Review Final Draft

by Syed Hasnain

Submission date: 11-Oct-2020 11:36PM (UTC-0500)

Submission ID: 1412515044
File name: Software_Devlopment_Review_Final_Draft.docx (18.91K)
Word count: 850
Character count: 4391
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Review Word Count

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cap2
3

cs5 sv5

pl idiom2

plag

idiom2
pc2 pr3

plag

sv5 not on works cited

7
thesis in

sv5

ts

plag
7

P3 2nd

not on works cited

P3 2nd
 no pc
inco5

vb3
frag5

ss5
//3

pc2

inco5

frag5
ts
ph2

ss5
vb3

d2

fact
pr3

mm3

P3 2nd

ts
pcol2

inc2

no pc

cs5 frag5 inco5 P3 2nd ss5 sv5

marg

wcp

wce
Review Final Draft
ORIGINALITY REPORT

11 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
7%
INTERNET SOURCES
0%
PUBLICATIONS
5%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

1
www.bls.gov
Internet Source 5%
2
Submitted to Alvin Community College
Student Paper 5%

Exclude quotes Off Exclude matches Off

Exclude bibliography Off
Review Final Draft
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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PAGE 1
/100

QM Length b
This paper does not meet the minimum length requirement of the assignment.

QM spacing
You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the format that was
assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.

QM file name
Please use the assigned naming format when you save your file.

QM Review Word Count

Your word count:

Minimum required: 850

Maximum: 1200

Additional Comment

825

Comment 1
Syed Hasnain

Focus/Organization (25 points) 18

Logic/Content (25 points) 18

 Style/Correctness (25 points) 15

Research/Format (25 points) 17

late Deductions -0

QM cap2
capitalization error, Section P-8, Capitalization, p. 347-349

QM 3
Your title needs to reflect the main idea of your thesis more directly.

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM idiom2
unidiomatic usage (rephrase), Section L-3, Idioms, pp. 293-298

QM pl
Use the plural form.

QM plag
plagiarized

QM idiom2
unidiomatic usage (rephrase), Section L-3, Idioms, pp. 293-298

QM pc2
commas, Section P-4, Commas, pp. 324-330 and Grammar Unit II on Blackboard

QM pr3
pronoun reference, Section S-6, Pronouns, pp. 277-282 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM plag
plagiarized

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard
 QM not on works cited
Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM thesis in
inadequate thesis
Additional Comment

redundant

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See review blue card 1.

focus a little weak

QM plag
plagiarized

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM P3 2nd
Do not use second person unless you are writing instructions or a letter.

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM P3 2nd
Do not use second person unless you are writing instructions or a letter.

PAGE 2

QM no pc
 no parenthetical citations

QM inco5
incoherent sentence (rephrase)

QM vb3
faulty verb form, Section S-4, Verbs, pp. 260-272 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM //3
lack of parallel structure, see Grammar Unit III in Blackboard

QM pc2
commas, Section P-4, Commas, pp. 324-330 and Grammar Unit II on Blackboard

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM inco5
incoherent sentence (rephrase)

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See review blue card 2.

redundant

QM ph2
hyphens, Section P-7, Hyphens, p. 345-346

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM vb3
 faulty verb form, Section S-4, Verbs, pp. 260-272 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM d2
faulty diction, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I flashcards on Blackboard

QM fact
misstatement of facts

QM pr3
pronoun reference, Section S-6, Pronouns, pp. 277-282 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM mm3
misplaced modifier, Section L-7, Adjectives and Adverbs, pp. 308-311 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM P3 2nd
Do not use second person unless you are writing instructions or a letter.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See review blue card 3.

PAGE 3

QM pcol2
colons, pp. Section P-6, Other Punctuation, pp. 341-344

QM inc2
incomplete construction, obvious error or Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255

QM 7
Incorrect citation form
 QM no pc
no parenthetical citations

Comment 2
Please work with a tutor in upcoming papers to get rid of the errors listed below. (I have marked a
couple of examples in this paper. I have marked some other errors that you need to work on
eliminating as well.)

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM inco5
incoherent sentence (rephrase)

QM P3 2nd
Do not use second person unless you are writing instructions or a letter.

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

PAGE 4

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM wcp
Your works cited page is not in the correct format.

QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.