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Think back to the most impressive monuments and structures that you have heard of. The
Pyramids of Egypt, the Great Wall of China, the Banaue Rice Terraces of the Philippines—all of
these are considered by many to be the manmade wonders of the world. They are awe-inspiring,
not just because of their majesty, but also because of how much work was involved in creating
them.
Have you ever heard of the saying, “Rome was not built in a day?” Whenever we see something
as massive and marvelous as the aforementioned structures, we may not realize just how long
they took to be built, how many people were involved, how many resources were used, and how
much effort was put in. All we see is the finished product. But as you see, these structures began
with a brick or stone that eventually became a beautiful building. The structure underwent a
process before it was finished.
Writing is similar to constructing a building. We may not see right away how putting two bricks
together can form a wall, or how this wall will be part of a taller structure. But as you saw in the
previous lessons, metacognitive readings strategies, using pre-writing strategies, and the first part
of the writing process are as helpful as you continue to write your critique paper. They function as
a blueprint to guide you in your writing. A blueprint alone does not make a building—its design
needs to be executed on the raw materials with which the building is built. As such, paragraphs
are the building blocks of writing.
The first line of a paragraph is usually indented. This indentation of a paragraph indicates where
the paragraph begins. Remember that you must capitalize the first word in each sentence and end
each sentence with a punctuation mark, most often a period (.).
Parts of Paragraph
1. Introduction. The first section of a paragraph; it should include the topic sentence and any
other sentences at the beginning of the paragraph that give background information or
provide a transition.
2. Body. Follows the introduction; discusses the controlling idea, using facts, arguments,
analysis, examples, or other information.
3. Conclusion. The final section; summarizes the connections between the information
discussed in the body of the paragraphs and the paragraph's controlling idea.
I. ORGANIZATION. Also known as arrangement, is achieved when ideas are logically and
accurately arranged with focus on the arrangement of ideas, incidents, evidence, or details in a
definite order in a paragraph, essay, or speech. It can be done with a recognizable plan that defines
one sentence connection to the other sentence and paragraph to the other paragraph.
Check the following paragraph arrangements and the words which are useful in securing in each
of them:
1. Chronological Order - first, second, later, before, next, as soon as, after, then, finally,
meanwhile, following, last, during, in, on, until
2. Order of Importance - less, more, primary, next, last, most important, primarily, secondarily
3. Spatial Order - above, below, beside, next to, in front of, behind, inside, outside, opposite,
within, nearby
4. Definition Order - is, refers to, can be defined as, means, consists of, involves, is a term
that, is called
5. Classification - classified as, comprises, is composed of, several, varieties of, different
stages of, different groups that
6. Process - first, next, then, following, after that, last, finally
7. Cause and Effect - Causes: because, for, since, stems from, one cause is, one reason is,
leads to, causes, creates, yields, due to, breeds, for this reason // Effects: consequently,
results in, one result is, therefore, thus, as a result, hence
8. Comparison and Contrast - Similarities: both, also, similarly, like, likewise, too, as well as,
resembles, correspondingly, in the same way, to compare, in comparison, share//
Differences: unlike, differs from, in contrast, on the other hand, instead, despite,
nevertheless, however, in spite of, whereas, as opposed to
9. Listing - the following, several, for example, for instance, one, another, also, too, in other
words, first, second, numerals (1, 2, 3...), letters (a, b, c...)
10. Clarification - in fact, in other words, clearly
11. Summary - in summary, in conclusion, in brief, to summarize, to sum up, in short, on the
12. Example - for example, for instance, to illustrate
13. Addition - furthermore, additionally, also, besides, further, in addition, moreover, again
When ideas are organized well, a text can achieve Coherence, Cohesion, and Unity.
Coherence – occurs when ideas are connected at the conceptual level
Cohesion – connection of ideas at the sentence level
Unity – achieved when a composition contains one focused idea
II. A. COHERENCE. Refers to the overall sense of unity in a passage, including both the main
point of sentences and the main point of each paragraph. A coherent passage focuses the reader’s
attention on the main ideas and the specific people, things, and events you are writing about.
II. B. COHESION. It is also a very important aspect of academic writing because it immediately
affects the tone of your writing. Cohesive writing does not mean just “grammatically correct”
sentences; cohesive writing refers to the connection of your ideas both at the sentence level and
at the paragraph level. Cohesion is important because it allows writers to make multiple references
to people, things, and events without reintroducing them at each turn. If we had to repeat every
time we wanted to refer to them, the text would be very tedious to read.
Techniques to improve paragraph cohesion:
A. Transitions. Use a conjunction or conjunctive adverb to link sentences with particular logical
relationships.
To Specify Sequence > again, also, and, and then, besides, finally, first . . . second . . . third,
furthermore, last, moreover, next, still, too
To Specify Time > after a few days, after a while, afterward, as long as, as soon as, at last,
at that time, before, earlier, immediately, in the meantime, in the past, lately, later,
meanwhile, now, presently, simultaneously, since, so far, soon, then, thereafter, until,
when
To Specify Place > above, adjacent to, below, beyond, closer to elsewhere, far, farther on,
here, near, nearby, opposite to, there, to the left, to the right
To Specify Comparison > again, also, in the same way, likewise, once more, similarly
To Specify Contrast > although, but, despite, even though, however, in contrast, in spite of,
instead, nevertheless, nonetheless, on the contrary, on the one hand . . . on the other
hand, regardless, still, though, yet
To Specify Examples > after all, for example, for instance, indeed, in fact, of course,
specifically, such as, the following example, to illustrate
To Specify Cause and Effect > accordingly, as a result, because, consequently, for this
reason, hence, if . . . then, since, so, then, therefore, thereupon, thus, to this end
To Specify Concession > although it is true that, granted that, I admit that, it may appear
that, naturally, of course
To Specify Summary, Repetition, or Conclusion > as a result, as has been noted, as I have
said, as mentioned earlier, as we have seen, in any event, in conclusion, in other words, in
short, on the whole, therefore, to summarize
B. Synonymy. If direct repetition is too obvious, use a synonym of the word you wish to repeat.
This strategy is called 'elegant variation.'
C. Antonym. Using the 'opposite' word, an antonym, can also create sentence cohesion, since in
language antonyms actually share more elements of meaning than you might imagine.
D. Pro-forms. Use a pronoun, pro-verb, or another pro-form to make explicit reference back to a
form mentioned earlier.
E. Collocation. Use a commonly paired or expected or highly probable word to connect one
sentence to another.
F. Enumeration. Use overt markers of sequence to highlight the connection between ideas. This
system has many advantages: (a) it can link ideas that are otherwise completely unconnected, (b)
it looks formal and distinctive, and (c) it promotes a second method of sentence cohesion.
G. Parallelism. Repeat a sentence structure. This technique is the oldest, most overlooked, but
probably the most elegant method of creating cohesion.
III. UNITY is achieved when a composition is focused on one idea. Unity is the idea that all parts
of the writing work to achieve the same goal: proving the thesis. Just as the content of a paragraph
should focus on a topic sentence, the content of an essay must focus on the thesis. The
introduction paragraph introduces the thesis, the body paragraphs each have a proof point (topic
sentence) with content that proves the thesis, and the concluding paragraph sums up the proof
and restates the thesis. Extraneous information in any part of the essay which is not related to the
thesis is distracting and takes away from the strength of proving the thesis. In a unified text, all
supporting ideas are relevant to the main thought. Without unity, text will be confusing.
IV. Use of Language is one of the clearest indicators of a well written text. It enables writers
to effectively communicate ideas without confusing the reader. An effective language is: Specific,
Concise, Familiar, Correct, and Appropriate
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