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ANALYSIS
English as First Language (0500)
Syllabus of year (2023-2025)
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ANS) Modern libraries have become well-lit and less tight with relation to space,
also the layout of the bookshops has been revamped by architects to give it a
more modern feel. Moreover, the books have been well categorized on shelves
and variety of neoteric applications have been implemented to navigate
through the store as well as check for the availability of books easily. These
book shops have also started to retail variety of different things along with
books and they are striving to provide a hospitable environment too.
Nevertheless, these book shops had been traditional and their layouts
haphazard. Although they lacked customer friendliness, they evolved to level up
with the demands of e books.
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Literary Techniques
1. Anecdote:- a small piece of narrative about something that is being
discussed. If a group of people are discussing about what faux pas are
and then someone comes up with their account of such an incident, then
it is an anecdote. It is also called ‘a story with a point’
Example:- I remember once….
4. Using the five senses:- sound, sight, smell, taste and feel, these allow
the reader to gain an insight and experience the scenarios vicariously.
Example:- the booming torrent of ginormous alpine snow clipped us against
the bone chilling snow.
1. It is advisable to first read, understand and then mark out the key
words from the passage after reading the question. If the passage is
just read to find answers to particular questions, then you might not
understand the gist of the passage and important points may be
skipped out of haste. Thoroughly read text c as you must understand it
fully and to be on par with. The short answer task, writer’s effect task
and lastly the directed writing task are all dependent on text c.
2. First part of the question is to find terms or sentences from the
passage that match the underlined sentences/words of the questions.
Secondly, explain the implicit meaning of terms with respect to the
passage. Finally, you will have to explain what sort of impression the
writer delivered from a small extract of the passage. For Q2c choose a
kind of text that will enable you to analyze in depth and give 3
different points for the answer.
3. For question 2c three points/explanations should be written for any
one of the chosen ideas from the extract, that is powerful enough to
interpret it in 3 different ways. Those 3 points should explain the
implicit meaning of the words and what affect did it have on you/what
did you make of it? It is also good to write the point you have chosen
as quotation.
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Q2) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea
as the words underlined:
ai) A lot of the books in the store seem to be from the ancient past.
ANS) Books have the look of antiquity.
bi) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by underlined
words:
I was unemployed, a result of the great food-chain contraction sweeping
through the country, leaving bankrupt burger chains and shuttered sushi
empires in its wake.
ANS) shuttered:- the sushi restaurants had closed down forever.
2c) Use one example from the text below to explain how the writer
suggests what the narrator thinks about the burger bun. Use your own
words in your explanation.
The job I’d lost was at the corporate headquarters of a very new,
company. It wrote software to design and bake the perfect burger bun:
smooth crunchy skin, soft interior. It was my first job out of art school. I
started as a designer, making marketing materials to explain and
promote this tasty treat: menus, diagrams, and posters for store
windows.
ANS) The narrator is trying to explain the texture of a quintessential burger
bun and imply how appetizing the external appearance of the bun is by
saying that it is ‘crunchy’ and too tempting to resist.
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1. The text should begin with a definite overview of what the writer is trying to
explain, and it begins with (the overall effect of the language...). Secondly, the
following paragraph should include the 3 points from text c, related to the Q
and the beginning of this paragraph should be like according the PQC method
(The writer begins by implying/ analytical verb...) Also, for the next 2 points
you should write ‘the writer then proceeds to describe/ the writer goes on to
describe/the writer then paints a picture of...’ Finally, the same procedure
should be followed for the 2nd bullet point of the Q.
2. The PQC method stands for Point; what the author has done, Quote; use
quotation marks to write citations, Connotation; the feeling it invokes on the
reader and analyze the text well. This is the way you will write the selected
point from text c, also it doesn’t matter the order in which you use the PQC
method.
Example:- ‘he spitted blood and his face contorted spitefully because of a
facetious joke’
ANS) The author seems to paint a rather volatile and vehement picture of Mr.
Harris’s temperament due to the use of the idiom ‘spitted blood’ and the
association of the descriptive adjective ‘contorted’ with his facial expression.
This instills a frightening as well as a temperamental image of Mr. Harris in
the mind of the reader.
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Example:- [QP12/M/J/2020]
2d) Paragraph 1 begins ‘Lost in the shadows’ and is about what Clay sees and
feels as he climbs the ladder. Explain how the writer uses language to convey
meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of
words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices
should include the use of imagery.
The narrator, Clay, is young and talented, but struggling to find a new job. After
months of searching, including walking the streets each day looking for
advertisements in shop windows, he finds just one job to apply for.
‘Lost in the shadows of the shelves, I almost fall off the ladder. I’m exactly
halfway up. The floor of the bookstore is far below, the surface of a planet I’ve
left behind. The tops of the shelves loom high above. It’s dark up there – books
are huddled together, not letting any light through. The air might be thinner, too.
I think I see a bat. I’m holding on for dear life, one hand on the ladder, the other
on a shelf, fingers pressed white.’
ANS) The overall effect of the language established by the writer is clearly
exaggerative and scrupulous of the conditions of a rather cramped library in
which it seems like he has been transferred to a new dimension due to the
existence of an overwhelming number of books. The writer begins by implying
that Clay is far from human reach as he uses the hyperbole ‘left the planet
behind’ as he toiled up the sizeable bookshelf, this frames an image of Clay
being all alone and stranded among books. The writer then proceeds to paint a
picture of Clay being threatened and towered over by the insurmountable
bookshelves by personifying bookshelves with the use of ‘loom’. This evinces
Clay is easily intimidated by something so mundane and he is of a timid
personality. Finally, the writer ends with a descriptive adjective ‘white’ relating
to his finger, as he fights to maintain his balance on the ladder. This leaves
room for the reader to speculate as Clay’s body language is indicative of
trouble.
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1. Each type of writing style has its own feature/format that must be kept
in mind when attempting the question.
2. Five ideas must be written by
Writing Level 5 [9–10 marks]
rewording appropriate words/
• Effective register for audience and purpose. The
sentences for each of the three language of the response sounds convincing and
bullet points as the reading task consistently appropriate.
is for 15 marks and these points • Ideas are firmly expressed in a wide range of
can be found from anywhere in effective and/or interesting language.
the text. If for 1 of the bullet • Structure and sequence are sound throughout.
points, the number of ideas are • Spelling, punctuation and grammar almost always
less then make it up for, in the accurate.
next bullet point.
3. Do not pick up sentences or
words from the paragraphs if they have synonyms, the only thing that
must be conveyed is the reworded idea.
4. Suitable sentence structure and stylistic choices must be used based
on the tone and purpose.
5. It is advisable to read the bullet points first and mark out the key words
for reference then procced onto the reading task and mark out the
sentences for each bullet point and write paragraphs (body) of equal
length.
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Ohh! My knees still throbbed with pain, yet it was worth the onerous expedition. A group of
adventurers and I had dared to venture out into the wilderness to discover the lost mining city
that stood upon the rough and sharp terrain of mighty mountains; I had most possibly never seen
anything like them before. To be honest, we only reached our destination until we toiled through
green foliage, pools of dirt-filled water and finally, intermittent patches of greenery. Nevertheless,
as we closed in, the damp mountains gleamed as strongly as the purest of diamonds because of
rain, sunset, and the intense color of the mountain rocks. This view was made even more scenic
due to a rainbow that emerged from the mountain top. What a view it was! The next day we tried
to climb the ginormous cliffs that seemed to cast a dull black shadow on my hopes of reaching the
summit.
Newspaper report:-
1. The report should begin with an unforgettable title and the first paragraph should give
brief information about the story and must answer the 5 W which are:- who is it about?
what is it about? where did it happen? when did it happen? and why did it happen? The 3
paragraphs relating to the 3 bullet points should be broken down into smaller paragraphs
as newspaper reports are written in short paragraphs.
2. As this is a newspaper report it should be formal in writing and any description provided
should be written as reported speech and should not lack objectivity.
3. Written in third person and past tense. Names of people can be used along with
quotations of whatever they have described in text c
4. Both in direct and reported speech must be used along with embedded clause
5. The key points from the comprehension can be explained in your own words along and a
few assumptions can be made regarding them.
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Example:- [QP 21/M/J/2015]
Formal report:-
1. The report begins with a suitable heading followed by an overview of entire
text c which will answer the 5 W and then the subheadings for each bullet
point if you want to.
2. Write in third person if asked to and no exaggerations should be used. Must
be objective in nature with almost no emotive language used. Quotations
should also be used to write others viewpoint.
3. Use of time connectives like (firstly, secondly, lastly, afterwards, later,
earlier, shortly, eventually, last week, yesterday & meanwhile) references to
dates can be used.
Example:- all the 3 bullet points are mentioned in writing [QP 22/O/N/2013]
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1. Types of stylistic devices used are:- Alliteration is used to get the reader’s
interest and present the headline of the article. The rhetorical question in the
opening paragraph encourages the reader to challenge the topic.
The subheadings direct the reader through the text which draws the reader’s
attention. Also, use of hyperbole, and colloquial sayings is to produce a lively
and interesting article.
2. Magazine articles are similar to formal report, but they are much more informal
in tone. They also use colloquial words and anecdotes.
3. Write suitable heading, subheadings for each paragraph, beginning, body and
end.
4. The tense should be a mixture of past, present, and future, depending upon
the event given.
Example:- [QP11/m/j/2020]
Speech writing:-
1. The usual number of paragraphs will be written along with a suitable
beginning and end.
I. Beginning:- today we are here to…or imagine/what if or a rhetorical Q.
II. End:- a quote or metaphorical phrases or rhetorical Q or repetition of a
catchy phrase from beginning or a thank you.
2. Address the audience with ‘you’ or address them as a group 'trainees,
colleagues,’ etc.
3. Use present tenses
4. Use anecdote and rhetorical questions with a variety of different stylistic
choices
Example:- [QP13/m/j/2020]
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ANS) My company, General Dexterity aims to diminish the toil taken by humans
involved in large scale and monotonous industrial activities that are rather, well
suited for robust machines. A thunderbolt, my company logo, dons the state-of-the-
art robot arms that encompass the entire span of my underground base, which was
formerly a car park, this initiative aims to promote environmental awareness.
Nevertheless, besides from mass producing robots, me and my team of computer
programmers strive round-the-clock in our high-tech offices emanating with optic
fibers, all to enhance the software powering the machines.