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1. The disadvantages of the Internet
In modern life, people have gradually asserted the importance of the
internet. And it’s always a hotly discussed topic. Many people are trying to
analyze negative effects of Internet useage. My writing will critically look into
the drawbacks of the Internet.
First of all, what is the Internet .The Internet is the global information system
that is accessible to computers together. Besides the benefits that the
Internet brings, it also contains many negative effects (Lặp ý với đầu
bài) .Using an excess of the Internet that it can be had various harmful
effects on your health. For example, according to a survey, 62,25% of
students often feel tired, sleeplessness, suffer from eyes diseases,… -> Đây
là hậu quả của cái gì ? Em nên viết rõ ràng ra và kết thúc bằng một câu nữa
để chốt lại đoạn văn
Secondly, the another drawback of the Internet is affecting our learning
process. Many students accessing the Internet everyday(abusing the
internet / getting addicted to )will not have time for their homework.As a
result, they will be criticized by their teachers, then, students feel bored.
Eventually, their results at school will be worse ( get bad results rồi mới bị
criticized )
Not only does it affect your health, future and career of students, but also it
leads to society’s vices. According to the authorities, nearly 50% of the
crimessuch as robbery ,.... are related to social networks. This is an alarming
number. They quit school, stole money to pursue online games on the
Internet.
In conclusion,the abuse of the Internet certainly has many unwanted
elements that affect our life. However, if we know how to use the Internet
safely and effectively, it will bring many valuable benefits ( the benefits will
outweight the disadvantages )
The disvantages of study aboard
Study aboard has always been one of the dreams of young people.However,
studying in a new environment, away from home always bringsabout many
disadvantages.This essay will carefully demonstrate some of my views on the
weak points of studying abroad.
To begin with, no one can deny the benefits and attractiveness that studying
aboard brings, but it also has a lot of disadvantages.The first difficult when
studying aboard is the high cost.The cost of travelling, accommondation in
foreign nations can be much more expensive denpending on the
countrycompared with in their hometown. Therefore, the issue of reasonable
spending should be on the top.However, students who receive the
scholarship, it is not entirely difficult. ( chỉ nói về drawbach thôi nhé )
Another disadvantage of studying aboard ( studying oversea ) is language
barrier. It is alsoa big challenge for international students. Many students have
good language skills in their country, but they do not communicate much so
they cannot avoid being surprised when they receive lectures and
communication or communicate . At first, students feel discouraged when they
do not understand what people are saying and neither are people. It takes a
while to learn and get acquainted before you can catch up your life, this time
long or short depending on your efforts, abilities.-> đoạn này hơi dài
Besides,living in the another country,away from home ( lặp từ ) can make you
feel homesick. You will also have to manage yourself to be able to live, study
and work well, take care of yourself and learn to be independent. In
additionally, you cannot return immediately if your home have any emergency
that needs you to go home.
Taking everything into consideration, studyingoversea still has some
limitations, besides the benefits that it brings. So, think carefully and make
sure you want to study abroad.
Tran Thi Van
1) Children should do housework
It is a hotly discussed topic whether children should be required to do
household tasks or not. Some people think that they had better spend time
studying or playing with friends, whereas others encounter the idea that children
need to get involved in doing housework. From my point of view, I am strongly
convinced by the latter’s point.
To begin with, children can learn more skills from doing housework. They will be
better in doing simple chores such as doing the laundry or cleaning the floor. As
a consequence, they are equipped to take care of themselves once they finally
move out in the future. These are essential things that are not taught at school,
so they have to learn at home.
Another point is that household chores help children reinforce responsibility
and self-reliance. Giving children household tasks can make them understand
that every member in the family is responsible for doing housework. Some tasks
that personally affect the children should be done by them so that they will
become more self-reliant.
Last but not least, helping with housework is one of the best and most
meaningful ways for children to show their love and respect to parents. Thanks to
children’s help, parents can have more time to rest and relax after hard-working
days. Family will also have more time to talk together, which strengthens the
relationship among family members.
In conclusion, it is my firm belief that children ought to do housework to not only
to prepare better for their future but also put the family members closer together.
2) Studying English in a speaking country is the best but not the only way.
Nowadays, when English has become an international language, the demand
of studying it is increasing considerably. Many people have the opinion that
learning English in a speaking country is the best way, although it is not the only
one. From my perspective, I completely agree with this idea.
On the one hand, it is the best option to study English in a native country.
When going to an English speaking country, people can have more chances to
talk with native speakers. As a consequence, their skills, especially listening and
speaking, will be much improved. For example, learners can have the native
accent if they talk to native speakers daily. In addition, native speakers can help
learners to broaden their vocabulary and grammar more quickly. Besides, living
in an English speaking country without being able to speak this language gives
people a lot of difficulties, which pushes them to try their best to learn English.
On the other hand, studying in a speaking country is not the only way to study
English ( there are various way to learn english) thanks to the development of
technology today, people are provided with much more methods to study English
well. For example, learners can study through films, music or joining an online
course. So many kinds of English teaching books are offered for people in need
to purchase and read. Moreover, many learners do not have enough time and
money to travel to a foreign language to study English, so other options are the
only choice for them.( đoạn này nên đưa ra bằng một option khác )
To take everything above in a nutshell, studying English in a speaking country
is the best way, but it is not the only option. Everyone ought to choose the way
which is most suitable for them so as to study this language better and better.