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Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following NSW Quality Teaching model elements.
Evaluation score – refer to NSW QTM Classroom Practice Guide for each element
1 Intellectual quality
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: The content knowledge of the lesson is very strong and deep. It also centralises in
the main topic of public transport timetable and the advantages of using public transport toward
the environment. However, the lesson plan is lack of connection in identifying and reviewing
students’ prior knowledge.
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: Students can gain deep understanding after completing the task of the lesson. It is
important for student to indicate high level of understanding in the relationship between the topic
of timetable and problem solving. Nonetheless, the lesson did not encourage student to work in
group or develop any reasoned argument for a point of view.
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: Learning the use and benefit of timetable can be viewed as socially constructed. The
worksheet activity presents multiple and conflicting pieces of information that require students’
skills and knowledge in order to solve the problem.
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: The lesson plan activities require students to demonstrate low or medium order of
thinking except the last worksheet activity. The activities only ask students to discuss the benefit
of using public transport and work out the timetable base on the provided information which did
not require high order of thinking to complete.
1.5 Metalanguage
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: The teacher briefly discusses with students about how using public transport can
help with sustainability, by reducing carbon emissions and what the impact human activity has
on ecosystems. However, the important terminologies of the topic such as carbon emissions and
ecosystems have not been explained by teacher.
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: The lesson plan provides sustained and reciprocal interaction between teachers and
students in class discussion. A wide range of communication types (Oral - discussion, written -
worksheet) promote deeper understanding for students.
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: The lesson plan only requires students to complete the assigned worksheet but the
teacher did not check it or asked students to share or explain their answer to the class. Therefore,
it can be very hard for students to access the quality of their work.
2.2 Engagement
1–2–3–4–5 Comments:The final worksheet related to Harry Potter movie can enhance students’ interest and
engagement in completing the task. The lesson also allows students to work in pair and discuss
with the whole class upon the topic which can encourage the engagement and inclusion.
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: Students did not receive clear expectation from teacher most of the time. Students
can choose to work in pair or individually without any clear instruction. The level of difficulty of
the task and encouragement was not indicated by teacher; therefore, student participation might
reduce.
1 – 2 – 3– 4 – 5 Comments: Teacher allows students to share their point of view upon the topic. This is a way for
teacher to show all students’ perspectives and contributions are valued. Students are also
encouraged to work in pair so they can help each other in order to create social support.
Nevertheless, group work on harder task should be included to encourage broader discussion of
students.
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: Teacher asks students to settle down before the class begins. However, there is now
evidence to show that teacher has provided student set of expectation to regulate students
behaviours so the quality of the lesson can be assured.
2.6 Student direction
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: Students were given choice to work in pair or individually so they have some control
over different aspects of a lesson; through, the criteria that students will be assessed on should be
determined by teacher.
3 Significance
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: Cultural knowledge is low as there is no evidence of acknowledging or valuing skills
and understanding of other culture background and different social groups. Including cultural
background can create sense of belonging for students from other cultures and also help students
to learn how to respect diversity and differences.
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: The lesson plan provides very useful and strong connection between the topic and
other subject areas such as Science. Through the topic of timetable, teacher has implicated to
public transport and environmental sustainability.
3.4 Inclusivity
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: Teacher encourages students to participate in every class activities regardless
students’ cultural or social backgrounds. The types of activity are also vary (for example class
discussion, work in pair or individually) so it can be suitable for all students.
3.5 Connectedness
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: The lesson demonstrates the benefit of using public transport upon the environment.
This allows students to see the connection between learning topic and real-life experience and
consequently interpret personal meaning and highlight the significance of the learning topic
outside classroom. Students might need to use public transport in the future and the importance
of sustainable environment cannot be denied.
3.6 Narrative
1 – 2 – 3 –4 – 5 Comments: The lesson somehow uses narrative for example students share with other their travel
experiences related to the learning topic of timetable.
Identify the four NSW QT model elements you are targeting for improvement.
QT model
Intro Teacher greets students and asks them to sit down in their seats. Students take
out their work book and stationery required for the lesson. Teacher outlines
2 mins
what the lesson will entail.
Teacher outlines all the activities and contents that the lesson will focused on.
Revision Revision
5 mins
Teacher hands back results from the in-class assessment from lesson 7.
Teacher outlines what was done well overall and what the class will work on
together, to improve students’ understanding of content, as a path to achieve
syllabus outcomes.
Teacher explains the relationship and relevance aspects between prior lesson
to today lesson.
10 mins
Teacher facilitates discussion between students and asks questions about when
and where you may need to use a transportation timetable. Teacher shows a
transport timetable on the Smartboard and asks:
Within this section, the teacher briefly discusses with students about how using
public transport can help with sustainability, by reducing carbon emissions and
what the impact human activity has on ecosystems. Teacher asks students what
sustainability means to them.
Students get into pairs and ask each other travel related questions, based on
the ferry timetable that appears on the Smartboard. For example, “What time
do I have to leave Old Cremorne Wharf, if I am to arrive at Circular Quay, Wharf
2 by 2pm?” Teacher walks around the room and checks students are staying on
task, asking relevant questions and helping where necessary. Teacher ensures
that students are helping each other, as a form of social support.
Teacher can inform students this is an easy task so they understand what is
expected from them. Teacher should suggest students to focus on how to
achieve the shortest travel time which once again emphasize the importance of
using timetable effectively.
15 mins Group activitiy and Smartboard interaction through Kahoot quiz website
Divide students into group of 3 - 4 students, allow students to choose their own
group; if there are any students do not have a group, assign them into one. Let
them sit together in one table facing the smartboard. Questions will be
displayed and set a certain amount of time for each question. Students will
discuss in their group and write the answer on the A4 paper. After all the group
hands over the answer, one person of the group can stand up to explain how
they come to the answer (encouraging groups to switch between students who
speak every time). This activity can help students to enhance social support by
working with each other and harder questions require students to demonstrate
higher order of thinking and gain deeper understanding of the learning topic;
however, it will not reduce the participation due to the difficulty as students
can help each other. Lastly, this activity encourages students to explain their
answer; therefore, teacher can examine the quality of students’ work and
understanding. Three groups that answer most questions correctly are the
winners and will receive a prize from the teacher. All other groups will also
receive smaller prizes to encourage them to try harder next time.
Questions:
Station 1 2 3 4 5 6
Casula 7:04 7:34 7:38 7:45 8:16 8:23
2. Billy arrived at Kingswood station at 9:11 am which train did he catch? And
approximately estimate what time should he leave his house? Justify your
answer and explain full calculations
3. How long does it take Billy to travel from Casula station to Kingswood station
if he catchs the train at Casula station at 7:34? Show all working out
Teacher hands out bus timetable worksheet activity. Students have the option
of working on this alone, or with another person.
Teacher goes around the classroom and checks students work to make sure
they are on track. Teacher can also help students if they are struggle with the
activity. Encourage high ability students who finish their work early to help
other students.
If students do not finish the activity in class, they can complete it as homework
and teacher can check it in the next lesson.
Conclusion Teacher summarises the key points of the lesson. Discusses what the next
lesson will entail. Asks students if they have any further questions.
5 mins
Worksheet activity*
Five trains travel from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry to London Central
on the same morning. The Hufflepuff Express leaves Hogwarts station 6 minutes after
the Gryffindor Goods Train, but arrives 14 minutes before the Slytherin All-Stations
Train. The Gryffindor Goods Train takes 46 minutes to reach London Central and
arrives at 8:53am. The Ravenclaw Express leaves 10 minutes after the Hufflepuff
Express and arrives 14 minutes before the Gryffindor Goods Train. The Muggle-stops
train is running 6 minutes late on this particular morning, and arrives in London
Central at 8:37, after leaving Hogwarts 4 minutes before the Hufflepuff Express. The
Slytherin All-Stations Train takes 33 minutes to travel from Hogwarts to Central
London, and arrives 46 minutes after the Hufflepuff Express leaves Hogwarts.
1. What is the latest time train you could catch from Hogwarts to arrive at London
Central before 8:40am? What train is this?
2. Explain what would happen if the Ravenclaw Express train was running 7
minutes late.
3. Hannah misses the Hufflepuff Express train by 2 minutes. She needs to be in
London Central by 8:45am. What may be a possible solution for her? Justify
reasons for your answer.
Academic Justification
The original lesson plan can be improved through modifying number of areas in NSW Quality
Teaching model. These areas are metalanguage, social support, explicit quality criteria and
high expectations. The modified lesson plan allows teachers to enhance students’ engagement
through group work activity with technology interaction and therefore improve the quality of
Metalanguage is one area which can be improved in this lesson plan. Metalanguage highlights
the importance of language and how language can be used to construct texts, knowledge and
power in teaching (Ladwig & Gore, 2009). This element has been modified to strengthen and
ecosystem and carbon emission should be clearly explained to students as it directly relates
to the topic. Once students fully understand the meaning of the important terminologies, then
they can relate it to not only the topic in the particular subject but also can be used in real life
sustainability. This modified area can allow students to develop knowledge, skills and values
in improving the environment and therefore create a more sustainable life for future
Priorities, 2018). Teacher must allows students to see the benefits of learning contents in gaining
personal meaning to apply these in their future lives in order to encourage them participating in
learning more effectively. Gore (2007, p. 25) states that “If students perceive some other reason for
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engaging in the work, it is likely to strengthen the engagement.” Therefore, the connection between
Social support is another area can be modified in the original lesson plan. Group work activity
with technology interaction can enhance students’ communication, teamwork skills. This is
also a way to allow high ability students to get a chance to support other students in the class
and therefore create strong social support. Provision of harder questions can also enhance
students’ high order thinking. Durkheim - a father of functionalist theory believes that
education systems are "socialization agencies that teach children how to get along with others
and prepare them for adult economic roles". According to Durkheim, the primary function of a
school is to teach children how to socialise smoothly and become a member of the wider
society and also provide them the necessary skills for future careers. Consequently, it is
essential for teacher to provide students with communication skills so they can work in team
at school and also in a larger society. Group work entitles students to learn from diverse
perspectives and gain new knowledge and skills from other members of the group.
Explicit quality criteria should be strengthened in any lesson plan. Teachers should clearly
identify the quality of work required of students. This element can be used as a guide or a
standard point for teachers to develop and examine the quality of students' works.
Additionally, if teachers can assist students to use quality criteria in reflecting and modifying
students’ own works will also benefit students skills of self-evaluation ( Ladwig et al., 2009).
Clear instructions and expectations from teachers enable students to complete the task
successfully by meeting the criteria. For example, in the Kahoot quiz through group work
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activity, the question distinctly states “ Clearly justify your answer with detailed explanation”,
“ show full calculations” allows students to understand what is expected in their answers.
Gore (2007, p. 22) emphasizes “Students' performance tends to rise, or sink, in relation to the
demands placed on them”. Hence, teachers are encouraged to set high expectations on student to
promote student learning and engagement. It is teachers' role to engage, support and set high
expectations for every students regardless their background or disadvantages (Gore, 2007).
According to the Mitchell & Daniels (2003), the research from Pygmalion effect shows that high
expectations can improve performance. Students were expected to answer more difficult questions
in group work task not only enhance their high order thinking but also encourage them to improve
their knowledge and ability. However, the learning level might not be suitable for all students in
class; hence, the group work activity will be practical. High ability students can helps other students
by sharing their understanding about the topic. This will also have positive psychology effect in
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Reference:
Gore, J. (2007). Improving pedagogy: The challenges of moving teachers toward higher levels of
quality teaching. In Butcher, J. & McDonald, L. (Eds). Making a difference: Challenges for
teachers, teaching and teacher education (pp. 15-33). Rotterdam, Netherlands: Sense Publishers.
Ladwig, J. G., Gore, J. M. (2009). Quality teaching in NSW public school: a classroom practice
guide. NSW, Department of Education and Training Professional Learning and Leadership
Development Directorate
Grace, M. B. (1977). Emile Durkheim’s Contribution to the Sociology of Education. The Journal
https://www.jstor.org/stable/23768661
Mitchell, T. R., & Daniels, D. (2003). Motication. In Handbook of Psychology, 11, 245-266.
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