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Moreover, at night, the water in the low-level reservoir passes through the power station, Commented [ielts5]: that is transmitted through (The
where the turbines pump the water into the high-level reservoir. expression was inadequate in expressing your views; so, it
has been rephrased. The replaced expression is a way better
expression, as it explains the things properly)
To sum up, we could say that the reversible turbines in the power station, operate as a
generator during the day, while at night it serves as a pumper. Commented [ielts6]: (The punctuation has been incorrectly
used here as it is not required. So, omit it.)
166 words For better understanding please explore the link given
below:-
https://www.myenglishpages.com/site_php_files/writing-
punctuation-tips.php
Evaluation:
Commented [ielts7]: they serve (Incorrect pronoun is used
Great to see your writings again, Maha.. seems you’re working hard and improving each here; so, suitable form of pronoun is written.)
For more detail, please explore this link here. Thanks
time! https://www.ieltsbuddy.com/pronouns.html
Your estimated score is:
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Cohesion and
Overall Task Response Vocabulary Grammar
Coherence
All these points have been explained in comments. So, revise all the related comments.
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Finally, always remember that practice make perfect! So, keep it up!
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