Simon's dead body lies on the beach after a rainstorm. The rain, breeze, and sound of water have all ceased, leaving complete silence. Simon appears huddled and scared. As the water rises, it washes away the blood stains and transforms Simon's coarse hair into a bright, shiny silver. The lines of his cheek and shoulder take on the sculpted beauty of marble, majestically altering the viewers' perspective from a scared, bloody corpse to a beautiful body.
Simon's dead body lies on the beach after a rainstorm. The rain, breeze, and sound of water have all ceased, leaving complete silence. Simon appears huddled and scared. As the water rises, it washes away the blood stains and transforms Simon's coarse hair into a bright, shiny silver. The lines of his cheek and shoulder take on the sculpted beauty of marble, majestically altering the viewers' perspective from a scared, bloody corpse to a beautiful body.
Simon's dead body lies on the beach after a rainstorm. The rain, breeze, and sound of water have all ceased, leaving complete silence. Simon appears huddled and scared. As the water rises, it washes away the blood stains and transforms Simon's coarse hair into a bright, shiny silver. The lines of his cheek and shoulder take on the sculpted beauty of marble, majestically altering the viewers' perspective from a scared, bloody corpse to a beautiful body.
2. In the first paragraph, the writer writes: "Then the breeze died too, and there was no noise.” This shows that before, the breeze made a sound, but now the breeze also died, and there's no more sound. “Presently even the sound of the water was skill.” The text says, this means that the water wasn’t even making a sound and was calm and quiet. “The rain ceased” shows that the rain is now quiet, and there's no more sounds of dripping and water. 3. We can feel sorry for Simon from the first paragraph, where the author writes, "Simon's body lay huddled on the pale beach. ‘The word huddled means that he was scared and weak, and maybe trying to get away from someone or something. 4. “Moon bodied creatures with fiery eyes.” This shows that they have fiery eyes, and they are not a normal animal / creature but a strange and weird thing.” With their fiery eyes and trailing vapors.” This shows that they have steam coming off of them, making them more weird and scarier 5. “The water rose further and dressed Simon’s coarse hair with brightness.” This washed away the blood stains and made his hair bright, shiny and silverish. "The line of his cheek became silvered and the turn of his shoulder became sculptured marble.” Marble is a very beautiful rock this is used to make beautiful sculptures, and it is used to described this dead body, which must mean it is very majestic. 6. At the start of the paragraph, we saw Simon dead, blood spilt everywhere and he curled up like a scared mouse hiding from a human. At the end of the paragraph, no blood was left, all that’s left was his beautiful corpse and majestic viewing hair, changing the readers viewpoint.