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Kenza Hafid
11/27/2020
Mock Paper 1
“When Donald Trump was elected, many truths that White Americans were either
willingly or naively oblivious to were forced onto their consciousness. ” In this quote, Mona
Eltahawy highlights that many Americans were naively forced to vote for Trump. Manipulation
and gaslighting is one of the most common schemes which American leaders utilize in order to
construct a political ideology that is accepted by the American society. The term “gaslighting” as
psychological manipulation used to exert control over others. We can see traces of gaslighting in
American politics through former President Donald Trump who has been a reminder of the
“willful amnesia that grips American media and White Americans”, when it comes to racist
presidents that promote White supremacy. This article is through the perspective of A liberal
Muslim woman known for her strong written attacks on issues of race and gender. It depicts the
citizens of America being gaslighted by their president therefore becoming afraid to speak up
against White supremacy in America. Eltahawy uses sarcastic diction, aspects of syntax and
allusions to create a contemptuous tone to expose the deeply rooted racism, bigotry and white
Eltahawy utilizes diction and allusions to reveal her contempt for Trump. This is
exemplified through her diction when she makes use of words like “corralled” to describe
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members of the White House. “Corralled” is customarily used in an animal context therefore we
can see that she is using an animal term to imply a negative connotation to represent her lack of
respect for the president. This irreverent tone is further established when she mocks Trump
throughout the article. This can be seen in her response to Trump's speech when she explicitly
writes “I literally laughed out loud.” This demonstrates that she views the leader of the country's
word’s as a joke to the extent where she bursts out laughing. It can be seen that she also ridicules
him by alluding to The Onion which is a satirical newspaper used to criticize someone through
exaggeration. This is demonstrated through the quote “To hear a president who has incited
racism, bigotry, and White supremacy condemn the very things he has come to be associated
with, was as if the satirical newspaper the Onion had written the prepared statement. ” The
purpose of comparing Trump to a satirical cartoon is to signify that his performance was so
awful that it looks like something out of The Onion. Therefore, the reason behind her cynical and
mocking description of Trump being ‘a joke’ is to prove him being an inadequate president.
Lastly, the term “gaslighting” which is referenced multiple times throughout the article is an
allusion to the play “Gas Light” written by Patrick Hamiltion. The term gaslighting was coined
in this play where the protagonist's husband slowly manipulated her into believing she's going
mad. By turning down the gas light and convincing her she was seeing things. We can see traces
of this exact manipulation through Trump. Who condemns racism, bigotry and white supremacy
yet at the same time promotes such things. In correspondence to the play, Trump gaslights his
audience and convinces them that they have formed their own racist ideas when in fact he has
been encouraging such bigotry. To conclude, her use of irreverent language demonstrates her
Another way Eltahawy develops her contemptuous tone is when she shifts her attention
from Trump to former Presidents Reagan and Bush. The purpose of this is to explore how this
gaslighting precedent had already been set and is in fact the “the fruition of decades of racism,
bigotry, and White supremacy”. It can be seen that her contempt is not only reserved for Trump
when she alludes to Reagan and calls him a “patron saint”, which is defined as someone thought
of highly. When she uses the word “patron saint she is clearly not being sincere and exaggerating
his image. In order to reflect the thoughts of Americans while she later proves his racism through
the quote “To see those monkeys from those African countries, damn them.” Eltahawy
deliberately proves that he is racist while comparing him to a patron saint in an ironic manner
which divulges the reality of his evil nature which was hidden due to his manipulative
tendencies. In addition, Eltahawy extends her criticism to Bush when she writes “Take the
rehabilitation of George W. Bush. A man whose two terms as president included wars against
two Muslim-majority countries as revenge for the 9/11 attacks and under whose watch the
Guantanamo prison camp was filled with Muslim men who have never been charged or tried for
anything, is now being portrayed as a sage and elder statesman; an angelic grandfather and
artist.” Through this quote, Eltahawy juxtaposes the way Americans glorify Bush in contrast
with his horrific actions. This is done sarcastically in order to insinuate Bush’s evil nature using
irony and mocking demeanour uncovering his true character. Eltahawy exaggerates her
description when she refers to Bush as “sage, elder states man and angelic”. This is done
hyperbolically as his illustration shown to the world is just an illusion covering the reality of his
immoral and nefarious intentions. To conclude, Eltahawy proves the racism within the American
presidents and yet how they continue to be glorified by Americans who are too blinded to see the
Lastly, Eltahawy utilizes syntax to construct an irreverent tone. This is established when
she uses parallelism when she repeats the line “racism, bigotry, and white supremacy” in this
exact order throughout the text. It is also the subtitle, where the font is much larger than the
article. This bold emphasis is purposefully done as Americans refuse to acknowledge these three
things. Therefore, since Eltahawy continuously accuses them of ignoring it, she uses this
repetition of grammatical structure to emphasize the importance and severity of this issue. She
repeats this line 9 times throughout. In addition, after each long paragraph. Eltahawy creates this
scheme where she ends with a short sentence and makes it a paragraph on it's own. This is
exemplified when she writes short phrases such as “White power will always protect its own ”.
After a long paragraph she breaks this cycle with a short sentence to emphasize the power white
supremacy has. These short sentences hold a lot of meaning and ensure that the readers focus on
the main idea at the end. Lastly, Eltahawy uses a sentence fragment when she writes
“Unironically.” as it's own sentence after “Trump Urges Unity vs. Racism.” She intentionally
uses incorrect grammar in order to be facetious to mock Trump and his hypocrisy. All in all,
Eltahawy uses unusual syntax schemes in order to demonstrate the lack of importance she has for
trump.
It is undeniable that Eltahawy is not only critical but absolutely brazen in her attack on
racism deeply rooted within the American political system. This is clear through her polemic
tone and persuasive diction. She likely has only one purpose in mind which is to inform the
readers about this racism that American society is deliberately ignoring. She is not interested in
being diplomatic, her interest rather is to simply give a wake up call to Americans in denial of
the reality of the situation. Through her unusual choices in syntax, sarcastic diction and her
references to allusion she has successfully revealed the truth behind the white leaders of
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America. She exposed the hypocrisy within the country by exposing the acceptance of the
discirmiantion against the minority due to gaslighting from its leaders. Eltahawy, as an activist,
is directly responding to this terrible situation where minorities are being killed by racist and
ignorant Americans. It is clear that her goal is not to convince people that racism is bad but to
make people aware of how deeply rooted racism is within American society. Eltahawy presents
her bold claims to directly challenge American citizens and their inability to confront its racist
leaders. She illustrates how this White supremacy within the leaders of America is expected as it
is “an aberration rather than the fruition of decades of the racism, bigotry, and White supremacy
of their party.”
Works Cited
Aug. 2019,
zora.medium.com/gaslighters-in-chief-are-a-proud-american-tradition-551bf80b06c6.