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RMIT Classification: Trusted

Advanced: Reading & Writing


Writing Feedback Cover Sheet 2: SECOND DRAFT
Student
Name: Nguyen Khanh Toan S3872103
number:
ENGL1704 May Barbree 8/1/2021
Class: Teachers: Date:
Word
548
Count:

Formatting: I would like feedback about:

I have used Arial. x


I have used font size 12 x
I have double spaced x

Student self – assessment: Underline good, OK, or need to improve for each area.

Response & Revision Grammar


OK
A full description OK Range of structures
Correct sentence OK
Used teacher feedback structure, subject
OK
to improve verb agreement and
punctuation
Structure & Planning Vocabulary
Logically ordered, OK OK
cohesive (linking words, New vocabulary
pronouns)
Made and followed a OK Spelling & Word OK
plan. Forms

I confirm this is my own work………………………Toan……………………………


RMIT Classification: Trusted

Advanced: Reading & Writing


Nguyen Khanh Toan
S3872103
Engl1703

Evaluate a public place. Suggest how it could be made more appealing

Words: 548

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