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This is a very interesting paper. I will admit that during your presentation in class, I did not completely
understand the argument, but upon reading the paper itself, the argument clarified itself. Admittedly, a big
reason I did not join choir as a kid was my fear of my voice change! So more research and finding better
ways of teaching during this period is very important! This seems like it is a much-avoided area of study
because of the complexities involved physiologically and biologically, but you are approaching the topic
holistically and your argumentation makes good sense. Keep writing, and I am sure you will have a very
effective paper!