Topic : Some people believe that success in life comes from taking

risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful

planning.
In your opinion, what does success come from?

There is a controversial issue as to whether how to achieve success. It

is thought by some that we should take risks for being successful, while
others think that measured planning is the key factor to reach those
successes. From my perspective, I would advocate that such a view
should be equalized for several justifications
On the one hand, taking chances appears to be one of the most
significant elements to achieve goals. Risk-takers maybe those who
know how to grasp themselves opportunities. Reality has revealed that
there are ample circumstances in which they could fail due to a lack of
chances. As a result, people should have bravery and confidence to face
risks and achieve their objectives in the foreseeable future.
Simultaneously, risk-takers are intelligent and innovative people who
dare to take chances since they have sufficient unique ideas and plans.
Should the plan carry out, others will begin to notice and be drawn to
their ideas and production, and they will soon be able to earn a lot of
money. For example, in 2005 Steve Jobs created the Ipad tablet which
was a newly launched commodity at that time. Despite the danger of
failure, he took the risk of publishing the product to the world and in the
end, the tablet became a worldwide sensational device
On the other hand, another aspect worth mention is that the
efficient way to reach success is through ( qua những) excellent
quantifiable and precise planning. It may be asserted that in order to take
new steps in life or to develop a new product strategy, people should
have a good feasibility study and proper planning. In this way, they
would already anticipate and mitigate the risk should the plan have any
failure. Furthermore, setting a measured strategy teaches them to know
how to manage their budget and time better, which allow them to assess
their objectives more deeply and take charge of their own realistic goals
In conclusion, I believe in the combination of both ideas because
people have to have dreams and ambitions in their life to achieve their
success through making action plans and accept risks

Appear to be one of the most significant element to ….. : là một nhân tố

quan trọng để
Goal= target= achievement = objective
Attract to = drawn to : thu hút
Quantifiable = measured = prepared
feasibility study: nghiên cứu khả thi