Test for WM Education

1. Rephrase the follow paragraph (10 marks)

The percentage of Americans working or looking for a job rose in October to the
highest level since August 2013, suggesting the strong demand for workers is drawing
more people into the labor force as wage growth continues. The workforce-
participation rate for those aged 25 to 54, prime working years, hit a 10-year high.

Rephrased:
In October, the number of Americans employed or seeking for a job grew to the
highest level since August 2013, indicating that increasing competition for jobs is
bringing more people to the labor force was wage growth goes on. The workforce-
participation rate reached a 10-year high for those ages between 245 to 54 years old as
the prime years of employment.

2. Identify the mistake of follow paragraph (10 marks)

In recent years, we have witnessed that prosthetics develops drastically. In search of
the most effective way to resolve the problems faced by amputees, scientists and
people in medical fields have come up with many kinds of robotic hands. It’s a
remarkable advancement for the development of this robotic hand, a prosthetic limb
that provides the natural function of a regular hand. This allows amputee to perform
various tasks in daily life. Amputations are carried out globally due to accidents, war
casualties, cardiovascular disease, tumors, or congenital anomalies. (Ruwan Gopura et
al, 2018)

Mistake should be listed here:

1) WE- use of first-person pronoun is not allowed in formal essays or reports
2) It’s- use of abbreviated form or shortcut is also not allowed in academic paper
3) In this paragraph, the citation only occurs at the end. The reader does not know
exactly when or where the information comes from the source.

3. Identify the reference form of follow ones (10 marks)

Chalmers University of Technology. (2019). The first dexterous and sentient hand
prosthesis has been successfully implanted. Retrieved October 12, 2019 from
www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2019/02/190205185204.htm
Reference form: Webpage with author (APA format)

Modern Slavery Act 2015 (c.30). London: TSO.

http://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2015/30/ contents/enacted [accessed 15 June
2015].
Reference form: Government Publication (APA format)

Coval, J., Jurek, J., & Stafford, E. (2009). The economics of structured finance.
Journal of Economic Perspectives, 23(1), 3-25.
Reference form: Book chapter (APA format)

4. Give different references for the topic “marketing mix” by MLA, Harvard
and APA (10 marks)
1) MLA: Berry, Leonard L. “Relationship Marketing of Services—Growing Interest,
Emerging Perspectives.” Journal of the Academy of Marketing Science, vol. 23,
no. 4, Sept. 1995, pp. 236–245, doi:10.1177/009207039502300402.

2) Harvard: Berry, L. L. (1995) ‘Relationship Marketing of Services—Growing

Interest, Emerging Perspectives’, Journal of the Academy of Marketing Science,
23(4), pp. 236–245. doi: 10.1177/009207039502300402.

3) APA: Berry, L. L. (1995). Relationship Marketing of Services—Growing Interest,

Emerging Perspectives. Journal of the Academy of Marketing Science, 23(4),

236–245. https://doi.org/10.1177/009207039502300402