Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Gordon Stobart
Introduction
Two learners are given feedback – they are both told, “You’re wrong.”
The first is a novice, for whom this feedback is unhelpful (“How is it wrong?”)
and demotivating (“I’m no good at this”). The second is an expert who takes the
feedback as a challenge and draws on self-regulation skills to energetically
review the processes involved to see if this is the case.
This is a stark illustration of the main claim of this chapter, that feedback has
to be carefully related to the proficiency of the learner and cannot be treated as
a generic template to be applied mechanically. This argument is made through-
out this handbook in relation to different domains and phases of education. The
distinct focus here is how it varies in relation to the proficiency of learners, as
they move from novice to expert. An individual’s proficiency may vary by
domain (I may be competent at mathematics but a novice at art). It is also
not necessarily phase related; a ten-year old may be a proficient chess player
while a university student is a novice. It is the learner’s proficiency that deter-
mines the feedback in a domain or phase. Failure to recognize this may lead to
what Ericsson (2006) has called “arrested development” (p. 685) in which we
settle for an unchanging level of proficiency.
This chapter considers understandings of feedback based on expertise studies
of how we move from novice to expert. This occupational context provides
three main challenges to the widely established educational theory and practice
of feedback. The first is that feedback is defined more broadly and incorporates
activities and practices that in education are generally not treated as part of the
feedback process. The second is on a heightened recognition of the emotional
impact of feedback, even when it is task based. The third is that the quality of
feedback is judged by what learners do, rather than teacher-related criteria such
as its timing or clarity. This links to the concept of “deliberate practice”: what
practice and improvement has the feedback encouraged in the work of those
who receive it?
The chapter offers a synthesis of proficiency models and illustrations of how
we move from novice to expert. This leads to considerations of the kind of
feedback needed at different stages of proficiency. The synthesis draws on the
work of the Dreyfus brothers (1980, 2005), Chi (2006), Ericsson (2006, 2009),
and Eraut (2007), all of whom use variations of a progression model that moves
from novice to competent to proficient to expert and master.
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One of the key features of these proficiency models is that they see ability as
something that is developed through deliberate practice, instruction, feedback,
and the development of effective mental frameworks and working memory.
I have argued elsewhere (Stobart, 2014) that this expertise tradition, which has
been widely researched since the chess studies of the 1950s onward (De Groot,
1946/1965; Chase & Simon, 1973) and the music studies of the 1990s (see
Lehmann & Gruber, 2006), has had limited impact on education and has
received little input from educational research.1
Feedback Models
This section offers a very brief review of current understandings of
classroom feedback, formulations that are elaborated throughout this hand-
book. It then seeks to complement them with theory and practice from expertise
research into skill progression – in which feedback plays a major role. The
intention is to flesh out feedback practices in relation to proficiency progression,
particularly how feedback varies in relation to proficiency.
1 In the 900-plus pages of The Cambridge Handbook of Expertise and Expert Performance
(Ericsson et al., 2006), there is not a single chapter from mainstream educational researchers.
This may be because expertise studies have often focused on occupational and professional
development and draw on the historic “apprenticeship” model. I argue (Stobart, 2014) that this
neglect by education of expertise studies is in part the result of a different historical approach to
ability, in which it has been seen as inborn and fixed, a proxy for intelligence.
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Defining Feedback
One challenge from the expertise tradition is to see the closing-the-gap model
as a narrow, and essentially cognitive, view of feedback in which teacher-
generated information “closes the gap” between where learners are and where
they need to get to. Molloy, Borrell-Carrio, and Epstein (2013) challenged
some of the assumptions of this approach: “Best-practice principles are often
founded on the idea that feedback occurs in a contextual vacuum, in which
learners will respond reliably and consistently to a given stimulus provided by
the teacher” (p. 52). Within the expertise tradition, Eraut (2007) adopted a
much broader definition of feedback than the narrow cybernetic closing-the-
gap approach by emphasizing that feedback often comes from sources other
than direct instruction. His definition of feedback is: “Any communication
that gives some access to other people’s opinions, feelings, thoughts or judge-
ments about one’s own performance” (p. 6). This is a much broader concept,
which focuses on how the learners’ antennae respond to the way their work
is being received, with the implication that this could be either positive
or negative.
This is a very different emphasis from the educational model’s somewhat
circular and narrow cybernetic use of the term in which something qualifies
as feedback only if it helps close the gap between where learners are and
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where they need to get to (Sadler, 1989; Assessment Reform Group, 2002;
Hattie & Timperley 2007). It also aligns with everyday understandings of
feedback, though these often consider only the giver’s viewpoint (“I’ve given
them feedback but they just don’t use it”) as if it is a gift to be gratefully received
without evaluating how it might be received (Askew & Lodge, 2000). The
importance of some access in the definition is that it leaves open how the learner
construes the feedback. Eraut’s (2007) point is that there may be considerable
gaps between the intention of the giver and how it is received by the learner,
particularly as it will be mediated by the emotions that accompany any feed-
back. This has been recognized in educational feedback research by those such
as Boerkaerts (2006) and Gamlem and Smith (2013).
The implication of Eraut’s (2007) approach is that much that we do that is
not generally considered feedback sends messages about how the learner is
being evaluated. For example, the tasks apprentices are given to do may be
taken as feedback on what the supervisor thinks of their capabilities. So, in
relation to school, if students are put in ability sets for mathematics, this sends a
signal about what the teacher, or school, thinks of this group. To be put in the
bottom class may send a clear feedback message about perceived capability that
will affect both learners’ and teachers’ expectations. Boaler (2009), who
researched differences between “streamed” (selected by ability) and non-
streamed classes, has shown the power of this kind of message on expectations
and progress. She found that in England, 88% of the children in the bottom
group at age five (the policy in England has encouraged early streaming) were
still in the bottom group at age sixteen.
This broader approach also means that curricular choices will feed back to
students how their institution sees them. The range of options in the curriculum
and how a student is steered toward certain courses, for example toward
vocational rather than academic, will be viewed as feedback under this broader
definition. The effects of selective examinations on a learner’s identity provide a
powerful example – to pass affirms potential as a successful student, to fail
means the candidate “was not up to it.” Life-changing assessments, such as
selection for selective schools at age eleven, send a powerful feedback message.
This is captured by Broadfoot’s (1979) haunting judgment on the English 11+
intelligence test, which 75% failed, which decided whether a student went to
grammar school (academic) or not: “Intelligence testing, as a mechanism for
social control, was unsurpassed in teaching the doomed majority that failure
was the result of their own inbuilt inadequacy” (p. 44).
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Deliberate Practice
This makes even more important the need to provide specific information about
how performance might be improved. A key concept in the expertise literature is
that of “deliberate practice” (Ericsson, Krampe, & Tesche-Romer, 1993; Ericks-
son & Pool, 2016) in which a more expert mentor identifies the next step in the
development of a complex skill. It is through repeated practice of this activity that
performance becomes increasingly fluent. The emphasis here is on using feedback
through practicing it, rather than just receiving it. Foer (2011) pointed out that
people often reach “OK plateau,” a point at which they stop improving at a skill
despite performing it regularly. To improve requires retaining some degree of
conscious control while practicing in order to stay out of autopilot.
The assumption in this is that a key element of feedback is choosing the most
effective “next step” that will again take learners out of their comfort zones.
Sports coaches use the idea of “the sweet spot” in which the chances of success
in an activity are around 50/50. This is a perfect feedback situation; skilled, and
usually immediate, feedback will improve the odds of success. Further practice
will see the skills becoming increasingly automatic so that the learner can take
on more difficult challenges. Feedback then leads to immediate practice of the
specific behavior that has been targeted as the next step, and practice continues
until it is mastered. So feedback is largely evaluated in terms of generating
successful action rather than the analysis of the features of the message.
John Wooden, the legendary college basketball coach, exemplifies this
approach. His teaching methods, so effective that they were studied by educa-
tors Nater and Gallimore (2010), involved rapid correction in which the correct
performance is quickly modeled by the coach, and the learner immediately
goes back and does it again until there is improvement. So rather than offering
critique, involving telling the learner what is wrong and how to do it better, he
used correction – going back and doing it correctly. Over 80% of the 2,000-plus
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feedback comments studied were about how to perform the task, with only 7%
involving praise and 7% critical.
Lemov, Woolway, and Yezzi (2012) used a similar classroom approach in
which they encouraged teachers to “shorten the feedback loop” so that any
correction comes as quickly as possible and the learner repeats the activity as
soon as possible. They remind us of those sports lessons in which we queued for
our turn at a particular practice drill and, if we got it wrong, we went to the
back of the line to try again sometime later – by which time we had forgotten
the feedback so were likely to make the same mistake again. “Shorten the loop”
means getting an immediate chance to incorporate the feedback. Lemov et al.
also echoes Wooden when they emphasize that the teacher should focus on the
solution rather than the problem.
This might be seen as adding another element to the already muddled picture
around the timing of feedback. The suggestion in Shute (2008) that sometimes
on simple tasks it may be best to delay feedback (p. 18) is clearly not the advice
here – with Wooden arguing that any delay is a wasted opportunity as the
sooner an error can be rectified the better.
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1. Novice Someone who is new to the domain and has minimal knowledge/exposure.
Sticks to taught rules or plans and responsible only for following the rules
to complete task.
2. Advanced Still rule following but able to apply across similar contexts. Rules become
beginner guidelines. Will try new things but has difficulty troubleshooting. Focus
still on completing tasks.
6. Master (often merged with Expert – Dreyfus & Dreyfus, 2005). Is “capable of
experiencing moments of intense absorption” and “does not need to pay
conscious attention to his performance” (Dreyfus & Dreyfus, 1980). For
Chi (2006), it is elite performance that set the standards or ideals. Also
recognized as “the” expert in a domain.
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Each of these comes into play and interacts as skills develop. They may also
take a progressively different form. In the Dreyfus model, progress is based on
being increasingly exposed to situational complexities, to more holistic
approaches, to more intuitive problem recognition, and to taking more respon-
sibility for decisions.
Glaser (2009) treats the progression as a change in agency, which he describes
in three interactive phases:
(a) External support, involving early environmental structuring influenced by
parental dedication and interests and the support of teachers and coaches
(b) Transition, characterized by decreasing scaffolding of environmental
support and increasing of apprenticeship arrangements that offer guided
practice and foster self-monitoring, the learning of self-regulatory skills,
and the identification and discrimination of standards and criteria for high
levels of performance
(c) Self-regulation, a later stage of competence in which much of the design of
the learning environment is under the control of the learner as a developing
expert. In this phase, the conditions of deliberate practice are arranged so
that performers can obtain feedback on their own performance. There is
very selective use of external support. (p. 305)
the number of potentially relevant elements and procedures that the learner is
able to recognize and follow becomes overwhelming. At this point, since a
sense of what is important in any particular situation is missing, performance
becomes nerve-racking and exhausting, and the student might well wonder how
anybody ever masters the skill. (p. 784)
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So the competent chess player may decide after studying a position that her
opponent has weakened his king’s defenses so that an attack against the king is
a viable goal. If she chooses to attack, she ignores weaknesses in her own
position created by the attack, and the timing of the attack is critical. “Success-
ful attacks induce euphoria, while mistakes are felt in the pit of the stomach.”
What is important here is the emotional involvement involved in taking
responsibility for the tactic. This brings with it risk taking and the need for
resilience – mistakes will be made. “In general, resistance to involvement and
risk leads to stagnation and ultimately to boredom and regression” (p. 785).
The proficient chess player “can recognize almost immediately a large reper-
toire of types of positions. She then deliberates to determine which move will
best achieve her goal. She may know, for example, that she should attack, but
she must calculate how best to do so” (p. 787). The key shift here is that the
proficient learner can immediately see what needs to be done, though in decid-
ing what to do will fall back on rules and maxims. Failure at this point does not
just lead to analyzing mistakes, it is about “letting them sink in,” again the
importance of emotional commitment.
At the expert/master level the player sees not only what needs to be done but
also immediately how to do it. This is the Dreyfus brothers’ contested concept
of intuition (see Gobet and Chassy, 2009). The support for this is that the chess
grandmaster can select moves in five to ten seconds without serious degradation
of performance. This involves drawing on recognition of a vast range of types of
position and making an immediate situational response. Where there is deliber-
ation, as in normal chess, this is a “deliberative rationality” that allows obser-
vation of the intuitive decision with an eye to improving it.
Car Driving. A more familiar example is the way we progress as drivers. The
novice driver is rule bound: check your seat belt and rear mirror before starting,
always come to a complete stop at a stop at a stop sign, change into second gear
when you reach 10 mph.
The advanced beginner uses (situational) engine sounds as well as (nonsitua-
tional) speed in deciding when to change gear. He learns the maxim: “Shift up
when the motor sounds like it’s racing, and down when it sounds like it’s
straining.” Engine sounds cannot be adequately captured by a list of features,
so features cannot take the place of a few choice examples in learning the
relevant distinctions.
A competent driver exiting the motorway on an off-ramp curve learns to pay
attention to the speed of the car, not whether to change gear. After taking into
account speed, surface conditions, criticality of time, etc., the driver may decide
he is going too fast. He then has to decide whether to let up on the accelerator,
remove his foot altogether, or step on the brake, and precisely when to perform
any of these actions. He is relieved if he gets through the curve without mishap,
and shaken if he begins to go into a skid.
The proficient driver, approaching a curve on a rainy day, “may feel in the
seat of his pants that he is going dangerously fast” (Dreyfus & Dreyfus, 2005,
p. 787). He must then decide whether to apply the brakes or merely to reduce
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pressure by some specific amount on the accelerator. Valuable time may be lost
while making a decision, but the proficient driver is certainly more likely to
negotiate the curve safely than the competent driver who spends additional time
considering the speed, angle of bank, and felt gravitational forces, in order to
decide whether the car’s speed is excessive.
The expert driver not only feels in the seat of his pants when speed is the issue;
he knows how to perform the appropriate action without calculating and
comparing alternatives. On the off-ramp, his foot simply lifts off the accelerator
and applies the appropriate pressure to the brake. What must be done, simply
is done.
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The notion of learning basic facts, which then become automatic and free up
working memory as the basis of more skilled performance, has been taken up by
Christodoulou (2014) in the UK context. Young (2008) also makes the argu-
ment for “powerful knowledge” in education. It is most apparent in sports
coaching where complex skills are broken into basic drills, some of which may
bear little direct relationship to the target skill, for example, boxers doing
skipping exercises. This challenges approaches such as “learning to learn” or
critical thinking when they are applied independent of a knowledge base.
Willingham (2009) claims that we should not expect novices to know how
experts think because
cognition in early training is fundamentally different from cognition late in
training. It’s not just that students know less than experts; it’s also what
they know is organized differently in their memory. Expert scientists did not
think like experts-in-training when they started out. They thought like
novices. (p. 128)
Advanced Beginners
These will be familiar to most classroom teachers. More complex material is
introduced and the teacher helps the students “pick out and recognize the
relevant aspects that organize and make sense of the material” (Dreyfus &
Dreyfus, 2005, p. 783). The teacher will provide guidelines (maxims) – “What
is the main point of the passage?” Feedback is a means of guiding choice.
Learning at this stage is still largely about following instructions with a focus on
completing tasks. They point out, as do top sports coaches, that this is not the
time for lengthy theorizing or interesting the learner in the big picture. The
focus is on completing increasingly complex tasks. The barista-in-training does
not need to know the history of coffee; the task is to put together the elements
that make the cup of coffee that has been ordered.
This may see the start of a “mixed-level” model of feedback in which
corrective task feedback is still present, but process level feedback is beginning
to be introduced. This is because exposure to more varied situations means that
a range of differing strategies may need to be considered, so feedback maxims
(“What kind of mathematics problem is this?”) may be used to alert the learner
to choices that have to be made.
Who is best placed to give the feedback at this early stage of proficiency?
From different occupational studies, Eraut (2004) concludes that sometimes
feedback may be most effective when it is given on the spot from those who are
just ahead in their skills, especially when they are all working as part of a team.
He cites accountancy audit teams as a context for effective feedback. This
comes from more experienced trainees “who were themselves novices only a
few months earlier; so they feel able to ask them silly questions in the safe
knowledge that they had faced the same problems themselves in the very recent
past” (Eraut, 2007, p. 10). Despite trainee nurses having a great need of on-the-spot
feedback, nursing was a more mixed picture. This was because of the cultures
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2 The origins of the terms “sacked” and “fired” seem to come from this process. If your work was
unsatisfactory, your tools were bundled up in a sack and you were sent away. If your work
was catastrophic, your tools would be burned to prevent any recurrence. You had been fired.
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Feedback in this context tries to steer the learner down the growth pathway.
But feelings of competence are precarious, for example feeling overwhelmed by
the complex demands of new tasks, and so there may be a motivational need to
also address the well-being element. The intention may be to minimize the costs
of failure or reduce anxiety so that the growth pathway can be attended to. This
challenges the conventional mantra that feedback should always be task
related; there are performances for which we may need a good deal of encour-
agement to attempt or continue. “I know you can do it” may count as effective
feedback under these circumstances.
Normative Feedback. As competence develops, the conventional belief that
feedback should not compare performance of learners needs scrutinizing. The
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received earlier in their training. One of the practices then was to write down in
advance what they wanted their trainer to give feedback on. Not surprisingly, in
the early stages classroom management was a topic that dominated; however,
by the final year “it became a word we just wrote to have something on the
paper” (p. 9). They no longer wanted transparent objectives and criteria; “they
did not want to be locked into such criteria, but wanted instead to receive
assessment and feedback on what occurred spontaneously along the way”
(p. 10) – “feedback on what pops up” as one student put it. These same students
also wanted less feedback – “by now we’re pretty confident in ourselves” – and
felt capable of far more self-assessment – “in practice I think about what went
well and what went poorly” (p. 9).
This element of self-feedback is a common feature in the expertise literature.
For example, Charness, Krampe, and Mayr (2009) found that proficient chess
players’ performance is more directly related to the amount of individual study
of published chess masters’ moves than the amount of time playing chess with
others. Glaser (2009) sees the role of teachers and coaches as providing
scaffolding for assisted practice in monitoring, in the design of situations for
self-analysis, and in feedback. “The coach who does this and then fades out of
the picture in order to enable learners to provide these environmental situations
for themselves is teaching a most important skill of deliberate practice and self
enhancement of performance” (p. 307).
The Expert
We would be pleased when, as trainers or teachers, any students reached a
proficient level of performance in terms of developing expertise in the class-
room. What is of more interest is the teacher’s progression from proficiency,
which I assume sufficient training and experience will have brought about, to
expert. In the Dreyfus model, this is when extensive practice and reflection
means that the expert can recognize what is happening and what is needed
without conscious recourse to guidelines or rules. Like chess grand masters or
expert firefighters, the expert teacher intuitively knows what to do. The source
of this intuition is a wide repertoire of refined situational discriminations that
can be instantly drawn on and that distinguish the expert from the proficient
performer (Dreyfus & Dreyfus, 2005)
I find the Dreyfus position on intuition a problematic concept, not least
because intuition can be wrong – “usually they guide us in the right direction
but sometimes they are mistaken” (Klein, 2004, p. 3; Kahneman, 2011).3
Intuition also suggests no need for thought – an issue nicely captured in
Eriksen’s (2010) paper, “Should Soldiers Think before They Shoot?” My own
3 There has been a long-running controversy between the Dreyfus brothers and researchers who
use information processing and artificial intelligence to explain intuition and insight in terms of
the rapid “chunking” of information (Simon, 1989; Klein, 2003). Gobet and Chassy (2009) have
offered a template theory to reconcile some of the differences.
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Expert Teachers
Hattie’s (2003) work, building on that of Berliner (2001), on expert teachers
relates more directly. Hattie’s research contrasts novice, experienced, and
expert teachers. He found that while the profile of experts and others differed
on sixteen dimensions, the three most important were the degree of challenge in
the classroom work, the extent that this required “deep representation” of
the domain, and the quality of monitoring and feedback. He found that
expert teachers:
1. Can identify essential representations of their subject(s) – and spontaneously
relate what is happening to these deeper sets of principles and are better
decision makers in the classroom.
2. Have a greater appreciation of the classroom context.
3. Are more adept at assessing students’ levels of understanding and provide
more useful feedback.
4. Are passionate about teaching and learning and have a high respect for their
students.
5. Provide more challenging tasks and goals that positively influence student
performance.
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4 See, for example, Kumar’s (2009) account of the Fifth Solvay Conference of 1927 at which the
giants of quantum physics and quantum mechanics all came together to discuss and argue over
the nature of reality – “more philosophy than physics.” Einstein was there but did not present a
paper because he felt he “was not competent enough” to present a report for the reason that
“I have not been able to participate as intensively in the modern development of quantum theory
as would be necessary for that purpose” (pp. 255–256).
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stubbornness. This may develop into entrenched views that resist feedback
because it is taken as criticism. Expertise is often so domain-specific that
feedback from outside the specialty is ignored or diminished. Chi (2006) gives
the example of medical experts who are drawn to offer diagnoses in terms of
their own field, so a blood specialist will look for a “blood” explanation.
Feedback for experts is therefore complex as they draw on a variety of
sources. The primary one is self-feedback based on information from their
environment, which uses their experience of multiple similar situations. It will
also come from colleagues and other experts who may challenge findings. Yet
even at the expert level the role of corrective feedback has not disappeared,
especially in sport and other performance activities. Here activities are continu-
ously honed through deliberate practice, often based on minor adjustments to
technique. The top golfer will regularly call on a swing coach or a putting coach
when accuracy falters, which is part of maintaining expertise, as is continuously
monitoring performance.
Conclusion
Drawing on the findings of the expertise literature, with its focus on the
more occupational and professional development, this chapter has highlighted
the need to address feedback in relation to the level of proficiency of the learner.
Failure to do this can lead to “arrested development” (Ericsson, 2006) because
inappropriate feedback may hold the learner at an earlier stage of proficiency.
This has much in common with the need for feedback varying by domain or
phase of education discussed elsewhere in this volume.
This chapter departs in three main respects from the conventional educa-
tional model of feedback, which is seen as an essentially cognitive and cyber-
netic model involving “closing the gap” between current and intended
performance. These departures are:
1. A much broader definition of feedback that involves information and
responses that the learner gathers from the environment, including teachers
and others. So apprentices evaluate the task they are given as feedback on
what the tutor or institution thinks of their competence. This would also be
true of whether they are directed toward vocational or more general aca-
demic studies; it is feedback about perceived capabilities.
2. A fuller recognition of the role played by emotion in mediating any feedback
messages. Because apprenticeship and the progression to proficiency largely
focus on products, self-esteem and personal identity will often be bound up
with how these products are viewed by others. The exhortation to focus on
the task rather than the learner (self ) in the educational literature is a
misleading oversimplification; the product is a highly personal piece of work.
Any criticism of the product is likely to be interpreted as criticism of the
person. Paradoxically, this may need some feedback to be addressed at the
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self level in order to reduce anxiety and the risk of going down Boekaerts’s
“well-being” avoidance route.
3. A greater focus on feedback leading to immediate action and being judged
by the difference it makes to practice. The key concept here is that of
deliberate practice in which a weakness in performance is identified and
immediately practiced. One reason that feedback often has a limited impact
is because of the lack of action and practice that accompanies it. This call for
on-the-spot feedback further compounds the findings in the educational
literature about the timing of task-based corrective feedback (see Shute,
2008). This also places far more emphasis on action in response to feedback –
it is not just about thinking but also doing.
At the same time proficiency feedback does not avoid longer-term normative
feedback – how the trainee is doing in terms of expected progress and in relation
to others. This is separate from immediate feedback and is best viewed as
informal or, in some cases, formal appraisal.
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there is still a need for corrective feedback on aspects of the tasks – hence the
coaching entourage that accompanies top tennis players and golfers.
The main message about feedback from the expertise literature is that we
need to see feedback in broader terms than the current restrictive cybernetic
model. We should recognize that learners are receiving far more feedback than
the well-timed and informative feedback of the educational model. The environ-
ment and those in it are continuously sending feedback messages and learners
are seeing these through their own emotional lenses.
This is well captured by Boud and Molloy (2013):
Expectations of feedback change throughout a program, especially across
major transitions: from school to higher education, from higher education to
the workplace and from workplace to workplace. Feedback practices need to
be staged and designed to anticipate and accommodate such transitions. As
learners become more experienced, their reliance on “external feedback from
the teacher” should be reduced as they increasingly seek feedback from other
useful sources including peers and consumers. Their self-monitoring and
self-regulatory practices should be more finely tuned (and utilised) compared to
their entry point into a program or discipline of study. Discrepancies in
judgements between learners and others almost always have emotional import
and commonly touches on the emerging professional. (p. 204)
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