Final Draft

by Markelah Woodard

Submission date: 01-Nov-2020 10:37PM (UTC-0600)

Submission ID: 1433457716
File name: Markelah_Woodard_final_draft_causal_proposal_essay.docx (27.95K)
Word count: 2154
Character count: 11938
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Causal Argument Essay Word Count

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Final Draft
ORIGINALITY REPORT

33 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
29%
INTERNET SOURCES
1%
PUBLICATIONS
32%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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sunrisehouse.com
Internet Source 5%
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www.addictioncenter.com
Internet Source 3%
3
Submitted to Ramapo Indian Hills Regional High
School District
3%
Student Paper

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Submitted to Florida International University
Student Paper 2%
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Submitted to California Virtual Campus Region
IV
2%
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Submitted to Huntington North High School
Student Paper 2%
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Submitted to Wheeler High School
Student Paper 2%
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Submitted to Johnson County Community
College
2%
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www.coursehero.com
Internet Source 2%
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Submitted to Richmond High School
Student Paper 1%
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Submitted to Canadian International School,
Singapore
1%
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Submitted to Bonita High School
Student Paper 1%
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Submitted to State College of Florida, Manatee -
Sarasota (formerly, Manatee Community
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College)
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College
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www.cnbc.com
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Student Paper 1%
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Submitted to Henry M. Jackson High School
Student Paper 1%
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Submitted to Southern New Hampshire
University - Continuing Education
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www.theatlantic.com
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www.newscentermaine.com
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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PAGE 1
/100

Comment 1
Markelah Woodard

Focus/Organization (25 points) 14

Logic/Content (25 points) 14

Style/Correctness (25 points) 18

Research/Format (25 points) 15

late Deductions -0

QM Length e
This paper vastly exceeds the maximum length allotment of the assignment.

QM Causal Argument Essay Word Count

Minimum required: 1300

Maximum allowed: 1700

Additional Comment

1921

QM incorrect
incorrect

QM no pc
 no parenthetical citations

QM thesis in
inadequate thesis
Additional Comment

See yellow card 3.

QM 26
Improper quoting form

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue cards.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM quote stack
Do not stack quotations.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

PAGE 2

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
 Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

PAGE 3

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue cards.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 21
Do not refer to your paper in the writing process.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form
 QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

PAGE 4

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue cards.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 26
Improper quoting form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form
 QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM plag
plagiarized

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment See blue cards.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

PAGE 5

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.
 QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM plag
plagiarized

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM plag
plagiarized

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See white cards 5 and 6.

PAGE 6

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

Comment 2
 wording--should

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See white cards 5 and 6.

QM 36
This paragraph needs more development.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

PAGE 7

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

Text Comment. Causal Proposal Body Paragraph 7?

Text Comment. Causal Proposal Body Paragraph 8?

QM Incomplete
This document does not meet the minimum requirements of the assignment.
Additional Comment

Two paragraphs missing

Comment 3
At the end of your last paragraph, I have listed the grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure
errors that you are making in this essay. Make sure that you study the pages in the handbook and on
Blackboard associated with these errors so that you can avoid them in the final draft and in upcoming
writing assignments. Start with the five-point errors first.

QM d2-who
Use “who” to refer to people.

QM formal person
Do not use first or second person.
 QM level2
Use more appropriate wording.

QM 15
Do not use subject-verb contractions.

QM trite2
Avoid cliches.

QM ab1
faulty abbreviation, Section P-10, Abbreviations, pp. 352-353

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM pr/agr3
pronoun agreement, Section S-6, Pronouns, pp. 277-282 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM P3 2nd
Do not use second person unless you are writing instructions or a letter.

QM td2
title designation error, Section P-9, Italics, p. 350

QM dg3
dangling modifier, Section L-7, Adjectives and Adverbs, pp. 308-311 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM pc2
commas, Section P-4, Commas, pp. 324-330 and Grammar Unit II on Blackboard

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM idiom2
unidiomatic usage (rephrase), Section L-3, Idioms, pp. 293-298

PAGE 8

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.
 QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.

PAGE 9

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

QM eliminate
eliminate