SOP PROCESS JOURNAL  

 
22/Oct/2020  
Research about University (UIBE), SOP requirement or not. It said that SOP is 
not required. I also research on how to write a SOP and what should be 
included in it. 
 

 
 
Next Day Expectation: take note on what should be and what should not in 
SOP. Make a rough draft.  
 
   
24/Oct/2020 
I did some research on SOP, made a rough draft. Not all samples on the 
internet suit my situation so I made some adjustments and made a paragraph 
one draft. It mostly just introduces myself and the second one is what I have in 
done that is associated with business studies.  
 

 
 
Next Day Expectation: Finish the rest of the draft and all the planning for SOP 
   
28/Oct/2020 
I finished the rough draft for SOP. I divided it into 5 parts where each part is 
likely to be each paragraph. And each paragraph talk about different aspect of 
myself 

 
 
Next Day Expectation: Start writing Draft one and finish it as soon as possible 
to get review/ comment  
 
   
2-5/Nov/2002 
I finished my draft one and currently waiting for getting comments from 
friends. I had changed some of it cause i think the draft didn’t work out that 
well so i did combine one or two paragraphs and change the format a little.  
 

 
 
Next Day Expectation: Getting comment/ review  
 
   
28/Oct/2020 
I look at all the three comments and I do really agree with them. I should give 
the uni some real experience of mine and also why it has to be this major. I got 
a 5 out of 6 which I believe is a good going. I will look further into these 
comments and make changes in the final product. 
 

 
 
Next Day Expectation: Start to write final SOP with changes. 
 
   
02/Nov/2020 
I finished doing the final SOP. With the added direction from the comments I 
think that it turned out really good. I try to put as much information as 
possible.  
 

 
 
Next Day Expectation: Getting review/ comments with score  
 
   
5/Nov/2020 
I got the review from my friends (the same people as the first draft) and it 
turns out that they really like it. I got a full score 6/6. Which was a relief.