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2 Are these sentences for (positive about) or against Grace 21st April, 9.47 am
(negative about) shopping on the internet? Write I’m 73 and I only started using the internet last year. The worst thing
F (for) or A (against).
about shopping online is the stories you hear from people about
1 You don’t have to leave your house. stolen credit-card information. I was a bit worried at first about that.
2 It’s difficult to send things back when you’ve However, I’ve bought lots of things and had no problems at all. My
life is a lot easier, especially as I can’t drive as well as I used to.
bought them online.
3 Shops are always busy and full or people. Harry 21st April, 10.59 am
My brother buys everything on the internet. For instance, recently
4 Things usually cost less online.
he bought a £15,000 car on eBay! If you ask me, he’s mad! I had
5 It’s more interesting to go shopping in shops than a terrible experience last year. Someone got my credit-card
online. information last year from a website and bought thousands of pounds
worth of stuff. I got all the money back but it took ages.
6 It’s isn’t always safe to use credit cards online.
7 It’s easier to find reviews about things on the Daniel 21st April, 12.12 pm
internet. The best thing about shopping online is that I don’t have to go out
to the shops. In my opinion, that’s brilliant. They’re
8 You have to be at home when things arrive. always too crowded. Shopping online saves so much time! And
9 It saves energy because people don’t need to drive trouble!
to shops. Chloe 21st April, 12.48 pm
10 The internet is always open. The problem is when something stops working. You have to send it
11 You can’t see things clearly on the internet. back to the website and that’s a problem. I’ve usually thrown away
the box so I have to find a new one, go to a post office, queue up
12 You don’t always get what you ordered. ... To me, that’s just too much work!
Therefore, I generally only buy things from websites that also have a
3 Read the comments quickly. Are the people generally for
or against shopping on the internet? shop. Then you can usually take it back easily.
1 Alf 4 Harry
2 Lily 5 Daniel
3 Grace 6 Chloe
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HELP WITH WRITING
Introducing reasons; connecting Evie 21st April, 12.56 pm
words (3)
I buy almost everything online. 1 The main benefit /The worst thing is that I can do this in the middle
4 Look at the underlined phrases in of the night if I want to. I only go to shops when I have to – for some milk or bread, for instance. 2If you
the comments on page 82. ask me /Therefore, that’s perfect!
Are they introducing positive
reasons or negative reasons for Olivia 21st April, 1.34 pm
shopping online? The 3best /worst thing about shopping on the internet is that sometimes you’re not sure what you’re
Introducing positive reasons buying. You can only see a picture of things and 4for instance /therefore you’re always taking a chance
on the quality.
1 The main benefit ...
Charlie 21st April, 2.17 pm
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I used to love it. The 5problem /best thing was that everything used to come when I was out. I often
Introducing negative reasons had to wait at home all day for something to arrive. The internet is fantastic for many things.
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3 However /So, if you’re not at home all day, shopping is best done in shops!
4 Jack 21st April, 4.17 pm
5 Look at the connecting words in I don’t understand people who think shopping online is a bad idea. 7To me /If you ask, it’s the best
bold in the comments. Write them thing about the internet. And it’s a lot more environmentally friendly too. Of course, they have to
in the correct place in the table. deliver things 8so /but we used to drive to a shopping centre, so in the end, it’s easier.
contrast 1 but Will 21st April, 6.38 pm
2 Shopping online means I don’t have to listen to sales assistants! They think they know everything. 9In my
results 3 opinion /For example they usually know nothing! Online, I can read lots of reviews from real people
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and make my own decisions.
giving 5 Amelia 21st April, 8.17 pm
examples
6 I’ve given up shopping online. I often used to get the wrong things. 10For example /However, when I
giving 7 If you ask me ordered food, there were often things missing or I received a ‘similar’ product. Once they didn’t have
opinions
8 any chickens, 11so /the best thing was they sent me a huge turkey!
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7 a A website is asking for opinions on different topics. Choose two of these topics.
6 a Read some more comments Write reasons for and against the topic.
about shopping online. Match 1 Big shopping centres are better than streets of shops.
reasons 7–12 in 2 to the people. 2 Everyone should have a credit card.
Evie 3 Children should save some of their pocket money every week.
4 Children should have lessons about spending and saving money at school.
Olivia
Jack
Will
Amelia
b Write a paragraph of comment for or against two of the topics.
b Read the comments again and
choose the correct words/phrases.
● Use your notes from 7a.
● Use phrases from 5 to introduce your reasons.
● Use words/phrases from the comments in 6 to connect sentences.
● Read and check for mistakes.
● Give your comments to your teacher in your next class.
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