My essay:

The diagram indicates the process of how

wood pellets are produced, including 7
steps, started with the transportation of
sawdust from sawmill to packing and
selling of finished pellets.
At the first stage, employees transport
sawdust remaining from cutting wood in
the sawmill to manufacturing place. After
that, with a hammer mill, sawdust is
pounded into fibres with uniform length
before fibres are dampened with steam.
Following this step, wet fibres are forced
to go through holes in a pellet machine to
form into pellets. Now, pellets are ready
to be cooled and undergo some more
steps before being sold.
Once the pollets are cooled, they are
vaccumed to remove the loose dust
loose dust is vacuumed off so that the
pellets can be clean as much as possible.
The final steps is to pack pellets into 40
pound bags, which weigh 18 kilo for
selling them. Wood pellets which are
produced by this 7-step process can be
used suitably in either pellet stoves or
pellet furnaces.

What I learn from this Writing:

 Including some more machines
used to made the pellets so that
the examiners can know how
many machines are involved in this
process.
Vocab:
Damp (a): slightly wet, often in a way that
is unpleasant

 The cottage was cold and damp.

Model essay from Barron Book:
Wood pellets are a type of fuel used for
heading buidings. They are made from
sawdust. The manufacturing process takes
several steps and uses several different
types of machines.
The first machine that is used is the
hammer mill. When the sawdust arrives
from the sawmill, it is put into the
hammer mill. There, the sawdust is
hammered into fibres. The fibres are all
the same length. The fibres are then
dampened with steam, and they are ready
for the next machine. It is called the pellet
machine. This machine forms the damp
fibres into pellets by forcing them through
holes.
After the pellets come out of the machine,
they are cooled. The cool pellets are
vaccumed to remove the loose dust.
Finally, the finished pellets are packed
into 18-kilo (40pound) bags. They are then
ready for sale. They can be burned in
either a pellet stove or a pellet furnace to
heat any kind of buiding.