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Tyler Hurley - Rough Draft Objective Essay
Tyler Hurley - Rough Draft Objective Essay
Mrs. Brower
Advanced Composition 5A
12 Nov. 2020
Many factors in a teen’s life cause anxiety and stress, especially in today’s society. This
includes things like schoolwork, social stress, at-home issues, and sports, among others. But is
social media one of these main stressors as well? This has been debated for years, ever since the
dawn of social media, and we can never seem to find a definitive answer. Some teens report that
cyberbullying worsens their stress, and others report that it’s a good way to connect with friends
and lower stress. However, objective research may show that excessive social media usage may
be contributing to worsening mental health rates in teens. Some things that excessive social
media usage is linked to, according to research, include but are not limited to: depression,
depression. This correlation especially applies to teens, according to data. For example,
“Although all participants seemed to use SNSs for several purposes, the time spent on SNSs
increased with depressive symptoms” (Gürbüz et al. 3). According to the data provided in this
study, the researchers found that as time spent on SNSs (social network sites) increased,
depressive symptoms increased as well. The article finds other interesting data about social
media and depression as well; finding that social media usage was higher among depressed teens
than non-depressed teens as well (Gürbüz et al. 3). These data provide strong insight into the link
between social media use and depression rate, but they are not the only ones to suggest the same
thing. Another article reviewed ten studies examining the link between victimization on social
media and depression and found a significant correlation (Ring 1). According to the sum of the
data provided, it would be an objective truth to suggest that excessive use of social media has a
Another consequence strongly associated with the excessive usage of social media is
increased anxiety. A number of studies and examples of data can also verify this correlation. For
example, a study found that as social media usage in teens increased, anxiety disorders increased
as well (Gürbüz et al. 3). This suggests that those who use social media an excessive amount of
time are more likely to have or develop an anxiety disorder, meaning that it is a real possibility
that social media is the direct cause of these disorders. In addition, another article finds that the
connection between social media and anxiety has only increased since the COVID-19 pandemic,
and social media usage only makes the anxiety worse because of excessive worrying and reading
articles online about the pandemic (Sahoo 2). This not only suggests that COVID-19 causes
increased anxiety, but also that the heavy usage of social media in teens only worsens this
anxiety. Less usage of social media would therefore correlate with less anxious article-reading
and therefore lower teen anxiety rates. A third article states that as social media use is increasing,
so is anxiety and self-harm (Knopf 1). Therefore, according to this correlation, as the use of
social media sites increases, so does the rate of anxiety in teens. In other words, social media
Now that we have objectively proven that social media is directly correlated with the
increasing rates of teen anxiety and depression, we will now analyze what factors exclusive to
social media are causing these rates. The primary online cause of depression is cyberbullying,
which entails bullying or harassing someone else online rather than face-to-face, especially over
social media. It is much more common than one may think; 23% of teens say that they have been
cyberbullied before (Ring 1). Cyberbullying can also be catastrophic to a teen’s mental health;
some may argue that it is even worse than face-to-face bullying because it invades something
that a teen may usually consider a “safe space”. This is supported by data as well. A study states:
“Victims of cyberbullying are almost twice as likely to have attempted suicides compared with
adolescents who were not the target of online attacks” (Ring 2). The important thing to note is
that the concept of cyberbullying is entirely reliant on social media use. Theoretically, if those
teens had decreased their usage of social media, they would not be cyberbullied. Therefore,
increased usage of social media leads to higher amounts of cyberbullying. Studies also may
suggest that cyberbullying is a direct cause of depression and anxiety in teens. For example, an
article states that researchers blame increased rates of depression and anxiety on social media,
and more specifically, cyberbullying (Knopf 1). In other words, without such high rates of social
media usage, cyberbullying would decrease, and depression and anxiety rates would also
decrease as a result. So, according to the data, social media facilitates the spread of
cyberbullying, which therefore facilitates the current increases in depression rates and anxiety
rates.
Another cause of decreasing mental health over social media in today’s society is stress
about current events, especially the COVID-19 pandemic and the shutdowns and deaths that it
has caused around the world. Many current events tend to be stressful for teens and cause them
to read about things that can be particularly harmful to one’s mental health, and the largest and
most widespread current event going on right now is the COVID-19 pandemic, which has caused
stress for millions around the world in a number of different ways. But when it comes to teens,
one of the largest stressors and facilitators for disease information is social media. When teens
read excessively about the pandemic, they will naturally become more stressed, and this leads to
depression and anxiety. This is backed up by studies as well. For example, an article states that
mental health has declined since the beginning of the COVID-19 pandemic, and social media is
the main facilitator for this (Sahoo 2). In this article, it follows the story of an 18-year-old girl
and her experiences with anxiety and the pandemic. The case study states that she develops an
anxiety disorder because of her excessive stress about the pandemic. She is diagnosed with
medication for her panic attacks, and she cannot be reminded of the virus without growing
excessive worry all of her family and friends dying. This was because she was hooked on
watching news channels and following stories about the pandemic on social media while her
anxiety piles up accordingly (Sahoo 1). This suggests that excessive usage of social media can be
correlated with stress from news articles, and can lead to the development of depression or an
anxiety disorder. So in these current times of stress from the news, studies objectively prove that
While the hypothesis that social media causes increased rates of depression and anxiety
in teens can be objectively proven, there are limitations to the extent of the application of this
theory. One thing that studies do not objectively prove is the idea that any usage of social media
is inherently negative. This is not the case. According to a study that suggests that excessive
social media use leads to depression and anxiety, wellbeing actually increased from teens who do
not use social media to those who use social media lightly (Twenge 4). This means that it is
objectively better to use social media in moderation than to cut oneself off from it entirely.
Therefore, not all social media use is bad. It can be a good support system for those who struggle
with mental health, in fact. For example, “In addition to meeting with an experienced social
worker, Matthew started using Instagram as a source of connection; he said it helped him realize
other kids were experiencing similar problems” (Ring 2). In other words, according to this case
study, moderate social media use can be uplifting when used in a positive way and in
moderation. Another possible misconception about the meaning of this hypothesis is that the
same statistics apply to the similarly increasing rates of anxiety and depression in young adults
as well. This is also incorrect. In fact, another study researching the link between mental health
issues and social media use in young adults finds different results than the others stated before
which studied teens. That study found no significant correlation between depression and social
media usage in 18-26-year olds (Alsabaani 1). It rather found that the stress levels in young
adults tend to be more influenced by college and similar stressors (Alsabaani 5). This means that
the hypothesis that social media causes increased depression and anxiety in teens cannot be
applied to young adults. In other words, the applications of this hypothesis are limited strictly to
teens who use social media an excessive amount, not adults or those who use social media only
Now that we have addressed the impacts of social media on teen depression and anxiety,
what facilitates it, and what the limitations are, we will take a look at what solutions there may
be to this problem. There are many ways to deal with the stresses of teenhood and the effects of
anxiety disorders and depression, and one of those is counseling or support (Knopf 2).
Counseling is a general way to treat depression and anxiety in teens and help reduce their
symptoms. It gives the teen the feeling that they are not alone in what they are going through and
can help them to feel less alone in their struggles with their mental health. This also includes
using social media support groups in order to feel less alone as well (Ring 2). Support groups can
be effective, similar to counseling, in helping the teen feel less alone. Another solution that can
be used by those who developed depression or anxiety because of social media is a simple one:
limiting exposure to news and social media (Sahoo 2). As stated before, excessive exposure to
bad news on social media can lead to anxiety disorders, and the best way to fight them is to limit
your exposure to the news. The girl who was followed in Sahoo’s case study limited her
exposure to news in order to fight her anxiety disorder, and it proved effective for her (Sahoo 1).
Therefore, the best way to avoid the impacts of social media on mental health is to limit exposure
From this article we can objectively learn that there is a significant link between
excessive social media usage and teen depression/anxiety. If we hope to improve the state of
mental health in teens in the future, we as teens must control our urges to use social media
excessively and learn to cope without the constant usage of these sites and applications. Only
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