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Quiz
7. Choose two techniques that might be useful to you when writing to argue or persuade:
a. rule of three or listing
b. rhetorical questions
c. adding illustrations to your work
d. writing in columns
10. Using expert opinion helps you to back up an argument or persuade the reader to
your way of thinking:
a. True
b. False
LESSON 1: PRACTISE
It’s important that your writing flows from one point to the next, taking your reader through
your ideas and viewpoint. The best way to achieve this is to organise your thoughts into a
plan before you start writing. Articles and letters can be planned in the same way, but
speeches are a little different.
TASK:
‘Teenagers should be encouraged to get part-time jobs as soon as they turn 16.’
Write an article for your school magazine arguing for or against this statement.
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duction
raph 2: FOR - part-time work gives teenagers financial independence from their parents
raph 3: FOR - part-time work gives you something for your CV and helps with college inte
graph 4: AGAINST - working will give you less time to study and may impact grades
graph 5: FOR - introduces you to new people and improves communication skills
lusion - Overall I am FOR
TASK:
Write a speech for your local community advising them on how they can improve
facilities at the local park.
Speech
Introduction: Ladies and Gentleman, thank you for having me here today...
Paragraph 2: Problem 1 with the park is...
Paragraph 3: Problem 2 with the park is...
Paragraph 4: Solution 1 to make park better
Paragraph 5: Solution 2 to make park better
Conclusion: We won’t improve unless we all work together
By spending time planning, the students’ work will flow better and appear to be better crafted.
2. Using the models above, plan responses to the following tasks. Use a separate sheet
of paper for this.
a. ‘Schools should offer more trips abroad so that pupils can experience the
world.’ Write an article for a broadsheet newspaper arguing for or against this
statement.
b. Write a speech for Year 9, persuading students to take part in an upcoming
school trip to France.
3. The way you use paragraph openings also helps to guide your reader through your
writing. For example:
• However
• Firstly
• While
• Secondly
• Finally
• Nevertheless
Choose the best opener for the sentences below. You cannot use the same opener more
than once:
a. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . some people believe that part-time jobs for 16-year olds are
a
. great
idea.
QUESTION:
Write an article for your local newspaper persuading people to spend time in your
area over the summer months.
A student responding to the above question noted the following in her plan:
the area has the best collection of WW2 weapons anywhere in Eng
e area said they wouldn’t go anywhere else in the summer.
play park.
Remember:
The examiner isn’t going to take marks away or check up on your facts and statistics. In
fact, they expect you to make things up to support your point-of-view.
1. Plan a selection of facts, opinions and statistics for the following writing tasks. Use the
space below for this task.
a. ‘It’s not the location, but the people that make a good holiday.’
Write an article for a broadsheet newspaper in which you argue for or against this
statement.
b. Write an article for your local newspaper persuading people to spend time
in your area over the summer months.
c. Write a speech for Year 9 students advising them on the importance of studying
in advance for exams.
d. Write a letter to a potential employer persuading them to let you complete
work experience with their company.
PRACTISE
Articles often establish a friendly tone and address the reader using language such as ‘you’,
‘us’, or ‘our’, to persuade them to agree and make them think the focus of the article is
shared.
1. Read the opening to the articles below and highlight the following language devices:
a. rhetorical question
b. inclusive pronouns such as ‘you’, ‘us’, ‘our’, ‘we’
c. listing
d. formal and informal language
Text A
Most of us living in this area are aware of the problems that have arisen in the play
park in the last year or two. People regularly report damage and vandalism of the
swings, slides and play area as well as the fires that have been started in the bins.
We are aware there is a lack of areas for older children and teenagers to meet and
‘hang out’, and therefore they congregate in the play park and other areas of the
park that aren’t intended for them.
We want to change all of this and provide a useable play park for the area, as well as
a space for our teenagers. However, we need you to help us achieve this. I’m sure
you’re fed up with the state of things as they are, but are you willing to offer financial
support or time? Or can you offer something else useful to the cause?
Text B
I think it’s fair to say that I love food. Indeed, to those of you who’ve followed my
reviews over the years, it may seem ridiculous to even say it, so obvious a truth is it.
Yet I’ve noticed recently, in my inbox, a growing number of outraged responses to the
negative reviews I occasionally write – almost as if I should be grateful for any food I
am served.
But, dear readers, this is what I do! I am paid to be honest: the fact that I love food does
not mean that I love restaurants. Usually, I’m fortunate enough to eat a decent meal
with decent service for a decent price, information which I share with you gladly.
Occasionally, however, I visit a restaurant that charges an arm and a leg for food that
you’d amputate your own arm and leg to avoid eating. And I write about it, truthfully,
so that you don’t have to waste your hard-earned money on trying it yourself. You’re
welcome.
2. Articles should also have catchy headlines, and this offers a good opportunity for you
to show your examiner that you understand what form you’re writing in.
What headlines would you come up with for the two articles above?
Text A
Text B
3. Because articles are usually written from one person’s point-of-view, they use persuasive,
argumentative or descriptive techniques to persuade the reader to agree with them and
to set the tone of the article.
Complete the grids of language techniques as demonstrated below, using your own examples
from a made-up article about a sporting event.
Technique Hyperbole
Sporting Example
Technique Rhetorical question
Sporting Example
Technique Repetition
Sporting Example
Technique Anecdote
Restaurant Example ‘The next day, after a late night at work, I stopped off for a
kebab down the road from my house, where the tables are
plastic and there’s fly-paper behind the counter, and by
golly, did I enjoy it.’
Sporting Example
Technique Formal and informal language
Restaurant Example ‘I ate my meal – it was steak, once I’d scraped off the
honey- and-olive sauce it came smothered in.’
Sporting Example
Description Words that speak directly to the reader and include the writer
or speaker: ‘us’, ‘our’, ‘we’, etc.
Restaurant Example ‘We are aware there is a lack of areas for older children
and teenagers to meet and ‘hang out’.’
Sporting Example
APPLY
Answer the questions below and check your response against the Tips for Success. Use a
separate sheet of paper for this task.
Organisation
• The text should have an effective structure.
• The writing is engaging with a few connected ideas.
• The overall piece is written in paragraphs with good organisation.
1. ‘Schools should offer more trips abroad so that pupils can experience the
world.’ Write an article for a broadsheet newspaper arguing for or against this
statement.
2. Write an article for your school newspaper persuading students to take part in an
upcoming school trip.