final essay

by jennifer burn

Submission date: 01-Nov-2020 11:40AM (UTC-0600)

Submission ID: 1432754216
File name: jenniferburn_causalandproposalessay.docx (27.63K)
Word count: 1740
Character count: 9177
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file name

Causal Argument Essay Word Count

incorrect

PFI3
no pc

28+

ts thesis in

28+

mis
 7
not on works cited

ts

28+

not on works cited

ts

28+

28+

focus
not on works cited

ts
 28+

not on works cited

26

PFI3

ts

28+

not on works cited

7

PFI3

41
 ts

PFI3

28+

not on works cited

41
28+

7 not on works cited

ts

PFI3

28+

not on works cited

Incomplete

Causal Proposal Body Paragraph

8?
 PFI3

28+

26

28+

awk2 cc2 frag5 idiom2 inco5 level2 pc2 ss5 sv5

PFI3

marg spacing

wce

not cited in paper

not cited in paper

not cited in paper

not cited in paper

not cited in paper

not cited in paper

not cited in paper
final essay
ORIGINALITY REPORT

32 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
27%
INTERNET SOURCES
12%
PUBLICATIONS
27%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

1
Submitted to Parkland College
Student Paper 4%
2
afth.org
Internet Source 3%
3
onlinecounselingprograms.com
Internet Source 2%
4
Submitted to College of Southern Nevada, West
Charleston Campus
2%
Student Paper

5
socialworklicensure.org
Internet Source 2%
6
Submitted to Olivet Nazarene University
Student Paper 2%
7
Submitted to Bonita High School
Student Paper 2%
8
Submitted to De Montfort University
Student Paper 2%
9
academic.oup.com
 Internet Source

2%
10
Submitted to University of Wales, Lampeter
Student Paper 2%
11
Submitted to University of Central England in
Birmingham
2%
Student Paper

12
Submitted to Piedmont Virginia Community
College
2%
Student Paper

13
Submitted to Sierra College
Student Paper 1%
14
Submitted to Highland High School
Student Paper 1%
15
socialwork.tulane.edu
Internet Source 1%
16
Submitted to Flinders University
Student Paper 1%
17
Submitted to College of the Sequoias
Student Paper 1%
18
www.intervaltimer.com
Internet Source 1%
19
Submitted to Salem State University
Student Paper 1%
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

66
PAGE 1
/100

Comment 1
Jennifer Burn

Focus/Organization (25 points) 17

Logic/Content (25 points) 17

Style/Correctness (25 points) 18

Research/Format (25 points) 14

late Deductions -0

QM file name
Please use the assigned naming format when you save your file.

QM Causal Argument Essay Word Count

Minimum required: 1300

Maximum allowed: 1700

Additional Comment

1498

QM incorrect
incorrect

QM 3
 Your title needs to reflect the main idea of your thesis more directly.

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See yellow cards.

QM no pc
no parenthetical citations

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue cards.

QM thesis in
inadequate thesis
Additional Comment

See yellow card 3.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM mis
misquote

PAGE 2

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.
 QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue cards.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue cards.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM focus
You have drifted away from the assigned focus.
Additional Comment

??

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue cards.

PAGE 3
 QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 26
Improper quoting form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See blue cards.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See white cards 5 and 6.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See white cards 5 and 6.

QM 41
You are having trouble maintaining a focus in this paragraph.

PAGE 4
QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See white cards 5 and 6.

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See white cards 5 and 6.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 41
You are having trouble maintaining a focus in this paragraph.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See the card for causal proposal body paragraph 7.

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See the card for causal proposal body paragraph 7.

 QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM Incomplete
This document does not meet the minimum requirements of the assignment.

Text Comment. Causal Proposal Body Paragraph 8?

PAGE 5

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See green cards.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 26
Improper quoting form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

Comment 2
At the end of your last paragraph, I have listed the grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure
errors that you are making in this essay. Make sure that you study the pages in the handbook and on
Blackboard associated with these errors so that you can avoid them in the final draft and in upcoming
 writing assignments. Start with the five-point errors first.

QM pc2
commas, Section P-4, Commas, pp. 324-330 and Grammar Unit II on Blackboard

QM awk2
awkwardness (rephrase and/or Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

QM cc2
Do not begin a sentence with a coordinating conjunction.

QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM idiom2
unidiomatic usage (rephrase), Section L-3, Idioms, pp. 293-298

QM level2
Use more appropriate wording.

QM inco5
incoherent sentence (rephrase)

PAGE 6

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

You will need additional research for this essay: at least five sources (no more than eight), three of
which need to be scholarly sources from the library databases.

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

QM spacing
You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the format that was
 assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.

QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

PAGE 7

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.