"Year of the consolidation of the Sea of Grau”

BASIC - TWO

CURSO : Ingles - II

PROFESORA : Ursula Velazco

SECCIÓN : A-403

NOMBRE : Anggelyque Janin Contreras Cabrera

CODIGO : 15200202

Anggelyque contreras
"Year of the consolidation of the Sea of Grau”

FIRST DRAFT

Guided Writing

About the company:

(Name) Example: Argus Ltd. is a small company

A. Hartrodt is a big company.

It´s located in Magdalena del Mar, opposite Lan.
(Location)

It is a Freight Forwarder and Customs Broker

(Business)

It is on the 8th floor of a modern building

(Headquarters)

There are 100 employees

(Number of employees)

About the building of the company

Places / Spaces Location

reception There is a reception between two offices

Assessment criteria: Task 4

Writes 10 sentences describing an ideal company
Task completion
Coherence &
Sentences are properly organised.
cohesion
Spells words correctly.
Lexical resource
Uses prepositions and 5 different linking words.
(Vocabulary)
Grammar, Has a good control of the present tense, capitalization and
punctuation & punctuation.

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"Year of the consolidation of the Sea of Grau”

capitalization
Academic File BE 4

DESCRIPTIVE TEXT 2
(First draft)

WRITING TASK:
A DESCRIPTION OF MY IDEAL COMPANY

Write a paragraph of about 8 sentences describing your ideal company.

 Use the layout you designed in TASK 3.

 Use suitable linking words from TASK 1 (and, also, so, but, because)
 Use the necessary nouns, adjectives and prepositions of place to make a clear
description.

Nouns Adjectives Prepositions of place

meeting room Formal between
Toilets Large on the right/ left
conference room lovely opposite
drinks machines Little in front of
Carpet Big behind
Crèche informal in
ATM individual next to
Library international
Cafés

A. hartrodt is a big company with 100 employees. It is a Freight Forwarder and Customs Broker
company. It is on the 8th floor of a modern building in Magdalena del Mar.

As you enter the company, there is a reception between two offices. Our organization have big
windows with sea view; so it is lovely. There is a small office in front of the our office.

There is a large IT department, is between Marketing and Logistics. There are two toilets next to
reception. The kitchen is in front of R & D, it is small; but all of us like it because there are tables,
chairs, drink machines and water dispensers. On the left the meeting room, in the Finance´s
department, is my office, i have got a desk, a computer and a swivel chair.

A. Hartrodt hasn´t library, but we have newspapers and magazines. There is an ATM in the 1th
floor and on the right is the conference room.