Unit 10: Fictional Film Production

Peer-assessment

What is going well? Even better if…

Narrative The voice overs let us know that she If we had more information about
doesn’t feel welcomed in her environment what she is suffering from so
and the bullying is a good representation of
a teen coming of age

Genre conventions Good use of voice overs to shock audience

and characters

Camerawork Use of flashbacks /dream sequence

Lighting Good tones for different scenes

Editing Good use of filters and cuts Coul be faster

Sounds There wasn’t much sound interfering with There should be music in the
the recording and voice overs beginning even if its small or even a
rumble of sort to keep the audience
interested

Titles Faster titles at the beginning

Any general comments:

A few voice overs have to be added and deleted to give more information about Emma’s situation
and what is currently happening to her.

Instead of focusing on depression I will focus on Schizophrenia as the hallucinations and situation fit
more into that category than depression