Rhetorical Analysis Essay

by Markelah Woodard

Submission date: 01-Oct-2020 04:59PM (UTC-0500)

Submission ID: 1402707260
File name: Markelah_Woodard_rhetorical_analysis_final_draft.docx (22.6K)
Word count: 1024
Character count: 5431
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Rhetorical Analysis Essay
ORIGINALITY REPORT

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SIMILARITY INDEX
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INTERNET SOURCES
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Internet Source 13%
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Submitted to Darton State College
Student Paper 2%
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Submitted to Nixa R-II School District
Student Paper 2%
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Submitted to Bergen Community College
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www.westbrookgenealogy.com
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Rhetorical Analysis Essay
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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/100

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Comment 1
Markelah Woodard

Focus/Organization (25 points) 19

Logic/Content (25 points) 19

Style/Correctness (25 points) 18

Research/Format (25 points) 18

late Deductions -0

QM font
You must use a 12-point Times-New Roman font.

QM Length a
This paper is a little too short.

QM Rhetorical Analysis Word Count 1302

Your word count:

Minimum required: 1000

Maximum: 1400
 Additional Comment

980

QM head
improper heading format--See the "How to Set Up a Word Document in MLA Format" handout in the
Instructions with Screen Shots folder in the Information area of Blackboard.

QM 3
Your title needs to reflect the main idea of your thesis more directly.

QM 15
Do not use subject-verb contractions.

QM sp-o1
Spell out numbers. Section P-11, Numbers, pp. 354

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis yellow card 1.

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM pr/agr3
pronoun agreement, Section S-6, Pronouns, pp. 277-282 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis yellow card 2.

Comment 2
give full name

QM pp2
periods, Section P-3, End Punctuation, p. 332-333

QM td2
title designation error, Section P-9, Italics, p. 350
 QM pr/agr3
pronoun agreement, Section S-6, Pronouns, pp. 277-282 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

weak focus

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 26
Improper quoting form

QM 15
Do not use subject-verb contractions.

QM pc2
commas, Section P-4, Commas, pp. 324-330 and Grammar Unit II on Blackboard

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 8
Missing citation
You must provide a parenthetical citation for each quotation or paraphrase.

PAGE 2

QM d2-who
Use “who” to refer to people.

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM cap2
capitalization error, Section P-8, Capitalization, p. 347-349
QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

focus a little weak

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM focus
You have drifted away from the assigned focus.

QM cap2
capitalization error, Section P-8, Capitalization, p. 347-349

QM cap2
capitalization error, Section P-8, Capitalization, p. 347-349

QM 26
Improper quoting form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM pa2
apostrophes, Section P-5, Apostrophes, pp. 338-340

QM dg3
dangling modifier, Section L-7, Adjectives and Adverbs, pp. 308-311 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

focus

Comment 3
define

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
 Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM d2
faulty diction, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I flashcards on Blackboard

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM idiom2
unidiomatic usage (rephrase), Section L-3, Idioms, pp. 293-298

QM 26
Improper quoting form

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM mis
misquote

QM level2
Use more appropriate wording.

PAGE 3

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM 8
Missing citation
You must provide a parenthetical citation for each quotation or paraphrase.
 QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM citation improper placement

Improper placement

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM citation improper placement

Improper placement

QM //3
lack of parallel structure, see Grammar Unit III in Blackboard

QM 16
Do not use questions.

PAGE 4

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM cc2
Do not begin a sentence with a coordinating conjunction.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 16
 Do not use questions.

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

Comment 4
Please work with a tutor in upcoming papers to get rid of the errors listed below. (I have marked a
couple of examples in this paper. I have marked some other errors that you need to work on
eliminating as well.)

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM 16
Do not use questions.

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM 15
Do not use subject-verb contractions.

PAGE 5

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.