The following sentences have been taken from your essays.

Find and correct the

mistakes. The first couple of sentences give you a hint as to what you should look
for, but in addition to such mistakes, try to rephrase some of the sentences so
they sound better and fulfil the requirement of written work in a formal style:

1. Also if you don’t want to use a bike to get around, you can also use the
public transport or if you have the money you can buy an electric car.
2. When you cycle you don’t pollute the air, even better you exercise!
3. I live in Sofia, this is the city with the dirtiest air in Europe. We all living in
times that we can’t just stop using cars.
4. If we used more recycled materials to make products we will save more
energy, because this process needs less energy. (how can we avoid the
repetition of “energy”)
5. When we drive our cars we are polluting the air, also we do big traffic jams
6. We have very good ways to transport, we have metro, and some
companies can give us a small electric car against payment
7. Firstly, they can start recycling things because its going to help with the
pollution.These days everyone throw out and scatter their trash
everywhere.
8. If someone have some small garbage in their pocket,they will throw it on
the streets since its more easy than going to the trash can.
9. I think protecting the earth is one of the most important things out there.
10. If people talked more about it on youtube or on telly and even movies too.
Maybe if famous youtubers talked about it more people will listen to them
and be more careful of what they are doing.

The following sentences have been taken from your articles. Find and correct
the mistakes:

1. I want to say I am not a healthy nut and I don’t really eat wholesome food
because of the better health. For me the healthy food is just delicious and
combined with its fit it is the food that will keep you in a top condition.
2. I love being outdoors with my friends and family it's relaxing and I
sometimes need a little break for my mental health.I love going hiking with
 friends because is so much fun with them and the fresh air makes more
alive.
3. On the whole I think to be constant is the key instead of having an
exhausting training once a month and give up.

4. What kind of things i do to feel fit and healthy?Actually i am not the

healthiest person but there are some things i do to feel healthy and fit.
5. Feeling fit and healthy its not always about physicaly but mentally.