Personality        My father is strict, strong character, he is a stubborn person,
3 little smile, little expressive, responsible and kind, an excellent
father.
       My mother is a beautiful woman, kind, affectionate, easy to
love, extroverted, hardworking, responsible, a warrior, good
friend, excellent mother.
       My son is very loving, respectful, smiling, he is strong
character.
      My spouse is a kind, loving person, likes to listen, lets talk,
likes dialogue, responsible, hardworking, serious, dedicated,
although at times it is usually bad class.
Paragraph Feelings I love my family, they don my everything, my strength, my
4 unconditional support, my family is beautiful, united carriosas,
they are very helpful, in few words are a blessing of God.
BOSQUEJOS Y TEXTOS DE CADA ESTUDIANTE.

By KELLY JOHANNA PALMA.


My family and I live in Santa Marta (Magdalena), at the t

"boulevard of roses" neighborhood My house has 2 floors, it is big and beautiful.

This is my family, we are 5 members. My father Jose, my mom Brigida, my son Juan Camilo,

my husband and I. They are the most valuable people I have in my life, they are with me all over

the world giving me their unconditional support.

We are a family based on principles and values, we are characterized by being very united. I am

very happy and I am very grateful to God for those beautiful people that I give, on the most

important thing for me, I enjoy very much in company of them.

They are my greatest treasure, we are human and we make mistakes, we ask for forgiveness, we

fight, we give opportunities, we have patience and most importantly we love each other very

much. They are my home, an immense space that I can always come to.
By MARGARITA ANDREA ZAMBRANO.

  OUTLINE

Paragraph Selected topic Sentence


What is your house like?

  Composition My home is made up of 7 areas.


  Living room, dining room, kitchen, two bedrooms,
bathroom, balcony and patio.
My House

Paragraph 1 living room and dining room The living room has a set of furniture.
The room has a set of mesedora.
The dining set has 6 seats for 6 people.
The dining set has table games as a decorative element.

Paragraph 2 Kitchen The stove has four burners with the oven.
The kitchen has a refrigerator without hoar-frost with 2
doors of 240 liters.
The kitchen has several games of pots, frying pans,
crockery and cutlery.
The kitchen has a licuadora, the sanduchera and the
mixer.

Paragraph 3 Rooms and bathroom My house has two rooms the principal one and that of
visit.
Every room has the cupboard, beds, mattresses, games
of leaves and windows.
The rooms have baths have the sanitary game and you
douche.
The baths have divisions of shower with the showers
and the sanitary one.

Paragraph 4 Balcony and Yard My house has a balcony of access of house.


On the balcony it is possible to do the visit.
My house has a court.
On the court the clothes and zone of labors is hung.
My apartment is on the second floor at the portal of the avenues neighborhood near the

Buenavista mall in the city of Santa Marta. I live with my husband and it consists of 7 areas,

room, dining room, kitchen, rooms, baths, balcony and court. My husband and I decorate the

home in familiar environment. And in every epoch of the year it reforms in the adornments with

happy colors.

The room and dining room is where we met in family or when they come you visit or to study. In

the dining room it is for 6 persons where we have dinner and speak about family topics and the

work. The kitchen is small where the icebox is to guard the food, vegetables, etc. The stove of

four positions with the oven to cook and to bake rich recipes.

My home has two rooms, both decorated. by us.  In every room there are beds, sets of sheets,

windows, doors and pillows. The rooms have private baths. The baths have divisions of showers

and sanitarily.

My home has balcony of access for the revenue to the home. My home has a court to hang the

clothes. My home has zone of labors where the clothes are washed.
WHAT IS YOUR HOUSE LIKE?
BOSQUEJO O OUTLINE
Type of  My husband and I live in a nice house.
place

Paragraph 1  My house is large with two floors.


Size and
 It is located in the city of Santa Marta.
Location
 It is very close to the malls.

 My house is big.
 Has four bedrooms, a small kitchen, a living room
Inside the
Paragraph 2 and two bathrooms.
place
 In the room there is large furniture and a dining room.
 He has a study room, a garage where I keep my car.

Outside the  Outside of my house there is a supermarket where I


Paragraph 3
place buy very fresh fruits.

 My house has a balcony where I share with my family


Paragraph 4 Feelings  I love my house because it is quiet.
 My house has everything I need to feel at ease.

By VANESSA BRIYITH PALMA.


My husband and I live in a nice house. My house is large with two floors. It is located in the city

of santa marta. It is very close to the malls.

My house is big. has four bedrooms, a small kitchen, a living room and two bathrooms. In the

room there is large furniture and a dining room. He has a study room, a garage where I keep my

car.

 My house has four rooms, all decorated and furnished. In each room there are beds, windows,

doors and decorative pictures. The four rooms have air conditioning. Outside of my house there

is a supermarket where I buy very fresh fruits.

 My house has a balcony where I share with my family. I love my house because it is quiet. My

house has everything I need to feel at ease


By ANDREA MARCELA TOVAR.

His name is Ricardo Meza; and his daily routines bestfiend

He wakes up every morning at least one hour before he needs to and can't go back to sleep. He

doesn't need an alarm to get up at 6:00 am.

He drinks a cup of coffee accompanied by his mother; while they watch the news at 7am, then

his mother makes breakfast. He takes a shower after he has breakfast.

His sister does domestic chores; while his mother goes to the market square,

After when he gets dressed, he sits in front of his computer aimed to realize the university

activities through the morning until twenty past twelve in the noon.

After he eats a good lunch prepared for mom. Then he brush his teeth, and going to work.

After he has finished to work, he comes back at home at 7:30pm. In his house he usually takes

the dinner on the sofa and watching TV.

He changes his clothes because need to visit his girlfriend. Together, they go for a walk in the

neighborhood. When he return at home, the last things he do is lock the doors, and prays a

mighty prayer for the protection of his family and goes to bed.

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