Schools are longer necessary because children can get so much

information available through the internet or they can study just

as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that doesn’t need to go the schools because children can
learn at home. I completely agree that children have to acquire knowledge in the
schools brings more advantages.
On the one hand, by learning through the internet, children can get access to
many free recourses and they can learn whatever they want. Firstly, since the
children study in the internet, they can learn at their own pace. If they don’t
have time, they can learn when they are cooking. Secondly, in oder to save
money, they can learn many cources in the internet, Although you might pay
small fee for the virtual classces sometimes, you could aslo acquire English
knowledge for free in Youtube, for examble.
On the other hand, by learning in the schools, children can join in sports and
have many relasionships with their friends. Firstly, since the children study in
the schools, they aslo learn some sports such as football, basketball and
swimming. By playing the sports, the children are very healthy and relax in
their study. Secondly, in order to have many good relasionships, they should
have face-to-face classces, since the children study in the schools, they have
many friends, so they can share about their life together, and sometime they can
have peer support.
In conclusion, allways having benefits when children learn at home or face to
face classces, it seems to me that if the children go to the schools brings more
advantages.

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