Journal Entry 2: The Butterfly Mosque

Wilson shifts the flow in this chapter and introducing a new plot seems interesting. The way she uses the

references to explain scenarios about Egypt is informative. She also explains the challenges of foreigner into a

new place that adds more sugar to the main theme of story about the change in religion. The use of some small

subplots aggrandizes the will of a reader to read it. The character seems interesting to the scenario.

Development of different feelings about friendship and love indicates the change in the context of story. Why

don’t she ask Omar about the religion which influences her a lot? Is love playing more important role in her life

than religion?

The way she gets judgmental towards Omar referring the context of Middle Eastern Man symbolizes

the hard mindset of an atheist. She seems still not ready to accept her new faith. The way she add details to the

plots is educative. She still manages to show devotion towards her new religion though secretly. It maintains the

same flow of reasoning.