Before
In the assignment we
were asked to look at
different ways that
literacy work. In my
fashion of twisting words
around to work for my
mind I Have investigated
the question of how
literacy works of us and
the importance of literacy
in different parts of the
world and the impact.
With extensive research I
have looked at different
parts of the world and
their development stages
and how literacy has a
huge role in the
development and
progression of the world.
I was also interested in
looking at how different
literacy practices affect
different cultures. For
example, in Europe their
literacy practices include
reading older literacy and
thus they preserve their
cultures and cities to fulfil
these beautiful images
given to us In a book. In
America, our literacy
practices seem to go into
more industrial and
nonfictional reading. We
are constantly looking for
new and better ways to
progress and be on top of
the world. How does this
link into what we are
taught as kids? Where
does the shift from
nursery stories separate
and two countries have
such vast differences?
Revision plan After paragraph Revision analysis
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question I am literacy work. In my and their literacy
looking for just fashion of twisting words practices in comparison
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grammar the question of how familiar with. How ever
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message more the importance of literacy can be too broad with
clearly in different parts of the research and I won’t be
world and the impact. making a point so I have
With research and slimed it down into two
personal experience, I counties. I have also
have seen how literacy reworded some stuff and
has a huge role in the erased an example to
development and center my and convey my
progression of the world. massage a bit more
I was also interested in
looking at how different
literacy practices affect
different cultures.
Throughout this
assignment I will be
looking and comparing
two different countries I
have been familiar with
the united states and
Mexico. In America, our
literacy practices seem to
go into more industrial
and nonfictional reading.
We are constantly looking
for new and better ways
to progress and be on top
of the world. How does
this link into what we are
taught as kids? Where
does the shift from
nursery stories separate
and two countries have
such vast differences?