Reviewer name: Mariah Mahjoory

Web Portfolio owner’s name: Micayla Maki

Web Portfolio URL: https://micaylamakiportfolio.weebly.com/

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Content: Introduction  Each tab on the website clearly introduces

All posts provide an introduction to
accompany the content that explains the
purpose and audience.  overview of what the assignment will
the content and explains what the
assignment will cover.
  Each TCM introduction has a brief
cover as well, which makes it easier to
understand. Videos that are introduced
also have an overview of what they
discuss which is awesome!
 I would move the “about” tab closer to the
“home” tab since it explains the purpose
of the portfolio in relation to the class.
This was it acts as more of an introduction
to the purpose of the website early on
rather than towards the end of all the tabs.

Content: Audience  All of the content uses formal writing and

is presented in an organized way.
All content takes the audience into   The audience was greatly taken into
account.  account when creating the website. It is
easily accessible for students yet presented
in a professional manner for parents as
well. 

Design: Ease of navigation
The navigation is intuitive. The various
parts of the portfolio are labeled, clearly
organized and allow the reader to easily
locate an artifact and move to related
pages or a different section. All pages
connect to the navigation menu, and all
external links connect to the appropriate
website or file.  was having your more recent TCM
 The tabs at the top are organized and
make navigating the website easy. I was
quickly able to locate each TCM project as
well as find your pedagogical paper with
ease. The titles under each tab especially
under the blog section makes it easy to
find each individual assignment.
 I think that your blog tab is highly
organized. Something that could add to it
projects closer to the top of the page.
o  I had to scroll down to find more

Design: Readability
The portfolio is easy to read. Fonts and
type size vary appropriately for headings,
sub-headings and text.
Design: Visual appeal
Color of background, fonts, and links
enhance the readability and aesthetic
quality, and are used consistently
throughout the portfolio.  coordinated in the top part of the tab. It
Professionalism: Writing
There are no errors in grammar,
capitalization, punctuation, and spelling.  of your writing is in the same color when
Professionalism: High standards
recent projects which is okay! I
feel like moving newer TCM’s to
the top will make it easier for
finding the most up to date ones.
 The headings are easy to read and do not
clash with any backgrounds. This helps
make your website look more professional
and neater. 
 I would try making the “Teacher Created
Media Projects” heading a little bit bigger.
This way it grabs the attention of your
audience. Since it is the same size as the
subheadings, making it bigger will help
identify what that section is covering. 
 I would try adding a picture or some sort
of color on the “Contact Information”
tab.The white space could be better used
with a fun picture or some splash of color!
 I loved how each tab was color
adds to the visuals when looking at the
website.
 Your pictures and videos are thoughtfully
added and improve the website's overall
visual appeal.
 The picture that shows the sandwich
image under TCM 2 is a little blurry
which made it a little more difficult to
read the text. But it is a great image to use
for the topic you are discussing!
 The word “Parents” does not need to be
capitalized under TCM 2.
 I would double check to make sure that all
it is under one specific assignment. I saw
this under the TCM 3 introduction but
maybe you meant to do that!
 There are minimal errors in grammar,
capitalization, punctuation, and spelling,
great job with that :)
 You did a great job of explaining not only
 each project but also providing
The site shows attention to detail, informative overviews of each tab and
willingness to work hard, and an what they will cover. 
expectation of overall excellence. Makes  Your pictures, videos, and embedded links
a positive impression on parents, are explained to what they represent and
administrators, and fellow educators.  why you chose them which is evident of
you going above and beyond.
 All of your embedded links work which
shows you spent time to check each one.

Multimedia: Quality  The videos are relevant and help back up

Images, sound, and video are high
quality (clear, not distorted)
the information you are trying to present
with each assignment.
 All the pictures and videos are clear and
high quality besides the one mentioned
earlier (sandwich picture)

Multimedia: Relevance  I can tell you spent a lot of time trying to

pick media that was representative of the
Images and multimedia are appropriate topics you were discussing. You made
for the purpose of enhancing sure the videos, pictures, and links that
understanding or sparking interest. you used were relevant but also
interesting.
 The links that I looked at under your TCM
2 section looked fun! They were definitely
ones both parents and kids could benefit
from. Great choices!

Overall Evaluation Micayla, your website is evident of your hard

work given throughout the semester. Your
Summarize your assessment (opinion) of individuality and creativity is shown across every
your peer’s web portfolio and provide aspect of your portfolio as well! I think you did a
one suggestion for improvement.  great job of incorporating relevant media from
multiple outlets. The only thing I would adjust is
adding color to the tabs that are mostly white. An
example of this would be your contact
information tab. 

Reviewer name: Mariah Mahjoory

Web Portfolio owner’s name: Maddy (Madison) Marino
Web Portfolio URL: http://alwayslookonthepostiveside.weebly.com/computational-thinking--
coding.html
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Content: Introduction  Most of your assignments have an

introduction that gives the audience an
All posts provide an introduction to overview of what will be talked about! I
accompany the content that explains the would try elaborating more on the TCM 1
purpose and audience.  introduction a little more. 
o Your TCM 2& 4 do a great job of
introducing what the assignment
will focus on!
 You set both your students and parents up
for having a good grasp on what the
assignments will focus on. You are
informative but to the point with the content
you are introducing which is perfect!

Content: Audience  Your webpage is both student and parent

All content takes the audience into
account.  clear throughout the entirety of the portfolio
friendly! 
 Your language usage is both formal and
:) 
 I would try adding some form of contact
information on your contact page like an
email or phone number. This way it
resembles more of what you would see on a
teacher’s website for parents to use when
they need to get into contact with you.

Design: Ease of navigation  All of your links work which makes it

The navigation is intuitive. The various
parts of the portfolio are labeled, clearly
organized and allow the reader to easily
locate an artifact and move to related
pages or a different section. All pages
connect to the navigation menu, and all
external links connect to the appropriate
website or file.  your webpage even though we completed
evident you double checked to ensure they
redirected people to the proper website. 
 Your tabs are clearly labeled which helped
when trying to look for specific
assignments!
 I would suggest making your tabs more
chronological. For example, your
pedagogical paper comes before  TCM 2 on
TCM 2 before the paper. 
o I would also try putting your about
me page and contact page before the
other assignments as well since you
are introducing yourself and the

Design: Readability
The portfolio is easy to read. Fonts and
type size vary appropriately for
headings, sub-headings and text.
Design: Visual appeal
Color of background, fonts, and links
enhance the readability and aesthetic
quality, and are used consistently
throughout the portfolio.  middle of the cup!
Professionalism: Writing
There are no errors in grammar,
capitalization, punctuation, and
spelling.  errors.
Professionalism: High standards
The site shows attention to detail,
purpose of the website.
 I also had some trouble finding your TCM 1
since it was not under its own tab. Maybe
try creating a tab specifically for the first
TCM like you did for the others. 
 The fonts are super easy to read and you
make sure to bold subheadings which make
the content easier to navigate. Great job
with that!
 I would try adding the title of the TCM on
each one, this way it makes it easier to see
what it will focus on. 
o TCM 3 & 4 I think would benefit
from titles on their specific tabs. 
 Your webpage backgrounds are well
chosen and are wicked eye catching :)
o I especially love the TCM 2
background with the coffee. Cool
idea putting the “CT&C” in the
 Your usage of different color of texts
helped make the layout and design of the
website pop, awesome job with that.
 You have very few grammatical errors
throughout the entity of your website.
Making it evident you put time into
checking all spelling and grammatical
 On your pedagogical paper you added an
extra space in “non-verbal”
o You also added an extra “I” in this
sentence “...I should I take to get the
students to familiarize themselves
with the computational thinking and
coding and how can I build their
knowledge on such complex skills.
o The word “afterall” needs to have a
space between both words.
 Your effort is shown through your
thoughtfulness and creativity within your
portfolio. An example of this can be seen in
willingness to work hard, and an
expectation of overall excellence.
Makes a positive impression on parents,
administrators, and fellow educators.  will care about your future students :)
Multimedia: Quality
Images, sound, and video are high
quality (clear, not distorted)
Multimedia: Relevance
Images and multimedia are appropriate
for the purpose of enhancing
understanding or sparking interest.
Overall Evaluation
Summarize your assessment (opinion)
of your peer’s web portfolio and
provide one suggestion for
improvement.  written and brought forth ideas that were
your “Blog” tab. I love how you checked in
with your students and post updates to that
tab. I think it was evident how much you
 
 You put a lot of detail in how your webpage
was set up, what fonts you used, and the
different colors you added within each
section.
 All your images and videos are clear, clean
cut, and not distorted in the slightest bit.
 Your videos had good sound quality and I
had no problems opening any of the links
that were embedded in the webpage as well.
They were all relevant and added to the
content being discussed.
 The images and videos you used were
relevant, informative, and were great ways
to add to your webpage.
o The images helped back up the
information and points you were
trying to convey as well as the
videos. We used some of the same
ones, like your first video on your
TCM 4 tab.
 I would try adding more multimedia to your
contact and about page. Even something as
small as a picture would help add more
detail to it and make it stand out.
Maddy, you did an awesome job over the semester
creating a webpage that was both informative and
interesting. It is evident how much you care about
your student’s and how much you want them to
succeed. Your assignments were professionally
innovative and fun to learn about! My suggestion is
to add more images to places where there is a lot of
white space. Specifically, on your about and
contact page I think a few images could greatly
benefit that tab’s layout. Awesome job overall! :)