Correct the comma splices, run-on and fragment sentences.

Then, write the end of the

story with two independent clauses.

● Word to fill in the gap: ​so, and (x3), but, she, I (x2)
● Add the correct punctuation mark in some clauses.

Clean version

The sandalwood incense was covering the whole cottage room. While I was lying on my
sofa, Sally appeared behind the glass window; she did not stare at me any better. Was I
invisible already? I don't think so, if I would, cats are able to see beyond this dimension.
Possibly, they perceive dark figures and invisible beings from limbo. Being a dark figure
already, I could have been perceived by her. So I did not know why she wouldn't
perceive my spirit; I was there. I thought "well that's not my cat then", but no, she really
was my cat. I tried to find the answer for my unnoticeable spirit; I opened my eyes and I
realized I had remained asleep on my sofa. The truth is I had been dreaming about her
all the time; She's dead and she is not with me anymore.
___________________________.

● Version to be corrected

The sandalwood incense was covering the whole cottage room. While I was there on my sofa,
Sally appeared behind the glass window and she did not stare at me any better. Was I invisible?
I don't think so, if I would, cats would be able to see beyond this dimension. Possibly, they
perceive dark figures and invisible beings from limbo. Being a dark figure already, I could have
been perceived by her. __I did not know why she wouldn't perceive my spirit I was there. I
thought "well that's not my cat then" ,_____ no, ___ was really my cat. ____tried to find the
answer to my unnoticeable spirit. I opened my eyes ___ I realized I had remained asleep on my
sofa. The truth is ___ had been dreaming about her all the time She's dead now ____she is not
with me anymore. ___________________________.